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Followingtheunfortunatenewsofhisgrandfather’spassing,Lucienisforcedtogobacktohisoldhometown.Asthesolelivingrelative,hegetstoinherithisoldpop’sbookstore.Aplacewherehehadspentmostofhischildhood.

There,however,hefindsanancientbookthatendsupshakinghisviewontheworldandraisingthecurtainoverasideheneverknewexisted,onefilledwithmagic,mythicalcreatures,andallsortsofdangers.

“Waitaminute!Areyoutellingme,grandpawasawizard?!”

FollowLucienasheslowlyunveilsthemysteriesofthishiddenworld,meetsnewpeople,savesprincesses,befriendsdragons,anduncoverstheancientsecretsofhisbloodline.

ThisisthestoryoftheBookstoreMage.

Thisstoryissetinamodern-daysetting.It’snotearthbutaparallelworldsimilartoourswithdifferentcountriesandallofthat.

Therewillbesomeworld-hopingelementsdowntheline.

Therewillbesomeelementsofarmybuilding.

Therewillbepets.

Therewillnotbeanyharem,I’mnotconfidentenoughtowritearealisticonewithoutcompromisingtherelationships.

TherewillbearealisticdevelopmentofboththeMC’spowersandhisrelationships.

Thiswillseemlikeaslowstart,butitwillhopefullypickupthepacewhilststillbeingenjoyable.

I’mnotwritingthechaptersnow,thisisanolddraftIhadforalongtime.Sotheupdateswillbeconsistent.

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