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Journey to Veresavir

Author: Rhaegar Genre: Fantasy

“Iofferyouanadventure.Inaworldofmagicandmonsters,steelandfire,ruinsandlongforgottenfates.Ifyouarewilling.”VeronwasfedupwithhiscorporatejobinParis.Hequitandmovedtothecountryside,takingastepbacktotakeabreath,tothinkaboutwherehispathhadledhim,andwhathewantednow.Whenhedecidestotakeanapinoneofthequietcountrysideforests,hespotssomethingstrange.Ahazyglowingbirdoflight,veryinterestedingettinghimtofollow.Andofcourse,hebites.Whathefindsisanoffer.Nodemonkingtoslay,norebelliontolead,norgodslookingforapawn.Anadventure,thatisall.JustVeron,andthemagicthathelearnstowield.HeissenttoRenavorandarrivesinamountainousvalley,readytoexploreaworldonthebrinkofchange,withrelicsunearthedinancientdungeons,andbeastsofbloodandchaoslurkinginthedark.Shelterwouldcomefirst,andthenhecouldfigureouttherest.*Whattoexpect:JourneytoVeresavirisanisekaifantasyandprogressionstorywithlitrpgelements.Thelitrpgaspectisverylightatthestart,sonomassivestatscreensortonsofskills.Itwillincreaselaterinthestory.Thepacingisneitherparticularlyfastnorslow,thoughthepowerprogressionitselfisslow.Themainthemesaremagicdiscovery,exploration,action,sliceoflife,monsterhunts/dungeoneering,survival,friendship,andself-discovery.Thetoneandstakesofthenovelvarydependingonwhathappens(whatabasicthingtosay).WhatImeanbythatisthatit’shardformetopindownanoverallfeel.Therewillbechillsliceoflifefocusedchapters,chillfights,butalsohighstakesscenesandsectionswithfear,grief,andtensionattheforefront.Iwouldsayit’sbalanced.I’mtheauthorofAzarinthHealer,andifyoureaditorapartofit,here’saquickthoughtofcomparison.Veresavirisslower,moregrounded,andmoremature.Theprogressionandmagicisn’tasflashybutit’sstillmyvoice,andeverythingIlearned.IthinknomatterifyoulikedAzarinthornot,givethisoneachance,Ilikeitalot:)!

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Journey to Veresavi

Author: Rhaegar Genre: Action

CoverbymyfriendMattias(baconstrap)“Iofferyouanadventure.Inaworldofmagicandmonsters,steelandfire,ruinsandlongforgottenfates.Ifyouarewilling.”VeronwasfedupwithhiscorporatejobinParis.Hequitandmovedtothecountryside,takingastepbacktotakeabreath,tothinkaboutwherehispathhadledhim,andwhathewantednow.Whenhedecidestotakeanapinoneofthequietcountrysideforests,hespotssomethingstrange.Ahazyglowingbirdoflight,veryinterestedingettinghimtofollow.Andofcourse,hebites.Whathefindsisanoffer.Nodemonkingtoslay,norebelliontolead,norgodslookingforapawn.Anadventure,thatisall.JustVeron,andthemagicthathelearnstowield.HeissenttoRenavorandarrivesinamountainousvalley,readytoexploreaworldonthebrinkofchange,withrelicsunearthedinancientdungeons,andbeastsofbloodandchaoslurkinginthedark.Shelterwouldcomefirst,andthenhecouldfigureouttherest.Whattoexpect:JourneytoVeresavirisanisekaifantasyandprogressionstorywithlitrpgelements.Thelitrpgaspectisverylightatthestart,sonomassivestatscreensortonsofskills.Itwillincreaselaterinthestory.Thepacingisneitherparticularlyfastnorslow,thoughthepowerprogressionitselfisslow.Themainthemesaremagicdiscovery,exploration,action,sliceoflife,monsterhunts/dungeoneering,survival,friendship,andself-discovery.Thetoneandstakesofthenovelvarydependingonwhathappens(whatabasicthingtosay).WhatImeanbythatisthatit’shardformetopindownanoverallfeel.Therewillbechillsliceoflifefocusedchapters,chillfights,butalsohighstakesscenesandsectionswithfear,grief,andtensionattheforefront.Iwouldsayit’sbalanced.I’mtheauthorofAzarinthHealer,andifyoureaditorapartofit,here’saquickthoughtofcomparison.Veresavirisslower,moregrounded,andmoremature.Theprogressionandmagicisn’tasflashybutit’sstillmyvoice,andeverythingIlearned.IthinknomatterifyoulikedAzarinthornot,givethisoneachance,Ilikeitalot:)!Copyright©Rhaegar,2025Allrightsreserved.Thisstoryisfullyhumanwritten.Nopartofthispublicationmaybereproduced,storedinaretrievalsystem,ortransmittedinanyformorbyanymeans,electronic,mechanical,photocopying,recording,orotherwise,withoutthepriorpermissionofthecopyrightowner.Youdonothavemypermissiontofeedthisstoryanditscontentsintoalargelanguagemodel.Allcharactersandeventsinthisbookarefictitious,andanyresemblancetoactualpersons,livingordead,ispurelycoincidental.JourneytoVeresavirisonlypostedonNovelFireandmyPatreon,anyotherpublicationisstolenandviolatesmycopyright.

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Azarinth Healer

Author: Rhaegar Genre: Action

Anewworldwithnearlyunlimitedpossibilities.Astatus,classes,magicandmonsters.Sounds...Readmore A newworldwithnearlyunlimitedpossibilities.A status,classes,magicandmonsters.Soundsgood?Well,forIleait didn’tcomequiteas expectedas forsomeotherprotagonists,norwastherea kingor godto welcomeher.Thegrandquest?Well,shemightfigurethatoutsomedaybutfornow,a newworldwithnewfoodis prizeenough.Herfistsat theready,she’spreparedto punchandgetpunched,howeverlongit takesandhowevermanylimbsshemighthaveto regrow.*A storyI’vestartedwritingnowquitea while ago.Transportedto anotherworld,somewhatstandardfantasysettingwithmy beginnerattemptsto makeit darkbutfunny.ThereareLitrpgelementsherebutI do hopeit’snottooheavyandannoying.Thefightsshouldbe interestingandaren’tjustnumbersvs numbers.Contraryto thetitletheprotagonistwillbe quitean offensivefighter.IleaSpearsis youraveragesarcastickick-boxingfastfoodworkerandsoonto be student.Shewillbe transportedto anotherworldratherconventionallyandwillbe confrontedwithsurvivalin thewild.Collapse FemaleProtagonist,LitRPG,Magic,Transmigration,Monsters,GameElements,System,Adventurers,WeaktoStrong,ModernKnowledge,Medieval,Survival,CharacterGrowth,SkillAssimilation,LevelSystem,CarefreeProtagonist Iwouldgivea7/10.Downside:Theauthormadethemaincharacter(female)verycrazy,shehavenoideawhatsheisdoingandsheneverplansnothingandhaveaseveredegreeofADHD(TDAH)whensheisnotfighting.Sheoftendoestheoppositesheisthinkingtodo.Also,sheisstronginabadway,notbecausesheisverysmartoramazingbutbecauseeveryoneinElosisdumb.Highside:theclasssystemisamazingandit'swhatmademekeepreading.Thebickeringbetweencharactersisveryfunnytoo. Q:SoisthisthelastchapterofAzarinthHealer?A:No.Buteverythingafterthis,IconsiderepilogueSowefinished,right?Savetowriteareview.Welp,here'sone:Asolid3/5There'snothingbadaboutitbutnothinggoodeither.Thewholestoryrevolvesaround:1.Mefight.2.Meheal.3.Megainskills.4.Mekill5.Melvlup.Fightsare...Nottobad,nottogood.Can'tsaytomuchaboutthem.Creaturesaren'tbadbuteverythingaboutthefightisjustsobasicitgetsboring.Shehitsstuff,stuffhitsher,sheheals,stuffdies.That'sit.Noschemes,notrapsnosuddenness.JustbasicfarmingRPG.Sidecharactersareokatthestartbutwhenshegetsstrongerthey'rejustirrelevantandwhensomesidestorywiththemhappensIjustwanttheplottoswitchbacktofighting.Andwhenit'sfightingIjustwanttoscrolldowntoseeskills.Skillsareaboutthebestthereisinthisbook.It'sstillworsethensomebookswithovercomplicatedsystemslike"TheLegendofRandidlyGhosthound"whereeverythingisdescribedintomuchdetails.Butatleastit'ssimpleandfunny.Allowssomedegreeoffreedevelopmentbycorepointsandlearningpassiveskills.Ending:Well,nothinghappened.Wejustbeatanotherboss.Cool.ThereweresomechangesintheenvironmentandIguessepiloguewillbeabouthowpeopleadaptedtoitusing'inheritance'sheleftbehind.Shemadeorganizationthatwillhelpeveryone,leftthisthingforthattownsotheywilluseittodealwithCalamity.Thatgirlshetaughtwouldusewhatshetaughttohelppeopledothisandadapttothatproblem.Honestly,shouldn'tbetointeresting.Well,ImaybebiasedbecauseIfinishedreadingReverendInsanitynotlongago,andbycomparison,mostcharactersanywhereseemshallow.Especiallythose10kyearoldguyswhodecidetosleepanddonothingto"maintainbalance?""Meditate?"Well.Whatever.Conclusion:Readifyouhavenothingtoread.Asolidbookwithnobigflawsorbiginnovations Reviewafterall930chapters.(Note:929islastchapterofthestory,930andpotentiallyfurtherisanafter-creditsscenes)Novelisgreat,Ihadablastreadingit,andI'mcertainlywaitingforthatsecondbookedit:secondbookisjustpublishingstuff,I'vebeenhypedfornothingNow,letmetellyouwhatIlikedhereinmainpoints:WorldBuilding:thewholeworldofElosfeelsliving,andnotcenteredaroundMClikeitoftenhappens.Mostthings,ifnotall,havetheirexplanations,likeajigsawpuzzlepieceswe,alongwithMC,areputtingtogetherasweexplore.MainCharacter:hasapersonality,herownmoraleandprinciples,whichshowswellonthebackgroundofanotherworld.OftentimesIfoundmyselfrelatingtoattitudesshehastowardscertainthings.Absolutelyhatespolitics,andIwasgladshedidalltheway.Shehasfunonheradventures,andIconsiderthisaplus,sinceitmakeshersomuchmorehumanethanallthoseMC'swithattitudeslikebecomestrongfirstandforemost,andfunisforafterthatisachieved.Mostnotably,evenwhenherpersonalityhasn'tchanged,itcertainlyadjustedtofitthe'harshreality,'andwhileI'llconfidentlysayIleachapter1andIleachapter929aresamecharacter-wise,weightofallwhathappenedcertainlychangedher.SideCharacters:likeMC,alsohavetheirpersonality,eventhosewe'llonlyeverseeonce.Evenbanditsmadeexclusivelytobesomebodytobekilledwithoutremorsehavetheirpersonality.Quitealotofcharactersleftalastingimpression,andsomehadtheirfairshareofgrowth.QuiteoftentherearesnippetsofsidecharactersPOVs,bothtellingaboutanotherperspectiveandcharacter'sthoughts,thuspersonality.Ifoundmyselflongingformoreofthismomentsinsteadofbeingannoyedbysomewhatfrequentuse,whichtestamentstosomethingatleast.Anotherpointissidecharactermortality:inquitealotofstoriessidecharacterseitherdon'tdieatallordieforthesakeofMC'scharacterdevelopment.Here,Ihaven'tfeltsuch,iftheydie,theydieforthemselves,fortheirownmotivesandreasons,like,youknow,humansdo.System:remindsmeabitofNanomancerReborn'ssystem,butwithoutallthebullshit.Systemitselfiseasy:youdothething,you'rerewardedwithabilities,youdon'tdothething,youstagnate.Verypersonalizedintermsofpathsofpower,meaningyouwouldn'tevermeetexactlysame(intermsofpowers)mages,etc.Butonebigthingtonotehere:systemverystronglyfavorsoverachieving,creatingaviscouspositivefeedbackloopofoverachievingleadingtomorepowerleadingtoevenmoreoverachieving.Whichisn'tinherentlybad,butdoesleavesomeaftertasteforme.Plot:thereisnopressingworld-widemattersthatneedimmediatesolving,whichmeansMCcanfreelydoherownthingwithoutanypressingneedstorushtowards,leavingplotaveryrelaxedwalkinsteadofmadrushfromdestinationtodestination.Iparticularlylikedtheproportionoffightingandotheractivities,mainlyhowbeforeIcangetboredwithroutineorsomethingelse,MCjustrunsofftogiveusafighttowatch.Talkingaboutplotisborderlinespoilers,soI'lljustsaythateverywalkhasit'sowndestination,andIwasquitepleasedwithhowitwasconcluded.Timepassage:wouldbeastrangethingtohighlightifitwasn'tsostandingouttome.Oftentimesinsuchadventure-centeredstorieshavetimepassagementionedonlywhenauthorsuddenlyrememberedaboutit,ortime-skipsandmoreoftenthannotintheenditsumsupwithquiteridiculousnumber,eithertoolow(likeinaforementionedNanomancerReborn),ortoohighfornoparticularreason.Here,evenifnotmentionedspecifically,timepasses,anditfeelssomewhatright.Like,forexample,whenMCre-encountersateenagersometimelater,andthistimethey'reyoungadultinstead,anditfeels...right.Therearetime-skips,butthey'rereservedforroutinewehavealreadyseen,andthey'remeasuredinmonths.ChapterLength:chaptersarequitelong,butusuallynottoomuch,whichisagoodthing,inmybook.Systemstatus,whichnotoriouslytakeswholechapterssometimes,hereisanadditiontoitinstead,atcertainpointsIcouldevenpredictthereisastatusscreenintheendbythelengthofascrollbar.Maybeit'sjustme,butchaptersgetlengthierthefurtherdownthelineweget,withlastfewbeingabsolutemonstersofalength,butwithhowaction-packedtheyare,Ideemitjustified. it'samasterpiece,ijusthopedtheauthorgaveusmoredetailsinthepoliticalsideofthenovel.andactuallyletusseewhatisbeingdiscussedinthemeetings,iknowit'sagainstllea'spersonalitybutrandomlygoingsomewhere,notlisteningatall,orsomeofthecharactersjustsummarizeditforherissuchaletdown.kindofwanttoseehowthebusinessesthatclairedidboomed.andiknowthenovelisfocusedonfightingandit'snotreallyabusinessnovelbutdorecommendmeone.ty YoushouldlookupTreeofAeons,lotsofkingdombuildinginthisone,almostoneyearperchapteratsomepointcausewellthemc'satree,longchapters(about3'normal'chaptersin1),andthere'squiteabitofmeetingsthathelisteninfortowns,merchants... okaythankyoufortherecommendation IfyouwantabusinessnovelthenboydoIhavethenovelforyou.Itisafinancestudentswetdreamandifyouareevenslightlyinterestedinmoneyyouwilldefinitelyenjoytheabsoluteshitoutofit.It'sakoreannovelcalled"PastLifeRegressor"andit'sessentiallyaboutamanwhosawtheendoftheworldinasystemapocalypseandwentbackintimetothedayofhisbirththroughasystemreward.Hethenproceededtousehisfutureknowledgeandfinanceeducationtotakecontroloftheworld'sfinancesaswellasgetamassiveheadstartontheotherawakened.It'sgenuinelyoneofmytop5novels,maybeeventop3. sorryformylatereply,haven'tbeenusingthiswebsitesinceifinishedthenovel.I'llgiveitatrythosoundsfun ifyouseechapterspast929withaslowandunsteadyreleasespeed,no,thestoryisnotdying,itended,theauthorisreleasingPoVandepiloguechapteroverlongtimetogiveusreadersafeelingoffadingoutinsteadofasuddencut.itsagoodthing. I'vespentalongtimeinthecomments.I'mexcitedtoreadthesekindsofnovels,whosewritersinspireandteachesmemoreinwriting.She(?)seemscoolandIkindoffeelasenseofconnectionwithherwriterpersonalityevidentinherwritingstyle.She'sgotimperfectionsbuttriestofixit. OkayThisNovelWasGreatEspeciallyTheSystemItWasUniqueAndItDidNotBoreYouWhenSheWasLeveling.....UntilMcBullshitRomanceWasIntroducedAuthorKeepsShovingMcBisexualRomanceInOurThroats...IBasicallyDon'tCareIfMcWasBisexualOrSheCouldHaveHaremOfBothWomenAndMen....TheThingThatAnnoyedMeIsThatAsIWasReading"AnInterestingArcWhereMcWasLevelingUpBeatingshitsOfThingsAuthorOutOffNowhereIntroduceMcSadGrimmyRomanceOutOffNowhereWhichBasicallyItDoesNotEvenLast.....McBasicallyHasLike6FailedBisexualRomanceUpToChapter800IGotTired" Droppedatchapter46.Ikepttryingtoreadmoreandgettosomeactualgoodstuffbutthemaincharacterturnsthisnovelfroma5/5toa1/5.Oneofthose"good"maincharactersthatareactuallyjuststupid,naive,andgullible.Withmoralsthatgetinthewaymorethananything.Shedoesn'tevenapplythosemoralstoherselfandseemstonotcareifpeopletrytokillheroruseheragainstherwillfortheirownbenefit.SpoilerForcedtoactasalivetrapspotterbyonegroup.Someonealsoliedtoherandconvincedhertodiveintoadeadlydungeonthatshewasn'treadyfor.Allshedidwasgetangryatthemandthenlater,outofpity,shegavethematonofextremelypreciousinformationonhowtoadvancetoabetterclass.Thisnovelmakesmewanttoreadaboutevilprotagonistsbecauseatleastthey'llgiveash*tabouttheirownwellbeing. theauthorfinishedtherewriteofthefirstbook,asaresultifyoustartreadingordecidetoreadagaintheinitialpartofthestoryshouldfeelmorelogicalandpolishedwithclearlydefinedcharacthersandchoices,ifyoudroppeditinthefirst100chitsnowagoodtimetogiveitasecondchance,andrememberthatoldreviewsofpeoplewhodroppedintheearlychaptersmightnowbeobsolete.moreinfosintheauthornoticepastchapter895foranyinterested ThisisastoryIwantedtolike,butafter140chaptersIgiveupandit'slargelyduetotheMC.Earlyoninthestoryshetellsherselfjokesinwhatfeltlikeacopingmechanismtokeephersanesinceshewasthrownintoadangerousnewworldandwasaloneformonths.Thenthefirsttimeshegoesintoatownshebuyssomuchfoodbecauseshewaseatingthesamethingformonthsandfinallyhadchoices.Thiswasallgreatandmadesense.Thentheauthordecidedthesetwothingsweregoingtobeherdefiningtraitsandtheextentofherpersonality.Issheinadangeroussituationandthepeoplearoundheraretellinghertobeserioussotheydon'talldie?Toobad.She'sgoingtocontinuetogoofoffandmakejokes,thengetannoyedattheothersforbeingtooserious.Hasitbeenmorethan5paragraphswithouthereating?Betterstopwhat'sgoingonsoshecaneat.It'sexplicitlystatedanyoneatherlevelofstrengthcangodayswithouteating,butevenifthey'reinthatdangeroussituation,she'sgoingtopesterherteammatesforfoodbecausethepersonwithcrackleveladdictiontofooddidn'tbringany,furtherpissingthemoff.Sheisacaricatureofherselfandpeoplewhoreached600+saidsheisacaricatureinevenmoreways.ThemoretheMCwasinachapter,themorepissedoffI'dbeattheend.Somanyofthesidecharactersareuninterestingandthestoryisbasicallynon-existent.Mostofthemhaveonepersonalitytraitorthingandthat'sit,justliketheMC,whileafewhavemoretothemthenthatandareinteresting.Sadly,mostoftheinterestingcharacterswereintroducedinthefirst50chaptersanditseemsliketheauthorwentforquantityoverqualityafterthat.Asforthestoryshegoestoaplace,fightsthings,getsstrongeruntilshecan'tgetstrongerquickly,getsbored,andmovesontothenextplace.Andthe"interestinghooks"ofthestoryaretoldsovaguelythatIquestioniftheauthorevenbotheredthinkingupastorytoworktowards.There'slocalissuesshehastoresolvethatgetsabitmorethought,buttheoverarchingstoryishintedatwithasmuchsubstanceandprecisionasafortunecookie.Ifyouhavenothingelsetoreadorwantjunkfoodyoucanshutyourbrainoffwhilereading,Isupposeyoucandoworse,butyoucandefinitelydobetter.Also,desperatelyneedsacompetenteditor.Grammar,spelling,etc.swingsfroma2/10attimestoa6/10atbestandmanyoftheissuespresentintheearlychapters,evenaftersupposedheavyediting,werestillpresentover100chaptersin. Согласен.Еслиопуститьто,каконазанимаетсяхернёйижрётможнобылосократитьвсёминимумна200глав.

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