Marvel Hogwarts Wizard

BecomingawizardissomethingthatJerrymustattaininordertosurviveinhisnewlife,andthat...Readmore

BecomingawizardissomethingthatJerrymustattaininordertosurviveinhisnewlife,andthatislivingintheMarvelWorld.Therewouldbeagreaterthreatcomingtoearth,andheneedsawaytoprepareforthat.Fortunately,hewasgivenaSystemthatallowedhimtogototheHarryPotterUniverse,wherehegotaletterthathewouldbeenrollinginHogwarts.JerryneededtolearnalotofthingsfromHogwartsSchoolofWitchcraftandWizardryand,perhapspreventsuchincomingthreatsinthefuturewiththeknowledgeandskillsthathelearnedfromthere?Collapse

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Iamcurrentlyonchapter242.SofarIhaveenjoyedreadingthisnovel.Itisnotamasterpieceandthequalityisquiteaverage,however,ithasbeenreallygoodtomemenowthatIcan'tfindanythingtoread,anditremindsmealotofwhenIstartedmyjourneyinWebnovels,thisnovelgivesmeafeelingoffreshness.:D

Why!?WhydopeoplecombinethingsthatDON'TNEEDTOBECOMBINED

Well,let'sgetstartedwiththisreview.Firstofall,IwouldliketopointoutthatIwillnottalkaboutthequalityofthetextoritsspelling.MylevelofEnglishismediocreandIrelyonmyfriendGoogletotranslate.SoI'mthelastpersonwhocancriticizethiskindofthing.Iwillonlyspeakhereaboutmyopinionofthestory.WethereforefollowJerryintheMarvelworldhavingasystemwhichallowshimtotraveltoseveralworlds(HPbeingsimplythefirstofthem).Thisisadecentfanfictionforthosenewtothegenreorifyouwanttopassthetime.Butlet'slookforwhatIthinkareflawsforthepickiestamongyou.TheMCgetsstrongtoofast.IndeedJerrywilltraveltoseveralworlds,buteachoftheseworldswillbetooweaktoconstitutearealthreattohim.Moreover,manyoftheseworldsarenotveryinteresting.Magicnotexploitedenough.TheMCinitiallyhasHPmagic,oneofthemostmalleableamongthemagicaluniverses.Iexpectedmoreinnovationinhismagicspells.Toobadthatmostofthetimehejustcopiesexistingspells.Magicisasversatileastechnology,it'sashamenottoexploitthispotential.Apoorlyoperatedsystem.Thesystemhasnoprobleminitself,justthatitispoorlyusedbytheauthor.Indeed,thesystemofthisnovelsimplyaimsatdimensionaltransportbetweendifferentworlds,butalsothepossibilityofconsumingpoints(calledStarsinthebook)tofacilitatethelearningofmagic.TheproblemhereisthattheMConlyuseshispointswhenreadingbooks,makingJerry'sprogressboringtofollow.Ican'trepeatitenough,butinanovelwhosethemeistheincreaseinstrengthofitsMC,youhavetomakehiswayofprogressinginstrengthinterestingtoread.Forexample,betweenanMCwhoonlyreadsmagicbookstobecomestrongerandanMCwhomustresearchmagictobecomestronger,weguesswhichoneismoreinterestingtofollow.Afishtailending.IunderstandthatJerrybecomestoostrongattheendsothatitisnolongerinterestingtofollowhimhavingadventureslikethis.Butthisisnotanexcusetobotchanending.TheauthorcouldhavegivenustheidentityofthepersonwhogavethesystemtoJerry,thereisnoneedtoexperienceadventureforthat.Itfeelsliketheauthorcutthestoryshortbeforeitwasfinished.Nowlet'stalkaboutthelastproblem,arecurringproblemwithmostfanfiction,atleastthat'smyopinion.I'mtakingadvantageofmyreviewheretotalkaboutit:TheMC'spersonalityisnotsuitedtotheworkusedinthefanfiction.Letmeexplain,thereareseveraltypesofMC,theselfish,thevigilant,thecheeky,thelazy,thecautious,...Inshort,thereisnoshortageoftypes.Innormalnovels,thepersonalityoftheMCisadaptedtohisuniverse(ForexampleaselfishMCwilltendtoliveinaworldwherethemajorityisselfish,themostobviousexampleareChinesemartialartsnovelswhereeveryoneworldisselfish).Butfanfictionworksdifferently.Theworldusedinafanfictiondoesnotbelongtotheauthor.SoinprincipletheauthorofafanfictionmustadapttheMCpersonalitytothetypeofuniverseborrowedinhisstory.Forexample,taketheworldoftheanimeFairyTail,it'sastorythatpromotesfriendshipandfamily.IfyouputaselfishMCinthatkindofworld,he'llbeastain.FacedwithFairyTailcharacterswhoactoutofjusticeandfriendship,anMCwhoonlyactsoutofprofitwillseempettycomparedtothem.Andafanfictionreaderwillmakethiscomparisonunconsciously,andwillendupnotlikingtheMC.Inadditiontoseemingpetty,thiswillcreateabarrierbetweentheMCandtheworldcharactersusedinthefanfiction.Thistimelet'staketheexampleofJerryintheMarveluniverse.JerryandaselfishMCtype,althoughhecaneasilyhelpinasituation,hewillrarelydosowithoutbeingabletogainsomethinginreturnorifitdoesn'tearnastarforhissystem.Result,inauniversewhereeachheroactsinthenameofjustice,wehaveJerrywhoonlyactsforprofit,hedoesnotsaveothersoutofkindness,butonlybecauseitbenefitshim.So,nomatterhowbadassandpowerfulJerryis,wecomparehimtocharacterslikeIronMan,ThororCaptainAmerica,whoareweaker,butwhoarefullofidealsandwhosaveotherswithoutaskingforanythinginreturn.,Jerrycomesacrossasamean-spiritedcheapskatewithanarrowviewoftheworld.Inshort,wearenotparticularlyattachedtohim.IthereforefindthatJerry'spersonalityisnotsuitedtothisfanfiction,whichIfindashame.Inconclusion,adecentfanfictionforthosewhocanacceptsomeimperfection.Ithinkit'sanidealnoveltopassthetimewhenyouhavenothinglefttoread.IhopeIhaveenlightenedyou,wishingyouagoodreading.(IwouldliketopointoutthatIreadtheentirenovelonanothersite,sothisreviewwaswrittenaftermyfullreading.)

3/10grammerismidauthoronlyhashalfbakedknowledgedonEVERYTHINGmarvelhalfbackedharrypotterhalfbakedeverythingmakesupshitallthetimetheredstarsheusesareinconsistentusesafewhundredeachdayforandgainshundredsofthousandsandyetstillsomehowrunsout246chaptersinbarelyanythingsubstantialotherthenpredetirminedshitthateveryoneknowsisgonnahappensinceitsaffitjustsucks

whycombinethings?HarryPotterisnotapartofMarvel

IliftedthelevitationspellIgaveuponreadingthiscrapafterseeingthis.

Whathow'sthatpossible

Itnothalfbad

Fu#kit,immareadthisIt'llprobablymakemesick,butiwillstillbereadingandsick

NVM,i'mout

Istherenoromanceinthis??Ifnotit'dbekindaboringIthink!??

Thereisashortromancelater,butnotveryimportant.

MCissimpingfortheknow-it-allsl*t.I'vedroppeditthere.

Thanksforthewarning.CanyourecommendanovelwithaMCthatisnotnaiveorasimp/cuck?

Hpissooverusedbruh

LasttimeI'veheard,it'sthemost"fan-fictioned"fictionever.

itis.Butthereareafewdiamondsintherough.