《Marvel Hogwarts Wiza》 作者：挂前川 分类：Fantasy

BecomingawizardissomethingthatJerrymustattaininordertosurviveinhisnewlife,andthat...Readmore BecomingawizardissomethingthatJerrymustattaininordertosurviveinhisnewlife,andthatislivingintheMarvelWorld.Therewouldbeagreaterthreatcomingtoearth,andheneedsawaytoprepareforthat.Fortunately,hewasgivenaSystemthatallowedhimtogototheHarryPotterUniverse,wherehegotaletterthathewouldbeenrollinginHogwarts.JerryneededtolearnalotofthingsfromHogwartsSchoolofWitchcraftandWizardryand,perhapspreventsuchincomingthreatsinthefuturewiththeknowledgeandskillsthathelearnedfromthere?Collapse 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Iamcurrentlyonchapter242.SofarIhaveenjoyedreadingthisnovel.Itisnotamasterpieceandthequalityisquiteaverage,however,ithasbeenreallygoodtomemenowthatIcantfindanythingtoread,anditremindsmealotofwhenIstartedmyjourneyinWebnovels,thisnovelgivesmeafeelingoffreshness.:D Why!?WhydopeoplecombinethingsthatDONTNEEDTOBECOMBINED Well,letsgetstartedwiththisreview.Firstofall,IwouldliketopointoutthatIwillnottalkaboutthequalityofthetextoritsspelling.MylevelofEnglishismediocreandIrelyonmyfriendGoogletotranslate.SoImthelastpersonwhocancriticizethiskindofthing.Iwillonlyspeakhereaboutmyopinionofthestory.WethereforefollowJerryintheMarvelworldhavingasystemwhichallowshimtotraveltoseveralworlds(HPbeingsimplythefirstofthem).Thisisadecentfanfictionforthosenewtothegenreorifyouwanttopassthetime.ButletslookforwhatIthinkareflawsforthepickiestamongyou.TheMCgetsstrongtoofast.IndeedJerrywilltraveltoseveralworlds,buteachoftheseworldswillbetooweaktoconstitutearealthreattohim.Moreover,manyoftheseworldsarenotveryinteresting.Magicnotexploitedenough.TheMCinitiallyhasHPmagic,oneofthemostmalleableamongthemagicaluniverses.Iexpectedmoreinnovationinhismagicspells.Toobadthatmostofthetimehejustcopiesexistingspells.Magicisasversatileastechnology,itsashamenottoexploitthispotential.Apoorlyoperatedsystem.Thesystemhasnoprobleminitself,justthatitispoorlyusedbytheauthor.Indeed,thesystemofthisnovelsimplyaimsatdimensionaltransportbetweendifferentworlds,butalsothepossibilityofconsumingpoints(calledStarsinthebook)tofacilitatethelearningofmagic.TheproblemhereisthattheMConlyuseshispointswhenreadingbooks,makingJerrysprogressboringtofollow.Icantrepeatitenough,butinanovelwhosethemeistheincreaseinstrengthofitsMC,youhavetomakehiswayofprogressinginstrengthinterestingtoread.Forexample,betweenanMCwhoonlyreadsmagicbookstobecomestrongerandanMCwhomustresearchmagictobecomestronger,weguesswhichoneismoreinterestingtofollow.Afishtailending.IunderstandthatJerrybecomestoostrongattheendsothatitisnolongerinterestingtofollowhimhavingadventureslikethis.Butthisisnotanexcusetobotchanending.TheauthorcouldhavegivenustheidentityofthepersonwhogavethesystemtoJerry,thereisnoneedtoexperienceadventureforthat.Itfeelsliketheauthorcutthestoryshortbeforeitwasfinished.Nowletstalkaboutthelastproblem,arecurringproblemwithmostfanfiction,atleastthatsmyopinion.Imtakingadvantageofmyreviewheretotalkaboutit:TheMCspersonalityisnotsuitedtotheworkusedinthefanfiction.Letmeexplain,thereareseveraltypesofMC,theselfish,thevigilant,thecheeky,thelazy,thecautious,...Inshort,thereisnoshortageoftypes.Innormalnovels,thepersonalityoftheMCisadaptedtohisuniverse(ForexampleaselfishMCwilltendtoliveinaworldwherethemajorityisselfish,themostobviousexampleareChinesemartialartsnovelswhereeveryoneworldisselfish).Butfanfictionworksdifferently.Theworldusedinafanfictiondoesnotbelongtotheauthor.SoinprincipletheauthorofafanfictionmustadapttheMCpersonalitytothetypeofuniverseborrowedinhisstory.Forexample,taketheworldoftheanimeFairyTail,itsastorythatpromotesfriendshipandfamily.IfyouputaselfishMCinthatkindofworld,hellbeastain.FacedwithFairyTailcharacterswhoactoutofjusticeandfriendship,anMCwhoonlyactsoutofprofitwillseempettycomparedtothem.Andafanfictionreaderwillmakethiscomparisonunconsciously,andwillendupnotlikingtheMC.Inadditiontoseemingpetty,thiswillcreateabarrierbetweentheMCandtheworldcharactersusedinthefanfiction.ThistimeletstaketheexampleofJerryintheMarveluniverse.JerryandaselfishMCtype,althoughhecaneasilyhelpinasituation,hewillrarelydosowithoutbeingabletogainsomethinginreturnorifitdoesntearnastarforhissystem.Result,inauniversewhereeachheroactsinthenameofjustice,wehaveJerrywhoonlyactsforprofit,hedoesnotsaveothersoutofkindness,butonlybecauseitbenefitshim.So,nomatterhowbadassandpowerfulJerryis,wecomparehimtocharacterslikeIronMan,ThororCaptainAmerica,whoareweaker,butwhoarefullofidealsandwhosaveotherswithoutaskingforanythinginreturn.,Jerrycomesacrossasamean-spiritedcheapskatewithanarrowviewoftheworld.Inshort,wearenotparticularlyattachedtohim.IthereforefindthatJerryspersonalityisnotsuitedtothisfanfiction,whichIfindashame.Inconclusion,adecentfanfictionforthosewhocanacceptsomeimperfection.Ithinkitsanidealnoveltopassthetimewhenyouhavenothinglefttoread.IhopeIhaveenlightenedyou,wishingyouagoodreading.(IwouldliketopointoutthatIreadtheentirenovelonanothersite,sothisreviewwaswrittenaftermyfullreading.) 3\/10grammerismidauthoronlyhashalfbakedknowledgedonEVERYTHINGmarvelhalfbackedharrypotterhalfbakedeverythingmakesupshitallthetimetheredstarsheusesareinconsistentusesafewhundredeachdayforandgainshundredsofthousandsandyetstillsomehowrunsout246chaptersinbarelyanythingsubstantialotherthenpredetirminedshitthateveryoneknowsisgonnahappensinceitsaffitjustsucks whycombinethings?HarryPotterisnotapartofMarvel IliftedthelevitationspellIgaveuponreadingthiscrapafterseeingthis. Whathowsthatpossible Itnothalfbad Fu#kit,immareadthisItllprobablymakemesick,butiwillstillbereadingandsick NVM,imout Istherenoromanceinthis??IfnotitdbekindaboringIthink!?? Thereisashortromancelater,butnotveryimportant. MCissimpingfortheknow-it-allsl*t.Ivedroppeditthere. Thanksforthewarning.CanyourecommendanovelwithaMCthatisnotnaiveorasimp\/cuck? Hpissooverusedbruh LasttimeIveheard,itsthemost\

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