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Nathaniel'sbusridewassupposedtobejustanotherboringcommute.Butnow,he,23fellowpassengers,andacorginamedBiscuitarestuckina"Helldifficulty"tutorial,battlingmonstersandlevelingup.WithfiveyearstogetbacktoEarth,Nathaniel'sgottogetahandleonhisterrifyingtalentformanamanipulation-fast.Followhiscrazyjourneyashetakesonnightmarishfoes,grappleswithmoraldilemmas,andteamsupwithaneccentricbunchofalliestooutsmarttheodds,survive,andemergestrongerthananyoneelse.*NewchapterswillbereleasedonMonday,Tuesday,Thursday,andFriday(CET).Occasionally,ImaypostanadditionalchapterifI'mableto.Collapse

Anti-socialProtagonist,AntiheroProtagonist,CalmProtagonist,CharacterGrowth,CleverProtagonist,ColdProtagonist,CrazyProtagonist,CuriousProtagonist,FastLearner,Hard-WorkingProtagonist,IntrovertedProtagonist,Magic,RPG,Survival,SwordAndMagic,LitRPG

StoryDevelopment:4WritingQuality:3WorldBackground:4CharacterDesign:3Asofchapter179.Let'sstartwiththeplot.Agroupofpeoplefromabusgettransportedtothetutorial.It'ssetathelldifficulty,thehighestyoucangetpickedto.Fromtheverybeginning,themaincharactershines.Hehassomesortofbattleinstinctandimmediatelyusesmana,thoughonlysubconsciuosly.Everyonegets2skills,onecommonandtheother"fitting"them.Fitting,becausethereareexceptionstothisrule,andauthorjustmentioneditcasuallyafterahundredchapters.SomcgetshisFocus,whichhelpedhiminbattleandManaManipulation,orsth.Heisageniuswhenitcomestomana.Unfortunately,thereareotherpeoplethere.Hisabilitiesjustsuck,comparedtowhatotherscando.ForexampleDesintegrationskill,whichliterallydisintegratesanything.Anyway,thereisthisgirlnamedSophie,SpoilerwhohasManipulationability.Shebasicallyf#cksupNathan's(MC'sname)brainandheforgetssomeofhismemories.Thereisalsothething,withhimnotbeingabletohurtheratall,whileundertheeffectofherability.Ofchedoesn'tkillher,becauseofthepotentialbenefits,shecanprovide.Ifshejustdied,ourprotagonistwouldhavetospend2moreminutesonfighting.SecondlySpoiler,hisFocusmakeshimsupperssallhisemotions.Hegetsdissedeverychapter.Likereally,ifyouarethisstrong,showthemtheirplaces.Itonlygetsworseinlaterchapters.TheauthorreallyhatesNathan.Hegiveshimmultipleobstacles,informsofhis"comrades".Mconlysnaps,aftersomeonehurtthegirl(Lily),thathascrushonhim.Heexplainsthatheowesher.SpoilerSheusedherskill,Sacrifise,toregrowhisleftarm,simultaneouslygivinguphers(shehasahealingabilityandgetsitbackinnotime).Nathanielkills2guyshejustmet,andwantstokillSophie,thebitchwhotriedkillinghim,butLilymakeshimstop.It'sreallyfrustratingtowatchhisenemiesstilllive,justbecauseofsomenonexistingmoralshehas.Atthebeginningheappearedcoldandruthless,butlaterhe'sjustabigjoke.SystemSystemisnotbadlywritten.Thereisthiscoolstatuswindowanditlooksnice.Youcanlevelskillbybecomingmorefamiliarwiththem.Also,thereislittletononeexplenationsfromthesystem.Onlythenecessarythingsyougetfromsidequestandquestareexplained.Questaregenerallyaboutclearingafloor.Theyvaryfromsurvivingtokilling.Therealpowerupsaregenerallysidequests.Youcangetthemcompletewhilekillingmonstersandlevelingupyourskills.Therearealotmoresidequests.Ithinkasofnowtheyhadbetterrewards,thanthequests.OvrOverallthestoryisnotbad,butIstartedhatingthefewcharacters.IalsowaspreparedforalonerMC,readingthetags,butheisjustsociallyawkward.Theauthordoesn'tknowhowtowritehumanrelationships.Hejustkeepsrepeatingsamethingoverandover.CharactersaretoochildlishandMcbeingawussdoesn'thelp.Iwouldnotrecommendittopeoplewantingtoexpolreanewworld,wantingtoimpersonatetheprotagonist,asitwouldonlyangerthem.Youneedtokeepyourdistance,toreallyenjoythisread.Midnovel.

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Beautifullycraftedstory.Justgiveittimeandyou'llgrowtoloveit

OkaysothestartisabitrockyandyoufeeltheMCistalkingalotbuttrustmeheisverygoodanddumbheknowsthathimselfespeciallywhendoesthingswhichyoushouldn'tdo.ButhealsohasaveryinterestingandMysteriouspastwhichmakesitworthit,andtherearealotofffleshedoutcharactersandlotsofactionsoifyoulikefastpaced,brutalactionandmindgamesthisisyourcupofteamyfriend

Хорошойтайтлнояпочтивкинулєгокогдаидиотначалстрелятьвубитоговолкааневшаманакоторйєгоконтролировалатакжевсамомначалеондаженепопталсяузнатьнавкидругихикакпозжемузналитамблауймаполезнхнавковкоторємоглибоченьсильнопомошиетоєщобольшеменяроздражаєттакоєощущениєчтоглавнйгеройтоумнйтоонглупйивоттаконпереключаєтсяступогонаумногоиизумногонатупогоиетооченьглупососторонавтораєслитделаєшглавногогерояумнмтопустьбудетумнманеделаєтелементарнєошибкикоторєлюбойздравомслящийчеловекделатьнебудет

Daremiopiniónhastaelmomento(cap98)meparecemuybuenoalprincipioalgososoperofuemejorandoconeltiempoinclusohastadondeloeleidoenestosmomentosestamuchomejorqueelinicio,mejorandocadavezmás,mealegromuchodeelloyojalaycontinueconesteritmodecadavezinteresarleallectoryquenosehagaaburrida,esperoycontinueasí.(Actualizaremiopinióncuandollevemuchosmáscapitulosparatomarlocomosustanciales).

Unlikewhatanotherreviewermentioned,themultiplePOVisfine.It'srareandonlyusedasawaytoshowhowtheMCseemslikefromothers'POV.Thestartisalittlerocky,asiftheauthoristryingtofindtheirwritingstyleandcharacters,butitstabilizessoonenough.TheMCalsoisn'twhinycomplainer.They'remoreofanantisocialcynic,orjustobservingandemotionallyreactingtotroublesomethingswithinternaldialogslikemostofusdo.Thestoryisprettydecent,evenifsomecharactersareabnormallyhostileandthereissome'moviemagic'thatmakesinjuriesvanishorgivetheMCinfinitemanalolSeemstobewrittenbyanEnglishspeakerandtheplotisn'tswisscheese,soifyou'reintothebrutalsurvivalgenrethenthisshouldbeaworthwhileread.

aretherewmdornot?cozsummaryhasnotsaidanythingaboutit

ThegoalofthetutorialistocreateWMD,soit'stheclimbers

ThesecondfloorhasWMD'sohandthereareafewofthem

wherecanIfindtheMTL?

Treadingondangerouspathsmyfriend...

WeaponofMindDestruction.