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Gettingachancetojoinareputedcollege,chancetorepresenthiscountryininternationalsports,a15yearRyanhadeverythingapersoncoulddreamofftohaveastablecareerandonedayalavishlifebutalasitallchangedonenightbecauseofIt’sarrival.TheworlditselfchangedbecauseofIt,Earth’sgeographybarelyrecognizableanymore,allsemblanceofModernCivilizationerasedandsurvivorsbegantomutateasHumanitytetheredonthebrinkofextinctionasthepeopleslowlysuccumbedintotheirbaserneeds,theworldbecameplacewhereonlytheStrongestmaysurvive.RyanhimselfhadchangedhegainedthePowertomanipulateTechnologyonhismerewhim,butwhatwouldhedowhentechnologyitselfhaddisappearedfromthefaceoftheplanetbuildeverythinganew,whilejourneythroughandrediscoveringanewbuttreacherousplanet,fighting,foraging,rescuingothersandtryingtosurviveandmaybeonedayunearththetruthbehindthecataclysm.Collapse

System,KingdomBuilding,Cheats,WeaktoStrong,Zombies,LevelSystem,Apocalypse,Aliens,Magic,MaleProtagonist,MutatedCreatures,Survival,Transmigration,TransportedtoAnotherWorld

Thewritingisn'tthatgreat.Theconversationsandinternaldialogarelongwinded,thestorypacingisalmostfrantic.Therearesomeinterestingideas,butthenothersseemcompletelyinane.Thestorylackssubtlety.Theconversationsareextremelystilted,possiblyanartifactofthetranslationandoriginallanguage,butitreallymakesthecharacterssuffer.ThecharactersthemselvesfeelliketheyarefromaGIJoefilm,withmuchworsewriting.

Tryingtoreadthefirstchapterislikeattemptingtodragyournutsackthrough100milesofglass,burningcoalsandlegobricks.I'venever,everseensuchmessywriting.Evenmachinetranslationknowshowtouseparagraphs.Icouldwriteabetterstoryusingashotgunandrollsoftoiletpaper,andGodknowshowI'ddoitbutitwouldstillbemorereadablethanthis.Thefirstchapterisfullofmoreclichesthanacultivationnovel.Badparents?Check.Annoyingsisters?Check.Smart,overpoweredMCinprogress?Check.Terribleuseofforeshadowing?Check.Imean,howbadcanitpossiblybe,youmayask?Well...UnfortunatelyabugfatnootherwiseIwouldalreadyhavebecometherichesthumanever.'Also,thisisoneoftheparagraphsinthefirstchapter.IfIwasn'tadecentenoughhuman,Iwould'veleftthespoilertagoutjustsoyou'dallsteerclearandsaveyourlifespansbecauseattemptingtoreadthisparagraphmayresultinseveralthingssuchasdiarrhea,hemorrhagingofthebrain,spleen,heartandlungs,andimmensepaininthepre-frontalcortex.However,I'veleftitinforyou,tosaveyou.Thisisawarning,readthisparagraphatyourownrisk.I'mnotliableforanydamagethatmaybeincurredasaresultofpressingthespoilertagbelow.SpoilerHissistersnonotsistersherefusetocallthetwoofthemassuchwerehissisters,'TheyalwaysdosomethingIamtheirscapegoatandithasalwaysbeenlikethisforaslongasIcanremembernottomentionmyparentswhoalwaystakingtheirsidenomatterwhatevenifIbringtheevidencethebestcouldhappen,'Pleasetheyarechildrentheyarealwaysmischievous��,yupandIwhoisyoungerthanbyover2yearsisnot,andtheworst'Howdareyouframeyourdarlingsisters'followedbyaslaportwo.TobefrankIamirritatedatthemtherewasatimelikeeveryotherchildrenIlovedthemandadoredthem,thenitturnedtohateforthembutthenIrealizedwhatwouldIgetforhatingthemwillgetImoneyforthat?UnfortunatelyabugfatnootherwiseIwouldalreadyhavebecometherichesthumanever.'

thanksbrother!

Ifeelamigrainecomingonandmyearsareringing.

Howdidyoumanagetoreadthatandnothaveaseizure?It'sliterallyheadacheinducing!Ow,myheadsaysOw!

Huhyouguyshaven'tdiscoveredtheDAOofMTL

DaoofMTL.......That'stougherthancomprehendingthedaoofDestinyandmyrespectedcultivator.....Justhow.....JUSTHOWDIDYOUREADMTLANDBEOK?

HehIdidn'tcomprehendDAOofMTLinfact,Iamrecuperatingfromthebacklash

AhhhIsee,tookthewrongpathhuh......Hopefullyyouwillrecoverbackfromit.ItookfewdaysfromthebacklashIgot...Mybrainfeltmushylikeliterally

Youguysareactuallystilltrying?Somethingsaredestinedtobebeyondthelimitsofmortals,don'tbreakyourmindsonthem

Mtl.Googletranslate.Wearealive,becausewhatuskills,makesusstronger.

Whatcan’tkillsusyoumean