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Twovirtualrealitygamesstartedatthesametime.Aftersevenyears,onegamewasthrivingand...Readmore

Twovirtualrealitygamesstartedat thesametime.Aftersevenyears,onegamewasthrivingandbecamea worldphenomenon,andtheotherwasconsidereda totalfailure.In an unbelievabletwistof fate,he wasreincarnatedsevenyearsback,to thetimewherethetwogamesstarted,insidethebodyof a humanplayer.He decidedto usehispastlifememoriesandenterthesuccessfulgameto destroyeverythingthatmadeit thatsuccessful.Whatturnof fatewouldhe endup at?Willhe succeedin ruiningtheEternalGlorygame?Willhe changehismind?Let’sfindthisouttogether…Collapse

Reincarnation,VirtualReality,GameElements,LitRPG,MaleProtagonist,Gamers,Evolution,WeaktoStrong,OverpoweredProtagonist,ProtagonistNPC

Theothercommentsinthissectionsumupgripeswiththeterribleplotandnonsensicalactionsofallcharactersinthenovel.Butifthiswasn'tenoughtoturnyouoff,whatgotmewithin5chapterswastheconstantoverabbreviation.Talentpoints?TP.SKillpoints?SP.Etc,fortwentyotherstats/resources/currencies/thenameoftheMc'sgoddamnmother.Youwanttoknowhowtoruintheimmersionofareader?makethempauseandscratchtheirheadtotryandrememberwhatSKASDHASJMstandsforagain,andhowit'srelevanttoamobdrop.

IwillgiveitaTry,aftermanypushes,eventhoughiwillexpectmanyLoop-holesandPlot-holeslikeAuthorsotherWork"TalesofTheMightyDragonair".EditofChapter70:WellimanagedtoreadtillChapter67.WhiletheNovelisnotbad,doesmakethefew/manywrongsmakeReadingnotveryenjoyable.FirstofistheBeginning/StartwithMCalsNPCtobecameaPlayer(Human)andPlaytheRivalGame,thatgotreleasedatthesameTimeasMC'sGamethatgotrushedtomeetthiswellmadegamewithgoodSpecs.MCnowwantstowreckthis"Rival"game,eventhoughtthedeveloperofMC'sgameweretheoneswhomadetheirGameaMessinanattemptogainmorePlayersfromthe"Rival"Game.WhileaverymissplacedTarget,canaReaderlookpastitandtheNPCbecomingPlayerwithoutanyInfowhatcausedit.NowwehavetheVERYMissingPiecesofBackgroundInfooftheGamemechaniks,TheVRPodswhichtheMCplayeswithandtheAlmostallknowingknowledgeofthe"Rival"game,evenifheifcanlookataForum(butsupposedlyorlogicalonlytheForumofMCGame,wherenotsuchaMassofInfooftheRivalgamecanbe).TillChapters70istherenotawordssaidhowitworks.MCusesDualSwords,witheachHandaSword,andcanuseAllSkillshehaswitheachSwordSeperatly!WithSkillsthatareNon-sense!AChargewith5SecStunand5SecCD?MCsaidhehasexperiencewithPlayerKilling,eventhoughthewasaNPCwhowasBoundwithRules!NexthetricksaNPC,whoisPartoftheStorytowrecktheGame?LaterheAttacksandKillsaBunchofNPSwhoguardaCaravanandHewasaNPCnotevenaDayearlier?!Andlast2ThingsaretheratherlackinginfoaboutMC'sStatus,asitisntShowandonlyPartshowedwithnowaytoknowiftheyaretrueastheNumbersofMCareabitjumbledupasMCStartsseeminglyatLevel0thaninmostGamesatLevel1.AndtheFinalthingistheSpelling,whiletherearenogrammarmistakesitself,doestheReadinggetsomehowonetonedasmanythingssuchasHP,asHealthPoints,arewritenasHp(assuchstatscomeoftenupitgetssomehowconfusing,atleasttome)andonlytheStartofaLine/SentenceFirstWordiswritenbigandallotherswordsaresmall.Itreallymakesitonetonedformeandsomehowbothersmeabit.WellthisismyOpinionoftheNovel:TheStoryisinteresting,buttheimplementationismessy.ItstartsofthewrongFoot,withunclearVRGameMechaniksandmissingBackgroundinfosofMCandhisKnowledge.ThestangecontradictionofMCPast,asNPC,andthecasualActsofMCKillingNPCs.TosumitUp:TheNovelisreadable,witharatherstrange/eccentricStoryFlowwithquiteafewinconsistency.ButisitmuchmoreReadableasAuthosothersWork"TalesofTheMightyDragonair".

Thestorymightbegood(Idon'tknowsinceIstoppedatchap15)buttheplotdon'tmakesense.MCisaPNJ.AndtheonlyPNJwithego.Why?How?!Moreover,hegetsendbackbyaglitch?WhysortofglitchsendpeopleinthepastANDCHANGETHEIRRACE!Andofcourseheknoweverythingaboutthegame...BUTHECAMEFROMANOTHERGAME!!!Andstopbullshitingsayingit'sthedevswhotalkedaboutitandyouwereeavesdroping,YOUKNOWFARTOMUCHFORTHIS!Thestorymightbegoodbutnotforme.Iwon'tgiveanoteandwilljustsaidonethink:Tryreadingthisfordozenofchapandifyoudon'tmind,it'sforyou.

Okay...I'llreadit.

It'sgood...Atleastit'swaybetterthansomeofthetop10popularrankings.

Really?OkI'lltryit

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