SagelyDaoist Books

A technomancer's journey in an apocalyptic world

Author: SagelyDaoist Genre: Horror

Gettingachancetojoinareputedcollege,chancetorepresenthiscountryininternational...Readmore Gettingachancetojoinareputedcollege,chancetorepresenthiscountryininternationalsports,a15yearRyanhadeverythingapersoncoulddreamofftohaveastablecareerandonedayalavishlifebutalasitallchangedonenightbecauseofIt’sarrival.TheworlditselfchangedbecauseofIt,Earth’sgeographybarelyrecognizableanymore,allsemblanceofModernCivilizationerasedandsurvivorsbegantomutateasHumanitytetheredonthebrinkofextinctionasthepeopleslowlysuccumbedintotheirbaserneeds,theworldbecameplacewhereonlytheStrongestmaysurvive.RyanhimselfhadchangedhegainedthePowertomanipulateTechnologyonhismerewhim,butwhatwouldhedowhentechnologyitselfhaddisappearedfromthefaceoftheplanetbuildeverythinganew,whilejourneythroughandrediscoveringanewbuttreacherousplanet,fighting,foraging,rescuingothersandtryingtosurviveandmaybeonedayunearththetruthbehindthecataclysm.Collapse System,KingdomBuilding,Cheats,WeaktoStrong,Zombies,LevelSystem,Apocalypse,Aliens,Magic,MaleProtagonist,MutatedCreatures,Survival,Transmigration,TransportedtoAnotherWorld Thewritingisn'tthatgreat.Theconversationsandinternaldialogarelongwinded,thestorypacingisalmostfrantic.Therearesomeinterestingideas,butthenothersseemcompletelyinane.Thestorylackssubtlety.Theconversationsareextremelystilted,possiblyanartifactofthetranslationandoriginallanguage,butitreallymakesthecharacterssuffer.ThecharactersthemselvesfeelliketheyarefromaGIJoefilm,withmuchworsewriting. Tryingtoreadthefirstchapterislikeattemptingtodragyournutsackthrough100milesofglass,burningcoalsandlegobricks.I'venever,everseensuchmessywriting.Evenmachinetranslationknowshowtouseparagraphs.Icouldwriteabetterstoryusingashotgunandrollsoftoiletpaper,andGodknowshowI'ddoitbutitwouldstillbemorereadablethanthis.Thefirstchapterisfullofmoreclichesthanacultivationnovel.Badparents?Check.Annoyingsisters?Check.Smart,overpoweredMCinprogress?Check.Terribleuseofforeshadowing?Check.Imean,howbadcanitpossiblybe,youmayask?Well...UnfortunatelyabugfatnootherwiseIwouldalreadyhavebecometherichesthumanever.'Also,thisisoneoftheparagraphsinthefirstchapter.IfIwasn'tadecentenoughhuman,Iwould'veleftthespoilertagoutjustsoyou'dallsteerclearandsaveyourlifespansbecauseattemptingtoreadthisparagraphmayresultinseveralthingssuchasdiarrhea,hemorrhagingofthebrain,spleen,heartandlungs,andimmensepaininthepre-frontalcortex.However,I'veleftitinforyou,tosaveyou.Thisisawarning,readthisparagraphatyourownrisk.I'mnotliableforanydamagethatmaybeincurredasaresultofpressingthespoilertagbelow.SpoilerHissistersnonotsistersherefusetocallthetwoofthemassuchwerehissisters,'TheyalwaysdosomethingIamtheirscapegoatandithasalwaysbeenlikethisforaslongasIcanremembernottomentionmyparentswhoalwaystakingtheirsidenomatterwhatevenifIbringtheevidencethebestcouldhappen,'Pleasetheyarechildrentheyarealwaysmischievous��,yupandIwhoisyoungerthanbyover2yearsisnot,andtheworst'Howdareyouframeyourdarlingsisters'followedbyaslaportwo.TobefrankIamirritatedatthemtherewasatimelikeeveryotherchildrenIlovedthemandadoredthem,thenitturnedtohateforthembutthenIrealizedwhatwouldIgetforhatingthemwillgetImoneyforthat?UnfortunatelyabugfatnootherwiseIwouldalreadyhavebecometherichesthumanever.' thanksbrother! Ifeelamigrainecomingonandmyearsareringing. Howdidyoumanagetoreadthatandnothaveaseizure?It'sliterallyheadacheinducing!Ow,myheadsaysOw! Huhyouguyshaven'tdiscoveredtheDAOofMTL DaoofMTL.......That'stougherthancomprehendingthedaoofDestinyandmyrespectedcultivator.....Justhow.....JUSTHOWDIDYOUREADMTLANDBEOK? HehIdidn'tcomprehendDAOofMTLinfact,Iamrecuperatingfromthebacklash AhhhIsee,tookthewrongpathhuh......Hopefullyyouwillrecoverbackfromit.ItookfewdaysfromthebacklashIgot...Mybrainfeltmushylikeliterally Youguysareactuallystilltrying?Somethingsaredestinedtobebeyondthelimitsofmortals,don'tbreakyourmindsonthem Mtl.Googletranslate.Wearealive,becausewhatuskills,makesusstronger. Whatcan’tkillsusyoumean

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