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Isn’titanunwrittenruleintheindustrythatnewgachacharacterswithgoodperformanceshouldnotbemalecharacters?Thetutorialdoesn’tstartuntil10yearslater.Collapse

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WelltheconceptforthisnovelisuniquethenmanyotherVRnovelasothermostlymultiplayerVRbutthisislikesingleplayerVRlikegensinimpact.Nowiflikegensinimpactifotherplayerscanjoinotherplayersonthereworlditwouldbenice

#panic#chapters41to43missing

actuallynice,albeitatadplainsofar

Iwasgoingtodoanevaluationbuttheguybelowhasalreadydoneit.RankC.Obs:Don'tforgettodownvoteme╰⁠(⁠ ⁠･⁠ ⁠ᗜ⁠ ⁠･⁠ ⁠)⁠➝

outofcuriosity,whatISyourratingsystem?xDlike,givemeanexampleofanovelforeachsortaletter.Ifyouwantto!JustkindacuriouswhataCmeanshere.

RanksCtheyareworksthatarebetweenrubbishandaverage,the+NoCmeansthatithassomepotential,the-NoCmeansthatIdonotseemuchpotentialinthework

Ithoughtyourreviewwassohorrendouslybadthat62peoplehadtodownvoteit,butthenIclickedreadmore.

lolthat'sthebadthingabouthavingabadreputationhaha

Youliterallyaskedtobedownvoted

asoulforanothersoul

Thisisthefirsttimeiseesomanydislike,lolYoudon'tfollowtrendsyoucreatethem

Examseason,sohere'saquickfive-chapterreview.Thetagisn'ttherebecausethescenesaren'tanywherebuttheauthor'spatreon,butthisisverymuchan18+novel,soletthatrealignyourexpectationsbeforedivingin.Thepremiseisalrightsofar,andtheMC'sokay;blandinmyopinion,andhedoesn'treallyseemthetypeI'denjoyreadingabout,buthehasadistinctpersonalityandthatworks,evenifIfeelhe'sabitdull.Thewritingis-choppy.There'slotsofexpositionandtheprosedoesn'tflowsomuchlikegentlewaterasitdoeslikepebblestumblingdownacliffside.It'snotbadper-say,butIcanimagineitgettinggratingthemoreyouread.There'slotsoftellingwithverylittletobreakitup,andthenarrationitselfisn'tentertainingenoughtomakeupforthat.Still,it'salotbetterthanIwasexpecting,withreadablesentencesanddecentdescriptions.Thedialogueisjustfine;theusualsortamessybanterthatprobablyreadsbetterintheoriginallanguage.Thecharactersthemselvesaredistinctsofar,whichmakesupforthat,butwhetherornottheyremainone-notestereotypesorareimprovedbeyondthat;it'shonestlykindaimpossibletotell.We'veseenthepremisebeforeandtheworldisyourstandardVRthing,sothisisastorythat'llprobablydependontheactualplotdevelopmentandhowthatsimpleideaisdeveloped.I'dsaythecharacterswouldcarrythis,butIcan'timagineanyofthecharactersintroducedthusfarbeingabletodothat.Overall,alotbetterthanIwasexpectingittobe,butsortofhamperedbythewritingstyleandtheboringmaincharacter.Giveitashot,asolidhigh-6ishoutoften,mightreacha7ifitimproves.Mysynopsis;NPC-VRnovelwiththeMC'smaingoalbeingescape.Strengthdevelopmentprobablywon'tplayabigpartfortheMChimselfandthereissomesortofsystemthathasn'tdonemuchexceptgivehimquestsandrewards.Seeminglymightgivehimaccesstomoreandmore'player'abilities.Noconsequencestoturningthesystemdownsofar.Smart-ish,powerfulMC,plusatowertoclimbexcepttheyaren'tstuckinsideit.Giveitashotifthatsoundslikeyourthing!

'quick'TLDRneartheendya'll.

TLDR??

=TooLong,Didn'tReader.

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Ohkiwillbereadywhenyougethisupdate...Maythissoulrestinpieces