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Nano Machine (Retranslated Version)

Author: 한중월야 Genre: Sci-fi

Untilthetimeofhimbecomingthemasterofthelowestrankintheorderofrankings,thelonelysideofhislifewithoutluckwaschanged. Onedaysuddenly,afuturedescendantinjectedhimwithananomachine,andthemachinestarted‘speaking’tohim. [IamseventhgenerationNanoMachinemanufacturedbytheSkyCooperation,andIamoperatingascentralnerveconnectedtoyourbrain.]“What?Whatareyoutalkingabout?”Thiswasbeyondtheboy’sknowledge,soheturnedpaleandasked. TheNanoMachinelinkedtohiscerebrumrealizedtheUserwasnotunderstandingasingleworditsaid. “Whoareyou,andwhyareyoudoingthistome?” [“IamseventhgenerationNanoMachine.]“NanoMashin?”[Yes,NanoMachine.]Theboy’sfacegothardened.MashinwasdeitytheMashinReligionworshipped,alongwiththeSacredFire. TheMasteroftheMashinReligion’srolewastocommunicatewithMashin. “Um,areyoureallyMashin?” Theboykneltdownandaskedwithtremblingvoice.Atthis,theNanoMachineattachedtohiscerebrumrealizedhehadmisunderstoodit.

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Nano Mashin

Author: 한중월야 Genre: Sci-fi

Untilhebecamethelowest-rankedmaster,hislonelyandlucklesslifeneverchanged....Readmore Untilhe becamethelowest-rankedmaster,hislonelyandlucklesslifeneverchanged.Suddenlyoneday,a descendantinjectedhimwitha nanomachine,andthemachinestarted‘speaking’to him.[Iam theseventhgenerationNanomachinemanufacturedby SkyCooperation,andI am operatingas a centralnerveconnectedto yourbrain.]«What?Whatareyoutalkingabout?».Thiswasbeyondtheboy’sknowledge,he turnedpale.TheNanomachinelinkedto hiscerebrumrealizedtheUserwasnotunderstandinga singlewordit said.Collapse AbsentParents,Academy,AdaptedtoManhwa,ArtificialIntelligence,BattleAcademy,Biochip,Bullying,Cheats,CleverProtagonist,CunningProtagonist,DeathofLovedOnes,DeterminedProtagonist,Enlightenment,FamousParents,FastCultivation,FastLearner,GameElements,Leadership,MaleProtagonist,Misunderstandings,Near-DeathExperience,OverpoweredProtagonist,Revenge,SchemesAndConspiracies,SkillAssimilation,Strength-basedSocialHierarchy,SuddenStrengthGain,SwordWielder,Teachers,TechnologicalGap,UnderestimatedProtagonist TheMCisjustafarmanimal,Idon'tknowwhatelsetosay.He'sgottechnologycomingfrom1000yearsinthefutureinfusedintohisass,buttheonlythinghe'slearnedwascuttinguppeople.Eventhis,he'ssof#ckingcarelessthatI'msurehe'sonlyscratchedthesurface.Zerocuriosity,pearlsbeforeswines.Asitis,ifhischeathadbeenaportablegrandpaoragenericsystemthenovelwouldn'thavechangedmuchIt'sstillworthreadingbecausemurderhoboMCslikehimarefunny,butthere'sreallyalotofmissedpotentialinthisone.Overallit'smorefrustratingthananything. ThegoodthingaboutNanoMachine:youdon'tneedtoturnoffyourbraintoreadthisnovel.Thisisagoodnovel.Justthat. Aboveaveragenovelifyouexcludetimetravel.Author'sscientificknowledgecamefrommoviesforsure. Novelstartswithakidgoingtoacademy.Hisfatheristhedemonsectmaster,buthe'stheunfavoredchildeveryoneistryingtokillforsomereason.Yethe'sbailedoutbyaninstructor.Supercliche.Butthenitturnsintounexpecteddirectionswithseveralplotlinesgoingonatonce.SpoilerHisowngoals,bloodlinesinthedemonssecttofaceoffwith,ahostileempirenearby,timetravelers,ect.It'snottoobad.Likeasolid3.5of5.Atfirst,theMCbotheredme,abittoomuchlikethemindlesstypethatsimplyplotarmoredthrougheverything,havingtempertantrums,can'tgoadaywithoutpissingsomeoneofftogetintoafight.SortoflikeMartialGodAsura,ATG,orPeerlessMartialGod.Iguttedthroughthebeginningandthewritingmadenotableimprovements,nightanddaydifference.EventheMCbecamemorelikableandstartedactingproperly.Ihavetosayitwas"good".Yeah,thebeginningwasclicheandchildishlywritten,butitgotbetter.Ireadthesequel,DescentoftheDemonGodaswell,andittoowasa"good"novel. Twomaincritiques,translationandpowerlevels.Translationgoesfrom[okay>terrible>good].Unfortunatelytheterriblepartisquiteasizeablechunkofthenovel.Thetranslationwillimproveagainfromaround350onwardsandthechapterlengthgetslongertoosoineffectitsprobablyaboutthesamelengthtotalasthe'terrible'portion.Oneoftheproblemswiththepowerlevelsisthetranslation(Ithink)becausethereisapartofthenovelwheresupermaster,superiormasterandsuprememasterareusedinterchangeablydespitebeingthreedifferentrealms.Alsoonetranslatordecidedtochangegrandmastertosupermaster,soifyou'replanningonreadingthenoveljustrememberthesearethesamerealm.AnotherissuewiththepowerlevelsisthatIfeelliketheearlieronesaren'texplainedthatwellalthoughthisisn'tabigproblemsincetheMCwon'tlingerattheselevelsforlong.Thelaterlevelsdogetmoreexplanationalthoughitcanstillbeconfusingsinceexplanationsfeelmoreliketheyweredoneoutofobligationthantoactuallyhelpanyoneunderstand.I'mawarethereisamanhwaforthiswhichprobablyaddressestheseissues(atleasti'mprettyconfidentthetranslationwillbealotbetter).However,IpersonallyprefernovelsduetotheextradetailsoIjustwantedtoencouragepeopletotrygivingthisareadevenifit'sabitdifficultduetothetranslation.IfyouhaveissuesunderstandingthepowerlevelstheFandomisyourfriend(becarefulforspoilersthough).IfIhadtorateitIwouldgiveit:7/10forplot-notaworkofartbutitsstillafunread6/10worldbuilding-doesn'treallyexploretheworldasawholebutwedogettoldwhateverweneedtoknowfortheplot?/10forMC-can'treallyputanumberonitsinceruthlessMCisn'tforeveryone.Hardtobeneutral/objectiveaboutsomethinglikemarmite.Ilikedhimthough.N/Afortranslation-nuffsaidFinally,thisreviewispurelyaboutNanoMashin,Ihavenotreadthesequel,DescentoftheDemonGodyet(goingtonow).Iimaginethetranslationwon'tsufferthesamethoughsincethesametranslationgroupfromtheendofthisnoveldidthatone.Also,steelyourmindifyouhaveafearoflosinglimbs,specificallyarms.Manyarmswerelostinthemakingofthisnovel. Nicenovel,buttherearenotsomuchdetaileddescriptions,soitsnotalwayspossibletoimaginewhatarereading.MCreallylikescuttinghands,heheh(+0.5).7.5/10 Firsthalf7/10.Secondhalf6/10.Notbad ForthosewhoarewonderingwhathappenedafterlastchaptergoreadDescentoftheDemonGod.It'ssequeltothis igetministrokereadingthis,andyoutellmethere'sanotheroneafterthis?hahanothankyou Quote:AvulusIschapter483reallythelast?Thestorycouldhaveendedperfectlyinacoupleofchapters,butnowitslikepreparingadeliciousmealonlytoendupnotaddinganysalt.Orlikechargingaphoneandhavingitdestroyedbyalightningboltat99%…Lahistoriacontinuacondescensodeldiosdemonio

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Descent of the Demon God

Author: 한중월야 Genre: Sci-fi

Theleaderofthethousanddemons,theDemonGodChunYeoWoon.Duetoanunfortunateaccident,hehadbeensenttothedistantfuture. TheGatehasopened,thefutureisnowinchaos.Thefighttoreturnbackintothepastbegins.

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