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In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom

Author: ayrus2011 Genre: Action

OurcharacterwasbornNevilleLongbottominHarryPotter.Hiscourage,hiswisdomandhisskills...Readmore OurcharacterwasbornNevilleLongbottominHarryPotter.Hiscourage,hiswisdomandhisskillshelphimdefeatLordVoldemortandchangetheentiresagaofHarryPotter.HeisNevillethebravelion!Collapse Fanfiction,HarryPotter,Transmigration,Isekai,MaleProtagonist,WeaktoStrong,ModernDay,EuropeanAmbience,AlternateWorld,SpecialAbilities,Magic ThecovermakesmehateiteventhoIloveHarryPotterfanfictions Ilikeantiheromcbutthisoneisjust...whatstheword,edgy.Alsoauthorseemstobasedhisbookonotherfanficinsteadofcannonsotheplotsoundsverynaiveforpeoplefamilarwiththestroy,afewexamples:SpoilerMCtrickedapotionguildmasterwithakidjuiceboxdosedwithveritaserumsothathe'dspillhisdarkestsecretinfrontofthewholediagonalley.MCwas5yearold!!!SpoilerMCinventedapotionthatcansafelydestroysoulinhocruxwithoutdestroyingharmingtheobjectitselfwhenhewasin1stgrade.Somethingdumbledorefailedtodo.SpoilerMCgoalinlifeistoutureandkilleverydeatheater,especiallyLestrangecoupleforharminghisparentswhomhemetforafewdays.Idontmeandontavengethembutthewayhemakehisultimategoalisweirdseeingheisatransmigrator. Thecoverisn'tveryinteresting,thestoryisvery...howdosaythis...uhmnaive.Andthemaincharacterisverystupidandemotional,[Spoiler]Whenhewasjustborn,hewasinstantlyattachedtohisnewparents?Comeon,theirshouldsomefeelingofalienationandheisverystupid.ImeanpromisingtotortureBellatrix?Theonewhotorturedhisparents?Issuicidal,andbeatingupDracoMalfoyisaverynaivechoice.Themcdidn'tevenconsiderMalfoy'sfatherretaliating.Istoppedreadingatthispart,sinceIcan'tstomachthisverycringy,andstupidpart.WhatIwanttosaytotheauthorisyoushouldconsiderrewritingtheentirestory. Afterseeingthatcoveridon'twannaeventryit Why?Itlooksjolly. Idon'tunderstandwhypicksomeonewhowasalreadyinthestory?IfyourgoingtowriteastoryintheworldofanalreadyexistedfranchisedoanOC.Thisstorywasnotgoodtoread. ExactlyButtherearesofewOCHPfanfictionevenonfanfiction.net ThisguyreallyreallyhatesHarryandRonforsomereasonandyoucantellinthewriting.It'ssuperimmature.Theworstauthorsaretheoneswhocan'tkeeptherebiasincheckandnotwritetheworldtobashothersexcessively. TheWorsecoverpicIhaveseen..... Whyaddsomethingthatwaslastupdatedamonthago?

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