Nano Mashin

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Untilhe becamethelowest-rankedmaster,hislonelyandlucklesslifeneverchanged.Suddenlyoneday,a descendantinjectedhimwitha nanomachine,andthemachinestarted‘speaking’to him.[Iam theseventhgenerationNanomachinemanufacturedby SkyCooperation,andI am operatingas a centralnerveconnectedto yourbrain.]«What?Whatareyoutalkingabout?».Thiswasbeyondtheboy’sknowledge,he turnedpale.TheNanomachinelinkedto hiscerebrumrealizedtheUserwasnotunderstandinga singlewordit said.Collapse

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TheMCisjustafarmanimal,Idon'tknowwhatelsetosay.He'sgottechnologycomingfrom1000yearsinthefutureinfusedintohisass,buttheonlythinghe'slearnedwascuttinguppeople.Eventhis,he'ssof#ckingcarelessthatI'msurehe'sonlyscratchedthesurface.Zerocuriosity,pearlsbeforeswines.Asitis,ifhischeathadbeenaportablegrandpaoragenericsystemthenovelwouldn'thavechangedmuchIt'sstillworthreadingbecausemurderhoboMCslikehimarefunny,butthere'sreallyalotofmissedpotentialinthisone.Overallit'smorefrustratingthananything.

ThegoodthingaboutNanoMachine:youdon'tneedtoturnoffyourbraintoreadthisnovel.Thisisagoodnovel.Justthat.

Aboveaveragenovelifyouexcludetimetravel.Author'sscientificknowledgecamefrommoviesforsure.

Novelstartswithakidgoingtoacademy.Hisfatheristhedemonsectmaster,buthe'stheunfavoredchildeveryoneistryingtokillforsomereason.Yethe'sbailedoutbyaninstructor.Supercliche.Butthenitturnsintounexpecteddirectionswithseveralplotlinesgoingonatonce.SpoilerHisowngoals,bloodlinesinthedemonssecttofaceoffwith,ahostileempirenearby,timetravelers,ect.It'snottoobad.Likeasolid3.5of5.Atfirst,theMCbotheredme,abittoomuchlikethemindlesstypethatsimplyplotarmoredthrougheverything,havingtempertantrums,can'tgoadaywithoutpissingsomeoneofftogetintoafight.SortoflikeMartialGodAsura,ATG,orPeerlessMartialGod.Iguttedthroughthebeginningandthewritingmadenotableimprovements,nightanddaydifference.EventheMCbecamemorelikableandstartedactingproperly.Ihavetosayitwas"good".Yeah,thebeginningwasclicheandchildishlywritten,butitgotbetter.Ireadthesequel,DescentoftheDemonGodaswell,andittoowasa"good"novel.

Twomaincritiques,translationandpowerlevels.Translationgoesfrom[okay>terrible>good].Unfortunatelytheterriblepartisquiteasizeablechunkofthenovel.Thetranslationwillimproveagainfromaround350onwardsandthechapterlengthgetslongertoosoineffectitsprobablyaboutthesamelengthtotalasthe'terrible'portion.Oneoftheproblemswiththepowerlevelsisthetranslation(Ithink)becausethereisapartofthenovelwheresupermaster,superiormasterandsuprememasterareusedinterchangeablydespitebeingthreedifferentrealms.Alsoonetranslatordecidedtochangegrandmastertosupermaster,soifyou'replanningonreadingthenoveljustrememberthesearethesamerealm.AnotherissuewiththepowerlevelsisthatIfeelliketheearlieronesaren'texplainedthatwellalthoughthisisn'tabigproblemsincetheMCwon'tlingerattheselevelsforlong.Thelaterlevelsdogetmoreexplanationalthoughitcanstillbeconfusingsinceexplanationsfeelmoreliketheyweredoneoutofobligationthantoactuallyhelpanyoneunderstand.I'mawarethereisamanhwaforthiswhichprobablyaddressestheseissues(atleasti'mprettyconfidentthetranslationwillbealotbetter).However,IpersonallyprefernovelsduetotheextradetailsoIjustwantedtoencouragepeopletotrygivingthisareadevenifit'sabitdifficultduetothetranslation.IfyouhaveissuesunderstandingthepowerlevelstheFandomisyourfriend(becarefulforspoilersthough).IfIhadtorateitIwouldgiveit:7/10forplot-notaworkofartbutitsstillafunread6/10worldbuilding-doesn'treallyexploretheworldasawholebutwedogettoldwhateverweneedtoknowfortheplot?/10forMC-can'treallyputanumberonitsinceruthlessMCisn'tforeveryone.Hardtobeneutral/objectiveaboutsomethinglikemarmite.Ilikedhimthough.N/Afortranslation-nuffsaidFinally,thisreviewispurelyaboutNanoMashin,Ihavenotreadthesequel,DescentoftheDemonGodyet(goingtonow).Iimaginethetranslationwon'tsufferthesamethoughsincethesametranslationgroupfromtheendofthisnoveldidthatone.Also,steelyourmindifyouhaveafearoflosinglimbs,specificallyarms.Manyarmswerelostinthemakingofthisnovel.

Nicenovel,buttherearenotsomuchdetaileddescriptions,soitsnotalwayspossibletoimaginewhatarereading.MCreallylikescuttinghands,heheh(+0.5).7.5/10

Firsthalf7/10.Secondhalf6/10.Notbad

ForthosewhoarewonderingwhathappenedafterlastchaptergoreadDescentoftheDemonGod.It'ssequeltothis

igetministrokereadingthis,andyoutellmethere'sanotheroneafterthis?hahanothankyou

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