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OurcharacterwasbornNevilleLongbottominHarryPotter.Hiscourage,hiswisdomandhisskills...Readmore

OurcharacterwasbornNevilleLongbottominHarryPotter.Hiscourage,hiswisdomandhisskillshelphimdefeatLordVoldemortandchangetheentiresagaofHarryPotter.HeisNevillethebravelion!Collapse

Fanfiction,HarryPotter,Transmigration,Isekai,MaleProtagonist,WeaktoStrong,ModernDay,EuropeanAmbience,AlternateWorld,SpecialAbilities,Magic

ThecovermakesmehateiteventhoIloveHarryPotterfanfictions

Ilikeantiheromcbutthisoneisjust...whatstheword,edgy.Alsoauthorseemstobasedhisbookonotherfanficinsteadofcannonsotheplotsoundsverynaiveforpeoplefamilarwiththestroy,afewexamples:SpoilerMCtrickedapotionguildmasterwithakidjuiceboxdosedwithveritaserumsothathe'dspillhisdarkestsecretinfrontofthewholediagonalley.MCwas5yearold!!!SpoilerMCinventedapotionthatcansafelydestroysoulinhocruxwithoutdestroyingharmingtheobjectitselfwhenhewasin1stgrade.Somethingdumbledorefailedtodo.SpoilerMCgoalinlifeistoutureandkilleverydeatheater,especiallyLestrangecoupleforharminghisparentswhomhemetforafewdays.Idontmeandontavengethembutthewayhemakehisultimategoalisweirdseeingheisatransmigrator.

Thecoverisn'tveryinteresting,thestoryisvery...howdosaythis...uhmnaive.Andthemaincharacterisverystupidandemotional,[Spoiler]Whenhewasjustborn,hewasinstantlyattachedtohisnewparents?Comeon,theirshouldsomefeelingofalienationandheisverystupid.ImeanpromisingtotortureBellatrix?Theonewhotorturedhisparents?Issuicidal,andbeatingupDracoMalfoyisaverynaivechoice.Themcdidn'tevenconsiderMalfoy'sfatherretaliating.Istoppedreadingatthispart,sinceIcan'tstomachthisverycringy,andstupidpart.WhatIwanttosaytotheauthorisyoushouldconsiderrewritingtheentirestory.

Afterseeingthatcoveridon'twannaeventryit

Why?Itlooksjolly.

Idon'tunderstandwhypicksomeonewhowasalreadyinthestory?IfyourgoingtowriteastoryintheworldofanalreadyexistedfranchisedoanOC.Thisstorywasnotgoodtoread.

ExactlyButtherearesofewOCHPfanfictionevenonfanfiction.net

ThisguyreallyreallyhatesHarryandRonforsomereasonandyoucantellinthewriting.It'ssuperimmature.Theworstauthorsaretheoneswhocan'tkeeptherebiasincheckandnotwritetheworldtobashothersexcessively.

TheWorsecoverpicIhaveseen.....

Whyaddsomethingthatwaslastupdatedamonthago?