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«Introduceyourself!»ThesmileonAoba’sfaceslowlyconverged,andhebecameextremely...Readmore

«Introduceyourself!»Thesmileon Aoba’sfaceslowlyconverged,andhe becameextremelyserious,whichmadehisfacein theshadowof thebacklightevenmoreterrifying.«My nameis YamanakaAoba,fourteenyearsoldandlivein theAnbudormitory.I workin theKonohagakureIntelligenceDivisionandlivean ordinaryquietlifeeveryday…»Aobatransmigratedto theworldof Naruto,becamean ordinaryYamanakaclanmember.Dueto hisfrailbody,theclanarrangedforhimto becomeAnbuin theKonohagakureIntelligenceDivisionandconductmind-readinginterrogationwork.Whenhe didn’tknowhowto passthelevel,he awakenedtheMindReadingSystem.Notonlycouldhe readmemory,buthe couldalsogetrewards!Aobalearnedfromthememoriesof thosewhoneedto be interrogatedthattheninjaworldwasfarmoredangerousthanhe imagined,so he decidedto growwretchedlyin theKonohagakureIntelligenceDivisionandwouldneverwaverbeforebecominginvincibleninjaworld.Tenyearslater,theKyuubiRampagebrokeout.SeeingthatKyuubi’sclawswereaboutto smashtheKonohagakureIntelligenceDivision,Aobahadno choicebutto makea move.«Kyuubi,youaretoostrong.Youshouldstillbe sealed!»Collapse

AbilitySteal,Acting,Anti-socialProtagonist,AntiheroProtagonist,CautiousProtagonist,ComedicUndertone,DepictionsofCruelty,Fanfiction,Gore,HidingTrueAbilities,Low-keyProtagonist,MaleProtagonist,ManipulativeCharacters,Misunderstandings,Naruto,OverpoweredProtagonist,PowerStruggle,Rebellion,SchemesAndConspiracies,SkillAssimilation,Strategist,System,UnderestimatedProtagonist,WeaktoStrong,Bloodlines,Cheats,CleverProtagonist,ColdProtagonist,DeterminedProtagonist,EyePowers,HiddenAbilities,MobProtagonist,MultiplePOV,ProtagonistStrongfromtheStart,RomanticSubplot,RuthlessProtagonist,SecretIdentity,SecretiveProtagonist,StrongtoStronger,Torture,Transmigration

crappyfanfic,goodpremiseandhorribleexecution.themcisprettymuchopyetheisstillhiding???likewtf......thechuninexamarcwasstupidlikewhy?..theauthoriscomingupwithallsortsofbstoextendthechapters.thefirst200ishchaptersaregoodthengoesdownhill

I'vehadafunreaduntilIcouldn'ttakethestupidityanymore,soIdroppedit.C+rank

Quote:AzurereaderThefirst200chapterweregoodbutafterthatitseemsthattheauthorranoutofideasandstartedspammingbull$hi/itturnedintoanaverageChinesecultivationlikenovelhekeptsayingthathelikedtobestableandwon'tinterferebutkeptpushinghisheadeverywhereandhisplansarejustforcedlikehecouldgobuygroceriesandtheauthorwillstartpraisinghimofhowgeniusheisandthatbuyinggroceriesfromthatstorewillcreatesomebutterflyeffectorwhatnot+afterhemetorochimaroandtookhisassistancememoryheshouldhavestartedtominimisehisrelianceonthesystemanddoinghisownresearchtobecomestronger,butnotheauthorhadtogivethesystemabuff.formethesystemshouldhaveplayedmoreofasideroleforjustmakinghisprogressfastertokeepupwiththeeventsnotoutrightgavehimkekkeigenkaiandatsomepointitwasstatedthathewasatmostabletodefeatanelitejuninthroughasneakatackbutaftersomechapter'smofoliterallybeatthekazekageitwasalsostatedthatafterhanzothesalamadarattackedthesandvillagehemightdiewhileinthecannonthemanwasliterallyhailedasahalfg@dofninjaiknowhewaskilledeasilybypainbutmanthatwaspaintheholderoftheeyesofthesageofsixpathsthe5villageswereliketoysinfrontofhimifhedidnotfalltotalknojutsuhewould'veendedthevillagesystem

Tenyearslater,theKyuubiRampagebrokeout.SeeingthatKyuubi’sclawswereaboutto smashtheKonohagakureIntelligenceDivision,Aobahadno choicebutto makea move.«Kyuubi,youaretoostrong.Youshouldstillbe sealed!»Notjudgingthenovelsinceihaven'treadit,butifromthebottomofmyheartHATEthistypesofsynopses

Thefirst200chapterweregoodbutafterthatitseemsthattheauthorranoutofideasandstartedspammingbull$hi/itturnedintoanaverageChinesecultivationlikenovelhekeptsayingthathelikedtobestableandwon'tinterferebutkeptpushinghisheadeverywhereandhisplansarejustforcedlikehecouldgobuygroceriesandtheauthorwillstartpraisinghimofhowgeniusheisandthatbuyinggroceriesfromthatstorewillcreatesomebutterflyeffectorwhatnot+afterhemetorochimaroandtookhisassistancememoryheshouldhavestartedtominimisehisrelianceonthesystemanddoinghisownresearchtobecomestrongerbutnotheauthorhadtogivethesystemabuffformethesystemshouldhaveplayedmoreofasideroleforjustmakinghisprogressfastertokeepupwiththeeventsnotoutrightgavehimkekkeigenkaiandatsomepointitwasstatedthathewasatmostabletodefeatanelitejuninthroughasneakatackbutafteraomechapter'smofoliterallybeatthekazekageitwasalsostatedthatafterhanzothesalamadarattackedthesandvillagehemightdiewhileinthecannonthemanwasliterallyhailedasahalfg@dofninjaiknowhewaskilledeasilybypainbutmanthatwaspaintheholderoftheeyesofthesageofsixpathsthethe5villageswereliketoysinfrontofhimifhedidnotfalltotalknojutsuhewould'veendedthevillagesystem

Verynicefanfic.AuthorusedhisotakumindtofillthegapthatuntilnowNarutofansarelefthanging.Fanficbutitreallywillmadesense.SpoilerExampleIvealwaysfeltthatSarutobiHiruzenisaverybadhokagewhenIwasyoungerbecauseofhowNarutowasbroughtup.Higherupsknowhisparentscontributionbutwhydidheliveacompletemiserablelifeasakid.Helivedinpovertyandmalnutritionandrejection(understandable).IneverlikedthehokagewhenIrealizedthat.Thisnovelwillgiveyouanothersideofhim,afanficreasonofhisactionsandhowherisetopower.IlikethelowkeynessofMCbuthasthemeanstoactinthedark.Itsjustthathe'sgettinginvolvedtoomuchthatwouldcompletelychangetheNarutostorybeforeNarutoevengetsborn.Sadlythatitdoesnthaveenoughchaps.Andmtlisunreadable

Funread,hasflawsbutisveryentertaining.

Ch221:Aobacouldnothelpbutpraisehimself.Evenhefeltthathisthoughtsweretoosmart,andhedidnotknowhowtodescribethem.

Reallygoodstory,amazinglywellwrittenwithasmartandcautiousMCwhouseshisbrainoutsmarteveryone.Highlyrecommendit.

It'sawellwrittenstory.AbeautifuldarkimaginationofNarutoworld.Ireallylikeit.