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Naruto: The Template System

Author: NavyKing Genre: Adventure

WithaPowerunknowntotheNinjaWorld,Kozukitravel'stotheNinjaWorldandleftalegendthat...Readmore WithaPowerunknowntotheNinjaWorld,Kozukitravel'stotheNinjaWorldandleftalegendthatspreadthroughoutgenerations.Collapse System,MaleProtagonist,Fanfiction,Naruto,Bleach,OnePiece,WeaktoStrong Wow,whatadissapointment. Alrightillwriteareviewsincenooneelsehas.Welltheideaofthenovelisreallygoodhoweveritsbadlyexecuted.Onlyprotothisnovelisaninterestingsystem.Firstofalltheauthormakesshanksseemcompletelyoverpoweredwithonlylike20%ofhispower.Likehekilledajoninat5whichmakeszerosenseconsideringhecanonlyslashaswordanddoesntusechakra.Thenhisteamwhichissupposetobe2guysonegirl,istwogirlsoneguyandthegirlsliterallyjustbootlickhim.Itfeelsliketwouselessbaggagecheerleadersarearoundhiminsteadofanactualteam.Alsotheauthormakesthenineyearoldgirlsconstantlyblusharoundlikeathirtyyearoldreincarnatedman.Likeeveryinteractionisjustthemblushingandhimpettingtheirheads.Andthentheauthoraddsintheirinnerdialogueofjustflatteringthemcandhowmuchtheylikehim,whichdoesntaddtothestoryinanyway.Thenwhenevertheyactuallygetintocombatsituationsthegirlsarealwayslikenoyoucantfightjustleaveittous,whichonceagainruinstheflowofthestory.Likethemchasthestrengthofakageat9andhastwogeninstotakecareof.Anywaysotherthansexualisingunderagedgirlstheauthordoesntknowthedifferencebetweenknewandknowandtheirandthere.Thentheinteractionsbetweenhisfriendsareextremelyforcedwelloneexampleisduringthemeetupthingbeforethewar.likeeveryonemeetsuptoseeeachotheroffthenhesneaksoffsohedoesnthavetoseethepartingbuttheneveryonerunsovertoseehimofflikebruh...Theyjustdrankjuiceandatewhytfdidtheystayovernight.Anyonethatsaysthisisagoodread,theirfirstlangaugeisdefenitlynotenglish.MyfinalcringethoughtthatjustappearedasIwasremeniscingishowthemcsaidIwilldoanythingtoprrotectthatsmile,whenhewaslookingatanineyogirlwhichisonceagainprettyweird. Thisisactuallytheauthor'sfirstbook,Ireadhisotherbooksandhelearnedhislessonanddidnotsexualizekids.TbhI'mstillreadingitrnitsprettyfun.Here'sthetitleonwebnovel;Naruto:AokijiYukiP.s:hedoesnotturnintoAokijilikethisnovelwheremcbecameshanks. Goodread Review??? Whattheheck?!Narutowithbleach'sphoto Yes..BecausehispowerisfromOnePiece'sShanks ??????????[systemcrashed] third ThisisnotMTLNovel DidIsayitwas? No,butinMTLNovell,thisisatraditionfornovelistswhohaveacoverbutthestoryhasnotbeenuploaded. second First

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