The Mark of the Saint flared as brightly as the noonday sun, sending Alex stumbling back, shielding his eyes.
What's happening? he cried. rzhin, whats happening?
All around the startled archwizard, ca cries of alarm.
Watchers of Roal and their fellow guards scrambled to the top of the Castle wall. From the courtyard below, people were calling to each other.
Yet, rzhinthe Saint of Thalandwas silent.
rzhin! Alex scread. rzhin, are you alright?
There was no reply, but the light grew brighter. What was it? Was it a trap? A Ravener attack?
Alexs heart was pounding.
How much did they actually know about the Marks? They had Uldars notes, but they were only partially translated. They had his journal, but his mory had been declining; he might easily have forgotten sothing important.
Clenching his teeth, Alex moved toward the light, reaching toward rzhin. If he could just find the Saint, he could teleport him to safety. Maybe he could bring him to a healer, if he needed one.
Maybe he coulddo sothinganything!
But, he couldnt see the small Heros form: the only thing he could make out was the golden glow of Uldars hand. And thats what Alex reached for.
Ill help you, rzhin! the archwizard cried. Dont worry, Im going to
Alexs hand brushed the Mark of the Saint.
Suddenly, a massive pain burned across his right shoulder, as though a tal rod had been pressed against his flesh. The Mark of the General began to blaze, though not as blindingly as rzhins symbol.
Light emanating from the Mark of the General began pulsing, throbbing rhythmically, like a beating heart. The Mark of the Saint pulsed in ti.
Alex felt a connection forming between the two Marks.
A stream of energy opened, flowing through the Mark of the Generallike a gatewaystreaming to the Mark of the Saint. For a mont, the Saints golden glow dimd.
Then, abruptly ruptured, completely vanishing in a blink, replaced by a white brilliance that dazzled the eye. The radiance reminded Alex of the light that filled Uldars sanctum andbefore his eyesthe golden hue of the Saints Mark mottled, flecking away like bits of rust bleeding from iron.
The Mark now blazed white like sunlight striking fresh snow.
A breath later, rzhins holy symbol erupted in song: singing the sa hymn as when a Hero was found. Bright light dimd, revealing rzhins face. Alex could see him clearly, his mouth was open in shock, eyes were wide and his skin was ghostly pale.
I feelI feel much different! he cried. Itsincredible!
Whats happening? Alex shouted.
But any reply rzhin might have made was stopped by a familiar voice. A voice that sent waves of revulsion down Alexs spine.
You have done well, Uldars voice whispered in his ear.
From rzhins expression, Alex knew hed heard it too.
Is that him? the General demanded. Can he be back?
No! rzhin shouted. It feels the sa as his recording! Theres nothing behind it!
You have earned my full approval, Uldar said. A new technique to enhance the Saint. Sothing from another discipline growing what you already possess. That is my way. With my second-in-command, the General, granting you his approval, I empower you fully. Go. Destroy the Ravener. Bring my will unto the land.
With that, the light faded.
Alex blinked, the afterimage of the Uldars hand still in his vision. By the Traveller! he cried. What in all hells just happened?
rzhin stood in front of him, looking shocked, but no worse for wear.
I dont know, but it felt a lot like when I first got Markedbut less painful, rzhin said.
The Saint grabbed his robe, hiking it up, revealing both his trousers and bare torso. He was unsurprisingly leanbut what was surprising was the Mark of the Saint in the centre of his stomach.
It now glowed white.
WellI didnt see that coming, Alex muttered.
neitherwho could? rzhin agreed. My soul-gate It feels stronger now and bigger. Its like my connection to Uldars divinity has beco more powerful.
Its like you were Marked all over again, Alex whispered. Ohoh that bastard.
Who? rzhin dropped the hem of his robe, looking up in alarm.
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Suddenly, Watchers converged on them from all directions, so ca bounding up the stairs, others flew from the sky, while others rushed toward them from different parts of the Castle wall.
Has sothing happened? a Watcher shouted. We saw a blinding bright light up here suddenly! Were we attacked?
Alex and rzhin exchanged a glance. No. No we werent. Everything's fine. It was justwell, well be right back.
The young archwizard touched the Saints shoulder.
They disappeared.
Alex and rzhin reappeared far from the Castle, materialising in the woods on the outskirts of Greymoor.
Gah! the Saint cried. Ill never get used to that. He touched his stomach. What in theI cant believe this.
Alex leaned against a tree, his mind racing. I cant believe it either.
I rzhin shook himself. I dont understand. Whos a bastard and The full shock of the situation seed to crash down on him all at once. What inwhat happened to ?
II think, Alex said. I think we uncovered so long-forgotten function of the Mark.
What long-forgotten function? rzhin demanded. Why is there a long forgotten function?
Thats where the bastard cos in. Alex whispered. rzhinUldar had the Marks pick people that would best suit their role, right?
Right rzhin said. We were to exemplify his strengths. But there was nothing about a forgotten function in his journal! Nothing!
I think there was, even if he didn't explicitly say it, Alex said. Like you said, each of us were supposed to exemplify Uldars different strengths. But how did he co to power? What did he do when he first realised he was strong?
Hetook his people and went exploring the world, learning different things, rzhin said. What does that have to do with anything?
He was learning, rzhin! Thats how he grew powerful!Listen, I've had this theory that the point of the General is to teach each Hero how to maximise their own potential, Alex pushed. My powers are supposed to encourage creative thinking: that's the way the power guides . Then, Im supposed to pass on that creative thinking to the other Heroes, to get them to learn like Uldar did.
I still don't understand, rzhin said.
Think about it this way: let's say Im the General, Alex pushed on.
But you are the General.
Iyes, rzhin. Yes I am, the young archwizard said, his voice strained. Okay, forget , let's say there's a differentGeneral. One who exists in the ancient past: theyve got to teach the other Heroes to gain knowledge thatll make their Marks stronger. But what if they don't want to do that? What if they dont want to learn anything new?
What do you an?
Think about it. Why do we worship Uldar? Alex asked. Out of fear of the Ravener, but also because he's supposed to be a deity that cares about us and rewards us. When Uldar changed the Mark of the General to the Mark of the Fool, he put in a limit that punishes Fools for going against what his intent was. He wouldnt be above designing the Marks to make sure the Heroes acted the way he wanted them to act.
Look, Alex spread his hands like he was showing rzhin sothing. What ifhis whole thing about the General unlocking the other Marks full potential was literal: he did say that the Heroes got weaker when the General was gone. What if there was more to it than what he said?
I still don't follow.
Okay. Uldar makes the Heroes in his own image so that they represent his traits.
Yes, that's right.
And what were the traits he most valued, besides power? Knowledge and learning, right? He uprooted all of his people so he could learn. Like I said, thats how he got so powerful.
And his church set up schools so his people could be taught, rzhin reasoned. So that they could learn, just as he did. He commanded his people to go to those schools, and commanded his priests to teach in them.
Exactly! And why wouldnt he expect the sa from his Heroes? Alex cried. So what happens if a General tries to teach the other Heroes and they all go: No thanks, I'm not interested in learning anything else. What's the General supposed to do, fight them?
Nothat would make the Heroes fall into in-fighting. But, the Heroes would need so punishnt if they refused to learn, as Uldar intendedbut wait no. If the Marks were used to punish their bearers, that would risk Heroes rebelling or fleeing. rzhins eyes were growing wider. Just as Fools fled Thaland when they were Marked. Just like you did! Er, no offence.
None taken, Alex said. So then, if the Marks weren't punishing the Heroes for not learning from the General. then wouldnt it make sense that they would reward their bearers if they did listen?
It doesso this is a reward? rzhin asked, pressing his hand to his midriff. But why are there no recorRightthere's been no General in thousands of years.
Until . And just now, I think we just inadvertently created a situation where your Mark rewards you, Alex said. I've been teaching Drestra and Cedric how to cast spells using body languageneither of them have gotten it yet. Not yet. But youI taught you a ditation technique that you used to calm your soul: you got it right away.
And calming my soul would put less strain on it when I channel divinity. rzhin marvelled, lifting his robe again. I listened to the General, learned the skill, incorporated itand therefore, my Mark rewarded .
For behaving the way Uldar wanted you to Alex muttered.
Thatdoesnt make feel better, rzhin said. There was a ti when I would have been overjoyed at acting the way he wanted to. But, I gain no joy from that now.
I get that, Alex said. But this is a new chance. Depending on what this reward is, we can use Uldars own will against him to destroy everything he's built to harm us.
Yes rzhin murmured. That. That thought calms . But what about you? You would have a reward as well, would you not?
Alex shook his head. My whole power is designed to let learn.I've been doing that this whole ti: and havent gotten a reward.
But you have not enacted Uldars will yet.
The archwizard frowned. What do you an?
Just what I said: you have not finished enacting his will, rzhin said. The people of Thaland were instructed to learn, and go to the schools. But a school without a teacher, has no purpose, andas we said earlierthe priesthoods command was to teach.
The Saint pointed at Alexs shoulder. If we are rewarded for learning
then, maybe I'd be rewarded for teaching! Alex cried. Perhaps, if I empower all of your Marks? Maybe I'll gain sothing too.
It's possible, rzhin said. As you said: Uldars mory was starting to slip. We cannot expect him to have ntioned everything in detail. He smiled then.
Tears filled his eyes, running down his face.
Whoa! Alex cried. What's wrong?
Nothing, the Saint sniffled. He looked many years younger than he really was. I'm just pleasedthat I was useful. I helped discover this. Perhaps being helpful like this was the reason I was born.
Alex shook his head. I don't know the reason why any of us is born, but I do know we get to decide what that reason is. I'd forgotten that for a while when I had the Mark of the Fool, but, its true, we get to set the path ahead of us. Were the ones who get to tell ourselves why were here. We get to say what our role is.
Perhaps the Saint said. Perhaps I will decide for myself in the future. But for now? I am happy I did this. I do not know if this will make up for what I have done, if this will be my penance, but at least it's a beginning.
His smile was broad. Co, we must tell the others our news!
And unlock more power, just like you did, Alex added. You said the flow of divinity is greater and your soul-gate is stronger: we should explore that.
Yes rzhin said. I would like to test my limits. Actually, could you do a favour?
Anything, Alex said.
The Saints eyes shone, bright and clear. Could you contact Birger for ?
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