ThunderDawn Books

Multiverse Conquest: Rise of the Saiyan Empire

Author: ThunderDawn Genre: Harem

ContemplatingtheruinsofhisonceprosperEmpire.MarekVega,theNewEmperor,withhisnewfound...Readmore Contemplatingtheruinsof hisonceprosperEmpire.MarekVega,theNewEmperor,withhisnewfoundLegendarySuperSaiyanpower,takeson theProjectof a lifetime!ConqueringeverythingundertheHeavens!NarutoWorld!DXDWorld!DragonBallZ World!!!AndfinallyTheStrongestPrimordialRealm(OG)!Everythingis a landto be takenoverin hiseyes!Watchas he becomesthegreatestEmperorto everlived!!!Therewillbe a Harem,butit won’tbe toomuch…TheMC willbe OP in thefirstarcsbutas thestorycontinuesthiswillchange.Collapse KingdomBuilding,Dragons,Fanfiction,Naruto,DragonBall,HighSchoolDxD,MaleProtagonist,OverpoweredProtagonist,FastCultivation,StrongtoStronger,BeautifulFemaleLead,WorldTravel Leideeallabasesonomoltobuone.Potevaesserescrittomeglio?Si!Marimaneilfattochelastoriaèmoltobuonaesivedechepiùvaavantiepiùmiglioracomeunprincipiantechestaacquisendoesperienza...pensocheconiltempodiventeràunodeimigliorisenonilmigliore Holyf#ckwhatisthistrash?!Notgonnalie,thefirstchapterwashypeandgotmehookedup,butacouplechapterslatertheidioticmcstartsjumpingworlds,threateningandinsultingpeopleleftandrightwiththeexcuseof"i'mthisbraindead,disrespectfulandchildishbecausemuhsaiyanpride"There'salsotheclassic"you'rejustamerewoman,kneelant!"incelauthorsloveusingsomuch,awasteoftime. Hello,myfirstreview,sorryifthatIhaveread83chapters.Short:Theconceptiscool-aflatplanthesizeoftheuniverse,wherethesizeofempiresisthesizeoftheMilkyWaygalaxyormore.AndourMCwantstobuildanempirethroughconquestandhehas2cheats.1st-allowsyoutoimprovegenes(donotaskfurther,theauthorseemstohavenotfiguredouthowitworks)2nd-cantravelaroundtheworldsofshortstories/anime/etc.,theproblemhereisthatitisnotclearhowitworks,theauthordidnotexplain,youneedtofigureitoutyourselfinthecourseofthenovel.Andthat'swhatyouthink,damnit!Yes,it'ssocool,buttheexecutionisdisgusting.AndIamsilentaboutrelationswiththeharem,asifIateaspoonfulofshitfromChinesenovels.Expanded:SpoilerConceptexplainedabove.MС:Theauthorexplainshimasamanwithastrongwill,ageniuswithcharisma,whoisreadytoconquerthecontinents,cutdowncitiestothelastchild,butthispersonbehaveswithhisempresseslikeapussythathasnotseenboobs.TheauthorexplainedthisbysayingthattheMChadneverhadsexinhis30yearsoflife,butreadalotofhentai.Well,Icanacceptit,butitshouldn'tdragonforhalfthenovel,becausetoreadhowtheMC(whoisreadytokillbothwomenandchildren)blushesandforgetstosaythewordsatthesightofHISEMPRESSESandcannottakethefirststep.It'slikereadingaChinesenovel,constantlycringingatthedialoguebetweentheMCandtheharemHarem:AsIsaidabove,theharemMCactslikeapussy,whichisweird,hespends10yearsofhislifeinacellwithYoruichi,butstillhasn'tsleptwithherandturnsredlikeapussyatthesightofher.Thisisfine?10yearsoff#ckingnexttoawomanwhodoesnothideherexhibitionism(afterturningfromacat)andyoustillhaven'tsleptorkissed?Thisisnotthedevelopmentofaharem,thisissomekindoff#ckedup.AddtothisthattheAuthordoesnotdevelopthecharactersoftheharematall.Itjustsaysthat'sthefandomhereistheFMСnowshe'stheemperor.IfyouwanttoknowaboutthecharactergoreadtheoriginalanimePeacebuilding:I'monchapter83anddon'tknowanythingabouthisempire.Iknowthatthecontinentisverylarge,andthereisanotherempirethatneedstobeslaughteredforbetrayal,that'sall.ButthiscanbeexplainedbythefactthatMChasbeenrunningaroundotherworldsallthistimeandgatheringreliablepeopleforhisempire.Butthere'salsoadamnproblem,theMCisrunningaroundabunchofdifferentanime,takingcharactersfromthereortalkingabouttheplotoftheworldasifIshouldknoweveryfandomthattheauthorhaschosen.Iwantexplanations,IwanttounderstandwhatthecharactersaretalkingaboutandIhavetogoogleandgoogleandit'sf#ckingannoying.HewantedtobuildhimselfafloatingcityandgoestoWater7(OnePiece)totheIcebergfordesign,ANDNOTHINGEXPLAINSWHYHEFUCKINGCOMEHERE.IunderstoodasaloverofOnePiece,butthosewhodonotrummageshouldwillgoogle.MCPowers:MCiskindaf#ckingOPbutkindofnot,thepowersystemisn'texplainedadequatelyandyoujustdon'tunderstandwho'sgoingtokillwhoinonehit.Butthisisnotthemaindisadvantageforme.MCfirsthasthepowertoresurrectpeople,butdoesnotresurrecthisdeadcitizensoftheempire(Idon’tknowwhy),althoughheresurrectsabunchofpeople(20or200thousand,Idon’tremember)inthemassacreofLelouch’sworldinordertocalmLelouch’ssister.Seriouslytheauthor,thepowertoresurrectpeoplelikeit'sgoingtothestoreforcandy,itf#ckingbreaksallthetensionofthesubsequentstory.Afterall,noonedies,theMCcanresurrecteveryone.TherearestillabunchofsomekindofOPforces,butthisisgarbage,thereareeyesthatcanmakeeveryoneyouseeloyal,damnit’snotlogicalyousay?Iagree,butfortheMCit'seasy,likefartingintothewater,turnedonthepoweroftheeyesandthepersonisloyal.Andafterthat,alltension,struggleandintriguebrokedown.Afterall,atthebeginningofhistoryyoucansubjugateeveryonewiththepowerofyoureyes,whythehelldoyouneedtoconquersomething?TheconstructionofthesubordinateforcesoftheMC:TheMCrecruits50,000kidsandbringsthemintoakillertrainingpodfor10years.TrainersareGarp(OnePiece),Yoruichi(Naruto),ZoldyckFamily(Hunter).Chapter10isdevotedtothis,showinghowthetraininggoes,howtheMCinteractswithchildren.Howkidslearntokill/hide/etc.Intheend,atournamentforthebestkillerstakesplace,outof50thousandchildren,about5-10peopleremain,whoarethebestintheirfield,thestrongest,andsoon.TheMCturnsthiseliteintoSaiyans,apparentlyasarewardforthebestofthebest.WhydidIwriteallthis,ingeneral,thiswholethinglookslogical,exceptforonefact-theMCatthebeginningwenttotheworldofDxDandtookMatsudaandMotohamaasgeneralsandturnedthemintoSaiyans.Yes,yes-youwerenotmistakenaboutthesesecondarycharacters,withoutstrength,withoutwill,withoutanything.JUSTBECAUSETHEYLOVEBOOBS.Youcansay-topicstater,youarebiased,maybetheauthorlovesthesecharactersandwantsthemtobeusefulandplayanimportantroleinhisfanfiction.Ithoughtsotoo,butno.TheMCjustmadethemSaiyansandsaidhewouldpickthemupaftergraduation.GRADUATION,CARL.Thistwistkillsalltheworkofthechildrenoftheassassins,whofor10yearslearnedtokill,trainednon-stopandallinordertohaveameagerchanceofbecomingaSaiyanwhentheiremperorgavethispowertosomeminorbastards. It'sagoodone... OneofthebestfanfictionnovelAtfirstmaybekindabadbutonceMASTERPIECEalwaysMASTERPIECE Idisagree.Whileitwaswellthoughtout,theexecutionwassimplybad.Imean,abitofbreathingspaceandworlddevelopmentwouldhavemadeitbeplausiblebutitsjusttoorushed.Afterreadingsomeofthebestandworstfanficcrossoversoutthere,thisissimplyaverage,thattooonlybecausetheauthorhadsomegreatideas.2.5/5.Maybe3ish. Youmaybejustreadlessthan30chapterbutitstartgoodin100+chapter Youarejustdesperatelystarvedforliteracy.Iveseen3rdworldimmigrantsthatthinkhotdogsareatopcuisine.Imseeingsimilarities~ Yeahmaybehewhothinkhotdogisthebestfoodintheworldisliterallythemoststarvedmenintheworld,youknowsometimes'thebest'it'snotthebestwejustcallit'thebest'becauseit'suniqueandnothingcanreplaceit No,rathertheyjustdidntknowanybetterthanahotdog+ahighsenseofnovelty.Imsureifstarvedtheydjusteatmore.No,whatyoucall"best"weeithercallthoseunique,deformed,abberantorabnormal.notbest,ifyouthinkraredeformitiesdefines"best"then.wtf. Haveareadbeforejudging.It'sgoodIenjoyeditbutitwasstartingtoincludemanga/animeI'veneverevenheardofwhichruineditforme Itgoestoofast.Cannotfollowthestory.Maybethat'sjustmebutit'slikeohhebeingdestroyedthenbecomegod Haremisjustanono,especiallyforamultiversalstory..... Readthismanthistrulyagold nowyouarejustbeinginappropriate.

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