Name: Naruto: Child of Chakra
Author: MisterImmortal

Naruto: Child of Chakra

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Thecycleofhatred.Thewilloffire.Thecurseofhatred.

Thesethreeideologiesrantheworld.SonskilltheirMother.Fathersdiefortheirsons.Friendsbecomeenemies.Onemassacrespeopletosavehisvillage,oneenslavesmightybeingsinthenameofpeace.

Butwhathappenswhenpeaceisstillnowheretobeseen,evenaftertheso-calledwisemenconstantlykeptonfailing?Whathappenswhenthewars,themurders,thebackstabbingneverstops?Whathappenswhenthepeopleinpoweraretooincompetentorignoranttoheartheplightofpeople?

Astrangeboy,withanunknownpastandamysteriousbody,whowasraisedby9powerfulbeings,awayfromthedarknessofthecivilization,willnowstandtall.Ashehasseenthetruthbeyondhisbubble.

Kindness,hehasenough,butnotallshallreceiveit.

Strength,hehasenough,butit'stimetheworldknowsit.

FollowtheJourneyofastrangeman,confusedabouthisorigin,tryingtomaketheworldbetterwithoneheadatatime.

[ThisstoryisAU.]

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