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EdwardHillwasanoldman,contentwithhislotinlifeasagodfather,preparinghisretirement...Readmore

EdwardHillwasan oldman,contentwithhislotin lifeas a godfather,preparinghisretirementwhenan unexpectedambushruinedhisplans…Steppingthrougha portalof lightwasdangerousandfoolhardy;stealingthedestinyof a youngmanwastasteless;butwhenthechoicewasbetweenthatanddeath,he wasmorewillingto takethatdeal.Now,strandedin a newworld,alonewithno support,surroundedby peoplewithtreatinghimlikea commodity,he mustchoose.Toetheline…Or,onceagain,createhisownpath…—Andthen,therewasthismysterioussystem,callinghima hero…Whata ridiculousidea.…Now,updated4chaptersa week.Currentscheduleis Tuesday,Thursday,SaturdayandSunday.Collapse

LitRPG,PortalFantasy,Isekai,Strategy,Dystopia,GameElements,HighFantasy,Magic,MaleProtagonist,AgeProgression,SecretIdentity,Adventurers,AntiheroProtagonist,Assassins,Crime,Dungeons,KingdomBuilding,Nobles,Student-TeacherRelationship,WeaktoStrong

It'snotbadbutIhonestlystruggledtoremainimmersedwhilereadingit.ItfeltalittlewordyattimesandI'doverallsayitjustisn'tforme.

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Idon'thaveacompleteevaluationyet,butI'vereadatleast50chaptersandfromwhatI'veseensofar,thenovelisverygood.Theprotagonistiscunningandintelligent,extremelymanipulativeandcertainlynotagoodperson,buthe'snotabadpersoneither,hejustdoeswhatneedstobedone.Theenergysystemisprettyeasytounderstand,nothingtooinnovative,theworldbuildingisgoingwellsofarandthecharactershavepersonalityandaren'tjustcardboardcutouts.IratethisnovelwithapotentialBorB+.I'llreadafewmorechaptersandthenmakeamorecomprehensiveassessment.

Thisstoryisvery4star.Itisn’tgoingtoblowyouawaywithhowcreativeordeepitis,butitisgenerallyoriginalenoughforastoryfromRR.TheoldmanMCisOPenoughtogetawaywithdoingwhathewants,whichisjustdifferentfromtheusualmostofthetimetobeinteresting.Ifyoudon’tlikethewholeOPMCconcealingpowerandlurkintheshadowsthingthismightnotbeforyou.Hedoesshowoff,butneverallthecards.ItisabitofaslowburnwithmostactionnotbeingsuperlifethreateningoredgeofyourseatgivenMCrarelygoesallout.Allinallyouprobablywon’tlosebraincellsreadingthis.

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