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WithaPowerunknowntotheNinjaWorld,Kozukitravel'stotheNinjaWorldandleftalegendthat...Readmore

WithaPowerunknowntotheNinjaWorld,Kozukitravel'stotheNinjaWorldandleftalegendthatspreadthroughoutgenerations.Collapse

System,MaleProtagonist,Fanfiction,Naruto,Bleach,OnePiece,WeaktoStrong

Wow,whatadissapointment.

Alrightillwriteareviewsincenooneelsehas.Welltheideaofthenovelisreallygoodhoweveritsbadlyexecuted.Onlyprotothisnovelisaninterestingsystem.Firstofalltheauthormakesshanksseemcompletelyoverpoweredwithonlylike20%ofhispower.Likehekilledajoninat5whichmakeszerosenseconsideringhecanonlyslashaswordanddoesntusechakra.Thenhisteamwhichissupposetobe2guysonegirl,istwogirlsoneguyandthegirlsliterallyjustbootlickhim.Itfeelsliketwouselessbaggagecheerleadersarearoundhiminsteadofanactualteam.Alsotheauthormakesthenineyearoldgirlsconstantlyblusharoundlikeathirtyyearoldreincarnatedman.Likeeveryinteractionisjustthemblushingandhimpettingtheirheads.Andthentheauthoraddsintheirinnerdialogueofjustflatteringthemcandhowmuchtheylikehim,whichdoesntaddtothestoryinanyway.Thenwhenevertheyactuallygetintocombatsituationsthegirlsarealwayslikenoyoucantfightjustleaveittous,whichonceagainruinstheflowofthestory.Likethemchasthestrengthofakageat9andhastwogeninstotakecareof.Anywaysotherthansexualisingunderagedgirlstheauthordoesntknowthedifferencebetweenknewandknowandtheirandthere.Thentheinteractionsbetweenhisfriendsareextremelyforcedwelloneexampleisduringthemeetupthingbeforethewar.likeeveryonemeetsuptoseeeachotheroffthenhesneaksoffsohedoesnthavetoseethepartingbuttheneveryonerunsovertoseehimofflikebruh...Theyjustdrankjuiceandatewhytfdidtheystayovernight.Anyonethatsaysthisisagoodread,theirfirstlangaugeisdefenitlynotenglish.MyfinalcringethoughtthatjustappearedasIwasremeniscingishowthemcsaidIwilldoanythingtoprrotectthatsmile,whenhewaslookingatanineyogirlwhichisonceagainprettyweird.

Thisisactuallytheauthor'sfirstbook,Ireadhisotherbooksandhelearnedhislessonanddidnotsexualizekids.TbhI'mstillreadingitrnitsprettyfun.Here'sthetitleonwebnovel;Naruto:AokijiYukiP.s:hedoesnotturnintoAokijilikethisnovelwheremcbecameshanks.

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Review???

Whattheheck?!Narutowithbleach'sphoto

Yes..BecausehispowerisfromOnePiece'sShanks

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ThisisnotMTLNovel

DidIsayitwas?

No,butinMTLNovell,thisisatraditionfornovelistswhohaveacoverbutthestoryhasnotbeenuploaded.

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