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Afterhisparentsdied,AlexRothhadaplan:becomeawizard.Throughhardwork,hewasaccepted...Readmore

Afterhisparentsdied,AlexRothhadaplan:becomeawizard.Throughhardwork,hewasacceptedintotheworld’sgreatestuniversityofwizardry—butfatehadanotherplan.Onhiseighteenth,heismarkedasoneofhiskingdom’sfiveHeroes,chosentofighttheland’sgreatenemy.Buthisbrandis'TheFool',worstofthemarks.RatherthandieorservetheotherHeroeslikeFoolsinthepast,hepacksuphislittlesister,hischildhoodfriendandhercerberus,thenfleesfortheuniversityinhopeofrefuge,magicandtounravelthetruthabouthisland’sevil.There’sonesmallproblem:TheMarktriestoruinmagicwhileenhancingskillsoutsideofdivinity,combatandspellcraft.……thatis,unlesshecanlearntoexploitthehelloutofit.*ThisthefirsttimeIamwritingawebnoveltypestory,andIhopeyoulikeit.IlikeprogressionstoriesandI'vealwayswantedtotryandwriteonelikeafewofthewebnovelsthatinspiredme.UpdatesTues-Wed-Thur-Fri-Sat.Therearecurrently20advancedchaptersonmypatreonasathankyoutopatrons.Joinusondiscord!https://discord.gg/A4M3CzfWBnChapterswillberoughly2000-2500words.[participantintheRoyalRoadWritathonchallenge]*Rating:ThisstoryiskindoflikeaPG-13movie.There'llbegoreandsomeswearingbutnotmuchbeyondthat.Ifthatchanges,I'llwarnyou.Tone:Tonewillbeamixofsomeaction-adventurewithexcitement,comedy,sliceoflifeelementsandmystery.Iwon'tbegoingtoodarkwiththisstory.Therewillbementionsofwar,somedeath,griefandviolence.MC:MCisanalytical/rationalwithemotions.Heismostlyincontrolofthoseemotions.MCwillprogressinpower,eventuallybecomingverystrong.Whenthathappens,I'lladdtheStrongLeadtag.Fights:Fightswillbedetailed.*Stuffthisstorywon'thave:-Extremegrimdarkcontent-Murderhoboplots-Edgy,anti-heroMC-PacifistMC-HaremsCollapse

MaleProtagonist,WeaktoStrong,Academy,Strategist,AgeProgression,Magic,GameElements,LitRPG

It'snotbad,butit'snotgoodeither,it'saverageatbest.It'sa5/10

praisemrfool!!

Guesshe'sexpandingontheSefirahdomain,praiseMr.Foolindeed

hesexpandinghisinfluencetoothernovels

Rank:C-

Novelissoso,nothingtobragabout.IhadtoignoresomeofMC'sdecisionmakingandconstantplotarmortoevencontinuereading.Hisuniversitylifeisprettyboring,soifyouskippedacouplechaptershereandthereyouwouldn'treallybemissinganything.There'safewthingsIhaveabeefwith.MCshouldneverhavebroughthis10yroldsisterwithhim.LeavingherwiththeLufamilyisthemostreasonableandsaferroute.MChasbeeninalotoflifeanddeathsituationsbutwhenhegetsinterrogatedbyauthoritieshiscoolandcalmattitudeisgone,andrevertsbacktoyouraveragewimpy19yrold.TheonlygoodtraitaboutMCisheputsinthework.

Asofchapter330Thecharactersarewelldone,storyisgreatbutaslowburnformajorstuffwhichisn'tbad,romanceisbelievableandthemcisrealistic.TheMCsblessinghasupsidesbutitsdownsidesarenearcripplingandhehastofindwaysaroundittobeabletofightatall.SpoilerMCseemstohaveanadvantagewithsummoningmagicforreasonsnotyetdivulged,onlythingIfoundgratingbuthopefullytheyhavedecentreasoningbehindit.

canwegetasolidreviewhereupto300+chaps?

It'sprettydecent,acutaboveaveragewesternnovelsandisdefinitelyacutabovetheaveragecnwebnovel(toanyonewithanopinion,beforeyouexpressit,rememberthatthereissimplyMOREcnwebnovelsbothintitleandinlengthandIhopeyouunderstandhowaverageworks)

Noice

thisissomegradeAshit

doesthatmeangoodorbad?

Goodooflol

Isitmeorthetag'gameelements'iswronglyincludedinthenoveltags?Ihaven'tseenstatusscreenorsomethingsimilartoitinthenovel.

EncontroualgoquefaçapartedaTAGlitrpg?

Iminch19asofnowilikethisone.Imtiresoftheoneswherethemcdoeseverythingeffortlesslylikeamarysue.Themcheredoesfailabit,isscaredwhenfacingmonsters.Theworldbuildingisnice.thisisa4/5formebereadingonahead.letsseehowitgoes.