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Aboywakesupinamysteriousblackspace,withagoddesswhoreincarnateshimasademonic...Readmore

A boywakesup in a mysteriousblackspace,witha goddesswhoreincarnateshimas a demonicdungeon.There’sjustonecatchin thisworlddungeonsaregirls,andthenwhenhe finallyunlockshisavatarhe discoversit is a cutelolidemonandwhilehe or rathersheis dealingwithhernewfoundgenderissuesthechurchcomescalling.Thisis my firstattemptat a dungeonstory,andmy firststory.Sorryabouttheearlychapters,notmeetingthesamestandardsas my otherfictionon thissite,butI havenothadtimeto revisethem.Don’tworryit getsbetterlater on.I writeprimarilyto improvemyself,so anyfeedbackyouhavewillbe greatlyappreciated.Collapse

Beastkin,Corruption,CuteProtagonist,Demons,Dragons,Dungeons,Dwarfs,Elves,Fairies,GatetoAnotherWorld,Goddesses,Gods,Loli,MaletoFemale,Masturbation,Nudity,Polygamy,Pregnancy,R-18,Seduction,Succubus,LitRPG

Doyouwantdeepcharacters?Acoherentandfleshedoutstoryline?Perhapsabitofconsenttosweetenthepie?Lookelsewhere.It'sagoodreadforahopelessloliconwithnothingbettertodo,butthere'snotmuchelsehere.Thecharacterssuck,thegrammarsmid,andtheauthorhasclearlyneverseenavagina.Allthatsaid,it'snottheworstthingI'veeverread.Isaythat,butIreallycan'tthinkofanythingtopraise.Kindahopethisbookgetsremoved,ifanything

Igottrough40orsochaptersuntilthejellydragonshowedup.I'vetried.Itriedtoseespositiveaspects.Buteverytimesomethinghalfwaycutehappenssomeonegetshyperraped.Safezone?Getrapedbyaslimegirlwithahalfshatteredsoulwhoimpregnatesyouwithslimeeggsandstealsyourmanasothedemongirlthatwatchedyougetrapedusesyourlackofmanatoenthrallthepregnantrapevictimtobeherlittlef#cktoytroughcorruption.ANDDON'TGETMESTARTEDONABOONFROMAGODUSEDTOMINDCONTROLYOURPARTYMATESINTOYOURPETSBEFORESLAPPINGTHEMANDLATER"RESCUING4SLAVESFROMANOTHERRAPISTONLYTOTHINKABOUTSENDINGTHEMOFFFAMILYASSLAVELABOUR!!DESPITEKNOWINGTHEYGOTABDUCTEDANDENSLAVEDBYSAIDRAPIST!THIS!THISNOVELISAPRIMEEXCUSEFORPEOPLETOTHINKALL.MENANDHUMANSSHOULDBEKILLED!!!WTFISWRONGWITHTHISAUTHOR!!Calm..calmcalmcalm....Yeahafewproperwarningswouldhavebeebn.i.c.eOhlooktheadventurerturnedantgirlisgettingitonwithademonmaidafterthatpieceofshitgoddesstransformedthedwarfgirlforlosinga"bet"thatwasjustalosecommentleavingherasahalfsoulshatteredantgirlenslavedasapettothedungeon...Whooopdedoo....

Igotabout10orsochaptersinbeforeIdecidedtogiveup.Idon'tgiveuponnovelsoften,andcannormallylastquiteabitlongerthroughastinker.Basically,weconsistentlyhavepeoplebeingforcedintosexualinteractionsthat'sprobablylittlebetterthanrape.Thefirstoneisaprincesswhoseescapedfrombandits.Restsonahardrock,halfdelerious,praystohergodforprotection.Welp,tobad,youprayedatadarkgoddessshrine.Soyourgodhaskickedyououtofhispantheonandnowyourunderthedarkgoddess..whetheryoulikeitornot.Tobad,youdon'thaveachoice,nowyouhavetofightthislustdungeon.Oh?Youlost,nowyourapetprincessthatisconstantlyhorny,constantlywantyourmastersattention,willfollowyourmasterscommandsnomatterwhat.Soyeah..wejustwatchedacharacter'sentirelifebecompletelyandabsolutelydemolishedandforcedtolikeit.NottomentiontheMCbeingforcegenderbentandbasicallybeingtrickedintothinkingheactuallyhadachoiceaboutit.Thenwhenhe/shedecidesfine,Ijustwon'tmanifestmyselfandtryandfindadifferentway.Thedarkgoddessstraightforceshertomanifest.Thatprincess,I'msurprisedhasn'trippedherownthroatoutanddecidedtoatleastpreserveherdignity.I'vereadalotoftrashnovelsinmytime,thisoneisrightupthereinmytop10ofincrediblybadwriting.