Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

Tiredofonebadchoiceinthepersonalizationofhistrait,Kaye,nowKai,logicallyplannedhis...Readmore

Tiredof onebadchoicein thepersonalizationof histrait,Kaye,nowKai,logicallyplannedhissuicidefora betterchanceof reincarnationto getridof thecursethathistraithadalmostbecome.Now,Kaiis in a worldwherepeoplebreathefireandfartthunder!*Warning:I’mstillplayingwiththeideaof a femaleandsubmissiveOrochimaruandif youdon’tthinkfemOrochiis a waifuwitha longtongueanda quirkof swallowingthingsthen…welp.Theharemandr18stuffwillhappenlaterbecauseI generallywritethemafterdevelopinga fewthingsbuttheworkis at a fastpacein thetermsof mc’sstrengthandgrowth.Slight AU.Collapse

AcceleratedGrowth,BasedonanAnime,BeautifulFemaleLead,BickeringCouple,Bloodlines,CrazyProtagonist,DevotedLoveInterests,Harem-seekingProtagonist,Master-ServantRelationship,Ninjas,PervertedProtagonist,PlayfulProtagonist,ShamelessProtagonist,TransportedintoAnotherWorld,Fanfiction,Naruto

Asofchapter96.TheonlythingthisreallyhasincommonwithNarutois,well,nouns.Theauthorusesthe"world"and"names",butbasicallychangeseverything.Notthatthisisbadoranything,butanyonewantingafanficthattriestoatleaststaytrueinsomeregardtothecanon,willwanttopassonthis.Ifyourhereforthebattles,don'tbe,theyallsuck.Theauthorschangestothepowersystemaretrash.TheNarutoManga'spowersystemwasalwaysmediocreimo(mainlyinthelaterpart),butthechangestheauthordidhere,makeitanabsolutedumpsterfire.LikeotherNarutofanfics,theauthortriestoenhancethe"political"and"dark"sideoftheNarutoverse,notdoinganythingallthatdifferentfromthem,andit'sallprettylamehonestly.Thecharacters,well,robots.BestIcansay,theyallfeelthesame.MCisbasicallyamachine.Thesmut,doesn'texistinthechaptersI'vereadsofar,chapter95,iswhenitstartsbutthat'sthe"losingvirginity"chapterandit'snothingspecial.Conclusion-Igiveita2foreffort.ItyouwantaNarutofanficthatincludesorisfocusedheavilyonsmut,InNaruto:RebornwithTalentorEroninjaarebothvastlysuperiortothisnovel.

awesomeraresincerereview

Kidmc=instantdrop

That'ssuchasadreasontodropoff...

Qyingyingwouldn'tlike"GoddessofIce-RebornasNaruto'sTwinSister"then...LMFAO

currentlyat:ch.52it'snotbad.informationissometimesexcessivelyrepeatedtotheextentofirritation.anumberof(inmyopinion)unnecessarysentencesarealsopresentineachchapter.itseemsliketheneedlessrepetitionsandthelikearethereforwordcount...sigh.thecharactersalmostallseemtohavethesamepersonalityastheyalmostallsoundandactthesame.somecharactershavebeenpervertedtoirkingdegrees,whileothersarejustcompletelydifferentfromwhatindividualswhohavewatchednarutowouldbefamiliarwith-anditcanbereallyirritatingincertaininstances.thestoryitselfisn'tbad,there'sjusttoomanythingsineachchapterthatseemtobedoingtheirutmostbesttokillanysenseofimmersionareadermightget.ifyou'veseen/readnaruto,iurgethatyouseethisnovelasanentirelydifferentthingwithsimilarnamesandideastonaruto.ifyouhaven'tseen/readit,thengoodforyou.2.5/5giveitatry.

Itwassuperbatthestartbutthestorylineisstartingtolagandthebutterflyeffectduetotheinvolvementofthemchitsusinthefacelikesomeonewhofartedaftereatingaburrito.Thegoodpointsofthestoryarethepowerprogressionandthewaythecharactersaremoreprioritized.Andmythoughtsaboutfemaleorochimaruisitstheauthorsfanficandhecandowhateverhewantsi'mjustgoingwiththeflowsincethisfanficisoneofthegoodonesoutthere.Thegrammarsgreatwithoutrepetionofphrases.Themanhasdonegoodresearchonnarutoandhaschangedtheplotwithreasonablereasons[suchasusingthethoughtprocessesofthemc].Thatsalligottosayandwhoever'sfinishedreadingthisthankuforyourpatience

Thisfanficisreallyworthtoread

Themanmust’veagrimchildhoodtomakeorochimaruasgirl,andfantasizingit.Itwouldhavebeenbetterifyouarefantasizingtsuyuasuifrombnhawiththelongtoungefetish,atleastitisawoman

No.

Nvmthen..whowantedtoseeOrochimarusuckingdicks

OMCemasculinooufeminino?

Itsaboy(sofarstillyoung).

Warning:I’mstillplayingwiththeideaofafemaleandsubmissiveOrochimaruandifyoudon’tthinkfemOrochiisawaifuwithalongtongueandaquirkofswallowingthingsthen…welp.ohhellnah!there'snowayiwouldreadthisshit.icantevenimagineOrochimarubeingagirlbrowtf

IsitbadiamkindainterestedinorochiwithHERlongtongue

Heyyriprocks

It'sironicconsideringintheactualanime...therewasamomentinthemainserieswhereheoccupiedthebodyofawoman...NottomentionlookinglikeoneinBorutoLMFAO