Into The Portal: Monster Invasion

Despairloomedovertheglobe.Allresourceswereexhausted,andhopewasalllost.When...Readmore

Despairloomedovertheglobe.Allresourceswereexhausted,andhopewasalllost.Whenthree-playerchessthatwilldecidethelivesof billionsof peoplewasat itszenith,a portalappearedin the sky.Monsters,biggerthanthebiggestanimal,harderthanthehardestmetalpouredoutof theabyss…Puttingasidetheirdifferences,humanityunitedto fightagainsttheircommonenemy.Buttheweaponswereineffective.Themostpowerfulweaponsof sciencecouldnotdo eventheslightestbitof damageto monsters.Whiledesperationreigned,scienceprevailed,andlaserweaponswereborn.Thefirstbloodwasspilled…Thefirstmonsterwaskilled!However,it wasn’tlaserweaponsthatallowedhumanityto winthewar,buta pieceof orbfoundin themonster’sbrain.Whensuppliedwithelectricity,theorbswouldturnintopre-determinedobjects.Theseorbsturnedintoweaponsthatcoulddamagemonsters,andthemoremonsterswerekilled,themoreweaponswerefound.Withthenewlylootedweaponsandthedeterminationof humanityto getridof thisdisease,themonsterswerepushedback.At thatmoment,a messengerflewfromtheportalin hisradiantform.An ArtificialIntelligenceproducedby thenativeracelivingin thePortalWorld…CalledMotherAI by humans,thisobjectusedthemiraclesof thealienworldto helphumanityclosetheportal.Withthesemiracles,humansawakenedsuperpowersto fightagainstmonsters.An unfortunateteenager,MilesCross,wasbornwithdormantAncientGenesandfailedto awakenhissuperpower.Instead,he usedeverymeansto getstronger…Disclaimer:Thisis a workof fiction.Names,characters,business,eventsandincidentsaretheproductsof theauthor’simagination.Anyresemblanceto actualpersons,livingor dead,or actualeventsis purelycoincidental.Collapse

ArtificialIntelligence,Dungeons,GeneticModifications,Magic,MaleProtagonist,Mythology,AgeProgression,Urban,VirtualReality,FuturisticSetting,SuperHeroes,WeaktoStrong

WarningThisnovelwasdroppedwithfinalchapbeingsummaryofplotbyauthorinstead.

Ifanyonehasaquestionaboutthenovel,Iwilldomybesttoanswerthem.Ican'talwayscheckherebutIvisitfromtimetotime.

Itwasgoodread...KeepongoingAuthor

Areyoureallytheauthor...Isthereanychanceofyoutocomebacktothisnovel,Ilikeditverymuchandhavebingeditinthelast2days,itisagreatstory.Pleasecontinueitifyoucan.

IfthiswastrulyaMMnovelitwouldbesomuchbetterbutRanobes/Panicputthewrongpersonastheauthor.ThisnovelwasmadebyGodonAHill.

Sorrytodisappointyou.

Itseitherthepaceistoosloworthebookiskindaboring,notsurewhich,butiamnotasexcitedtoreaditassomeotherbooks...Iamalsonotafanofhiddingidentityandpowers,readtoomanyofthosealready.

thisisasolidB+

Thanks!

Plotseemssimilartosupergene

SuperGeneismyfavoriteWebnovelofalltimes,andinmyfreetime,Iwantedtowritesomethingsimilar.IhaveneverdeniedthatItookinspirationfromSuperGene,thatiswhyInamedtheAIas,Coin.

#panic#TheauthorisnotMisterImmortal,ItismadebyGodonAHill.

Thanks,Isentamessage,hopefullytheywillfixit.Wewouldn'twanttodisappointpeople.

interesting,noharem...goodgoodgood.

Soisthereasystemornot?

iguessnot.

NoSystem.

Ireadabout115+chaptersofthisandjustfindareviewthatissimilaronmyopinion.Sotheshortanddirty.Thisstoryisnota10/10.It'sasolidandsafe9/10.Ipersonallyhaveafewgripes,butthatisnotthefaultoftheauthor,justmeasareader.IfyougrewupenjoyingDigimon,ZachBell,HunterxHunter,andotheryoungprotaganimesyouwillenjoythisstory.Ifyoulikeprogressionstories,orwuxias,youwilllikethisstory.Iftitlessuchas'HeWhoFightsWithMonsters'or'PathofAsension'areonesyouenjoy,youwilllikethisstory.HonestlythisisavibeofastoryI'vebeenmissingforawhlie.Thefactit'sover300chaptersmakesitevenbetter.Asanoverallsummary,thisisyourclassicMCstartsoffweak/different,finds/aquiresa'cheat'orasolutiontohisproblem,andthenbecomesatop10%fighter.Sofarwhatweareseenasareaderislimitedandnarrow.Style:TherearetimesIthinkthewritingstyleisabitbland,butnotinabadway.(Iknowthatsoundsweird)Infightscenes,thereisn'tanoverexplanaion,it'sjustenough.Iwishtherewasabitmoreenviromentaltellingincertainscenesorareas,butIunderstandthatit'snotalwaysimportant.Smells,temperatures,textures,maybeifwildlifenoisesexistornot.Thesearemissing,butnotinawaythattakesawayfromthestory.Thisisjustmebeingpicky.Overall,thewritingstylefitsthestorylikeaglove.TherehasneverbeenatimewhereIskippedoverthingsduetothewriting.Grammar:Thisoneisshort.Handfulofwrittingerrors,butagain,itnevertakesyououtofthestorybutonceortwice.Ifyourereadthesentence,youwillunderstand.Therewastwicewhereheandshewereswappedwithacharacteranditthrewmeoffreallyhard,butthat'sit.Overall,abetterspellerthanIam.Story:Okay,sooverallplot.Ifeelliketherearetimeswherethereisn'tenough.Wearetoldthatmonsterscametoourworld,butit'sveryvaugeonthetimescale.It'sjustbeen'ahandfulofyears'or'beforetheMCwasborn'yettherearetimeswhenitseemsothercharactershavebeenfightingmonstersfordozensofyears.ThatprogressioninsocietyhasbeengoingonforlongerthantheparentsoftheMChavebeenalive.Again,that'sjustaminorgripe.It'sagoodthingIwanttoknowmore,thatmeansthestoryisinteresting.Whenitcomestolore,orexplanationofpowers,thisisdonephenomoly.Thereisverylittleoverexplanations.Thingsarediscoveredslowlyandovertime.Neverhassomethingbeenexplainandthenforgotten.Lessonscomebackup,anditallowstheMCtoapplytheirknowledgecorrectly.I'mabitconfusedoncertainplotpoints,butIcantelltheauthorissettingupforsomethingsignificant.ThereisthisdamnrocktheMCbought,andhasdonezeroreasearchonorexperimetned.Heboughtitbecauseit'feltdifferent'.Wethereadersknowit'simportant,sincetheMClooksatit,orremindsushehasit.Butdoesf#ckallwithit.Character:MC,is16yearsold.Heactsmorelikea20yearoldwhohasbeen'aroundtheblock'threetimes.Hisemotionsneverifrarlygetthebestofhim.Ilikethecharacter,buthedoesnotact16.Again,thisiseasilyexplainedduetohisupbrining,andthecurrent'newworld'society.ItjustsurprisesmewhenweareremindedhowyoungtheMCis.Ifeellikeheisn'taMaryStu,butheispushingthatedge.Everyencounterthatwas'closetoendinghislife'hecomesoutofitwithapowerboost,andlittletonopunishents.Therearesometimesthatascenewasoverdetailedanditwaskindofannoyingso.....Overall3.5/5★

WhatisthesolutionthathefoundcozIhaven'tseenit

Ithinkit'sonchapter200+istoppedreadingat121becauseihavemanythingstodo.

Okay