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The Systemic Lands

Author: MisterVii Genre: Adventure

Michaelmustsurviveafakeworld,heandotherpeoplefromEarthhavebeenteleportedto....Readmore Michaelmustsurviveafakeworld,heandotherpeoplefromEarthhavebeenteleportedto.Strugglingtosurvivewithhisweightandfear.Michaelmusttryandfigureoutthemysteriesofthisnewworldheisstuckin.Theotherpeopletransportedtotheemptystonecity,themonstersoutside,andthemysteriousSystemStoreareallthreatsoropportunitiesinequalmeasure.TheSystemicLandsisaDarkProgressiveLITRPG.Takingagrittierapproachtothesurvivalprogressionstory,whenthemaincharacterisn'tasuperathletereadytogoatamoment'snotice.TheuniquesettingmovesawayfromanyofthestandardtropesofaLITRPGsettingandtakesontheairofatruemystery.WhileaslowerstartasMichaelgetshisbearings,thereisclearprogression,stats,andpowerlevels.Avoidingtheinfodumpsofboxes,TheSystemicLandsexcelsatpeopleusingknowledgeofgamemechanicstotryandfigureouthowthingswork.*UpdatesDailyat7PMEST/Patreon30ChaptersAhead.FreeReferenceInformationonPatreon:SpoilerChapterandInformationLinksGeneralImageCredit:GeneralimagesarebyPixabayfromKELLEPICS.CoverCredit:CoverandotherartbyZonkedEye.Collapse AntiheroProtagonist,GameElements,Grimdark,HighFantasy,LitRPG,SwordAndMagic,MaleProtagonist,Isekai,AgeProgression,Strategist,OverpoweredProtagonist,EvilProtagonist,WeaktoStrong,Average-lookingProtagonist,FatProtagonist Thestoryoriginallyhadsomeseriouspromise,butman,eversincetheritualistarctheplothasjustbeenanendlessseriesoffightswithlittletononeoftheintrospectionthemchaduptothatpoint.Ifyoulikefightingwithlittlerestorrecoveryinbetweenforthereader,youmightenjoythewaythenovelturnsout.Butforme,itwasanfrustratingreadtocatchup.3/5. thelandisfullofsystems...eventhewildanimalhassystem..isthatit? Nah,there'sonly1systemlol.Thetitleislikethisisbecausewhendesigningthesystem,authordidany%Speedrun.Worldlookslikeagamemadein:"MakinganRPGgameinJavain5hoursstream"YouTubevideo.Sothenamekindafits. Thisdescriptionisspot-on. thisnovelhaspotentialbutwasruinedbyauthortryingtomakeavillainlastlonger.THATwouldhavebeengoodBUT,anobvioussolutionanddenyingitisplainasinine.whentheritualistshowups,IalreadyknowthesolutiontothisOPvillain.thatistoFOCUSthepointstostrengthentheMC!!!isn'tthatobvious??!!that'swhyIdropthisnovel.hayah MadeareviewawhilebackatChapter80,amcurrentlyuptodateatChapter257/XXXandthingsaredefinetlydifferentnowandimoworse.Themajorityofitisduetothefirstantagonist,theRitualist,buttherearesomeissueswhicharealsomostlyduetomypreferences,whichIwilljustcoverbrieflyfirst.InmyoriginalreviewImentionedthe"Viewpoint"chapterswhereyougotabunchofthesidecharactersPOVs.ImnotafanofshiftingPOVsinnovels,butthesetypesofchaptersweregoodatthetimeastheywerefairlyinfrequent,butasthenovelhasgoneontheyhavejustbecomemoreandmorecommon.Alongsidethis,thereare'bonus'chapterswhicharefromtheRitualists'POV.QuitealotofthemarebasicallytheexactsameasthenormalChapter,butfromhisPOVinstead.I.e.2chaptersbacktobackofthesamefightbetweenMichaelandRitualist,butfromeachoftheirPOVs.ItbasicallyjustendsupwiththemajorityoftheChapterjustcopy+pastedofthepreviousone.Inregardstothese'bonuschapters'theauthor,inanAuthorsNoteonChapterXXXonRRsaid:SpoilerFirst,youaregettingthesechaptersasextra.Nooneisforcingyoutoreadthem.Second,theyarenecessary.Evenmoresoforthelaterantagonists.ThereisnootherwaytoshowthingsoutsidetheMC'sperspectiveandgivecontexttocertainactionsandevents.Imoifthechapterscontributetowardstheplotandare'necessary'thentheyaren'treally'bonus'onesyoucanignore.TheRitualististhemainissuewiththisnovelimo.Putsimply,hehasinsanelevelsofplotarmor.ThefirsttimewhenMichaelandRitualistmeet,thereisabsolutelynowaythatMichaelwouldmakethemistakeheendsupmaking.WeareshownconstantlythatMichaelisawareofallthesetypicaltropesanddoeshisbesttonotmakestupidmistakesandhedoesn'tcareaboutmakingamessorleavingotherstocleanupafterhimyetSpoilerinsteadofjustmeltingtheRitualist,likehedoeswithEVERYotherenemyoreventhosewhooffendhim,hejustletsarandomsoldierstrangletheguyforashortwhileandthatsit.Doesn'tdoanythingtocheckormakesureheisdead,whichisveryoutofcharacterforMC.TheauthoronRRtriedtoexplainitawaybysayingthathewasdistractedanddidntwanttomakeamesssincetheywereinafancyrestaurantetc.ButthatjustdoesntseemconsistentwithhowtheMChasacteduptothatpoint.MCliterallysays:SpoilerOnceyoutorturesomeone,bettermakesuretheyaredead.Nopeoplebentonrevenge.RuthwasenoughheadacheandIdidn’twantasecond.RightAFTERsaying:Spoiler“Juststranglehim,makesureheisdead,”Isaid.Ijustdon'tthinkMichaelisthekindofguywhowouldnotonlychoosethatmethod,butnotevendoithimselforcheckafterwards.ThistypeofthingprettymuchhappenseverytimethatMichaelisclosetokillinghim.PlotarmoralwaysrescuestheRitualist.AftereachofthesetimesMichaelalwaysfeelshelostandregretsitandswearsnexttimehe'llfinishit,butthatneverhappens.Whatmakesitworseimo,isthatwhenitcomestotheRitualistPOVheALSOthinkshelostandswearstobestrongeranddefeatMichael.Ithasgottentoaninsanelevellatelywheresomerandomnewcharacterhasappearedandwho,despitehisplanbeingtosendtheRitualistofftohisdeath,heendsuphelpinghimtoanINSANEdegreeSpoilergetshimanextremelygoodskill,giveshimmonsterknowledge,hybridknowledge,anewterritorytotakeoveraswellasprotectiontogetthereetc.SomecommentsonRRsaidthattheRitualistbasicallyhasanauraofidiocyaroundhimwhichaffectsanyonehecomesintocontactwith,whichisverytrueimo.IthinkifIhadn'tkeptupwiththisfromearlyon,IwouldhavedroppediteitheroncetheotherPOVchapsstartedup,orduringthefirstmeetingbetweentheRitualistandMichael.ThemainreasonI'vecontinuedonwasduetohavinginterestintheMCsstoryandsunkcosttbh.ButIthinkitmaybetimetostop.IamstillinterestedintheMCandthestorybehindtheSystemicLands,butI'mnotsureifthatisstrongenoughtoignoretheissuesformeanymore. ThesecondthemclefttheritualistictobestrangledinsteadofmeltinghimhimselforevenatleastcuttinghisthroatorknifinghisheartwaswhenIstoppedreading.Thatkindofstupidcannotberead.Imeanafterhemeltedrandompeopleforstupidreasons,leavingsomeonewhostolemostofthecity’scashreservesalivelikethatwastoomuch. Theritualisticisonlyaminorvillainimo AnyoneknowanyotherstorieswithanMClikethisandisn'tharem.AndISNTReverandInsanity?Likesrs,askforanevilprotag,andEVERYONEsaysrevins,lol. Toomanylmao,SpiritualattainmentofMinghe,SoulofNegary,Konoha'shypcrite(itsFanFic) Ihaven'theartofspiritualattainment,thanksfellowdaoist!Haveanymore,brother? Everheardofthisquiteunderratednovel?Notmanypeopleknowthisnovelbutit'sreallygoodandhasanevilMC.It'scalledReverendInsanity.

Latest Chapter Chapter 705 – Day Unknown – All Out Attack 05-21 02:19

The Strongest Spellblade

Author: MisterVii Genre: Action

Heroes.Thestuffofstories.Delvingdeepwithinthegreatdungeon.Risingagainstadversitytostandattheverypeakoftheirgeneration.Justinisfatedtobecomenotjustahero,butalegend.BorntotheunrelentingSupremeWarladyElena,hisascensiontoaparagonofhisgenerationisamereformality.Whilehismotherscourstheworldlookingforyetmoretreasurestospeedherpreciousson'sascent,Justinmustsurvivenobledrama,assassins,andslave-drivingtutorstoreachthepinnacleofswordandsorcery.Hisunyieldingdeterminationtoplumbthedepthsofthedungeonwouldseehimbecomeahero,nomatterthecircumstancesofhisbirth.Yet,Justinhasbeenraisedwitheveryconceivableadvantage.Asthedungeonbeckons,Justin'smeteoricrisepromisestodrawhimdeeperthananyhaveeverdelvedbeforeandcrownhimasnotjustthegreatestofhisgeneration,butallgenerationstoeverlive.Sobeginsthelegendof...TheStrongestSpellblade.WhatToExpect:+Numbersgobrrrrrr+SolidWorldBuilding+WeakToStrong+LotsofStats/Numbers+GoodNaturedMC+SupportiveFamily+TigerMother(IntheAsiansense,nottheanimalsense)+MoreFocusonFightingMonstersandLeveling,NotMurderhobo+LotsandLotsofGrindingandHardWork+FastPace,ButLongGrind(Inthetimesense,about3monthsevery5-10chapters)+Positive,CanDo,TypeOfStory+SystemInspiredbykosnik4ReleaseRate:2+Chapters/Day(Ihavealargebacklog,butwillreleaseatleast2/day,butmoreifIwritemore)30+ChaptersonPatreon

Latest Chapter Chapter 211 – Interlude 27 05-21 02:20

Calculating Cultivation

Author: MisterVii Genre: Xianxia

Reincarnatedintoalandofcultivation,YuanZhouuseshisEarthknowledgeandassumptionsto...Readmore Reincarnatedintoalandofcultivation,YuanZhouuseshisEarthknowledgeandassumptionstobecomeageniusundertheheavensforbothbusinessandcultivation.However,hewalksthepathofdefiance,exceedingallrationalcultivationbounds.Hisbusinessideasstruggleagainstthestagnantculturethatpervadestheland,butthethingshedoesn'tlackarehisdriveforimmortalityandpower.WhattoExpect:-Businessandanactualeconomythatmakessense-Cultivationsystemwithlegitstagesthatbuildoffeachotherinsteadofjustnames-Faceslapping-Youngmasters-Noauctions-Beefy5kwordchapters*UpdatesBi-Weeklyat7PMESTMon&Wed,Patreon5ChaptersAhead.Collapse PortalFantasy,Isekai,AgeProgression,RulingClass,MaleProtagonist,Reincarnation,OverpoweredProtagonist,BusinessManagement,ModernKnowledge,AncientTimes,EasternSetting,Immortals,Sects,FaceSlapping,WeaktoStrong I'mfindingmyselfquitelikingit Asidefromexplanations,hypotheticals,andinfodumpsthatgoonWAY,WAYtoolong,Ithoughtthiswasdecentuntilchapter34and35whentheauthorforcedaridiculousandterribleplotdevelopmentintoastorythatalreadyhadtoomuchgoingonatonce.Itwasn'texactlyperfectbefore,either.Therewerealwaysissueswithsomerandomthingpoppinguptostretchoutthestory.That'sespeciallytruewheneverMCpopsoutanotherbusinessideaandweloseachapterortwotodiscussions,explanations,hypotheticals,andthoughtsaboutthebusiness,plusabitmoreforthebusinessactuallybeingsetup.Theauthoralsosaideachchapterwouldhave5000words.WhileIbelieveit,hereallyshouldn'tforceitsohard.Toomanychaptershaveworddumpsneartheendwhereit'sobvioustheauthorisjustpaddingthewordcount.Youwon'tnoticewhenthealready-endlessinfodumpsarestretchedoutabitlonger,butduringotherscenesittotallykillsthestory'sflow.Also,theauthorhaszerocluehowcommaswork.It'salmostlikehe'sintentionallymakingthecommausageabitworseeachchapter,escalatinguntilaroundchapter30wherehalfthecommasthatarethereshouldn'tbe,whilehalfthecommasthatshouldbetherearen't.It'sbrutaltoread.Allthatsaid,I'dstillgiveitasolid3outof5upuntilchapter34,whereIdropmyratingtoa1.5.It'sjustsoforced,terrible,andcompletelyunnecessary.Thestoryalreadyhasathousandthingsgoingonallatonce.Whyforceinanew,muchdumberonewithoutresolvinganyoftheothersfirst? Totallyagreewiththe,abovetheauther'sinfodumpingissimplyrepeatingwhatwassaidearlierinaslightlydifferentway.wordcountpadding.ThestoryactuallystartedtoturnshitwhenMCwascalledapigandwouldrequireacontinent'sworthofresourcestoprogress.constantlyfeedingthereaderwithsh#tstorylineplots,willmeanbiggerbsstorylinestoexplainanddeveloplater.Icannotrecommendthisstoryatall(droppingat35.Ican't,thisisfryingbraincells)whystartagoodstorythatisdecentforthefirst30+chapters,onlytobefeedcrapafterwardsimodon'tstart,preechap30ratingof330+rating1 TheMcluckonchapter34isreallyawful1stescapesoceandemon,getshunterbydemoniccultivator,survivesthenthemasterofdemoniccultivatorforciblerecruitshim Thefunniestthingisthedemonicmastercallinghimlucky Justasmalltipstonotgetboredwhilereadingthisnovel-skipallthoseexplanationaboutcultivation-skipallthosecalculationand'whatif'explanation Greatstory,reallygoesindepthintothecultivationmechanics,andgoodMC.ExtremelydifferentfrommostCultivationstories,butIthinkthestoryisbetterforit.Hasalotofpotential,butsofarisabitofaslowburn. CalculatingCultivationbyMisterViiLetmeaskyouaquestion,doyoulikeCultivationnovelsingeneral?LikeImmortallystuff,goingfromzerotoGodlevelfromanobody?Ifyes,haveeverwonderedhowtheydoit,notthisrealmthatrealm,likereallyhowdotheyit?Dotheyneedtostudy,dotheyneedresources,dotheyneedpills,whatdotheyneed?OnedayMisterViiandhethought,ifhewereaCultivatorhowwouldhedoit.Fightingissooutdatednowadays,it'slikeprimitiveway,let'stalkbusiness,howmuchdoyouwannaear.YuanZhouisanEarthlingwhoafterdyingfindshimselfinaCultivationworldbutwedon'tseethatpart,MisterViisetsusrightatbeginningwherestorystartsandcogsofdestinystartwhirring.WhenoutMClearnsofcultivationhewantstobeaCultivator,becausehedoesn'twanttodieagain,nomatterhowgenericthereasoningmaybetheresomethingsonejustcannotchange.ThefirstthingYuanZhoudoesistostarthisbusiness,becauseCultivationneedsresources,lotsandlots,Immortallyisn'tcheap.Ifsomeoneaskedwhatgothookedtothisnovel,it'sprobablyhowtrueMCstickstohispriorities.Justbecauseajadebeautyiscryingdoesn'tmeanyouhavetogiveupyouronlychanceatsurvival.Theguyshowsit,hedoesn'tevenforgivehisbrotherforhismistakes,heissufficientlyruthlessbutnotamurderhobo,inthatregardheislikeFangYuanonlydrivenbyprofits.Goldenproofthisnovelisit'sdetails.LikeAuthorisgoingalloutonMathandPhysics,Euclid'sgeomatry,Teslavalve,howtodrillatraingle.Thisisprobablythemostdetailednovelinthisregardanditsfairlyobviousfromthetitleitself.MChasabitofanadvantageatthebeginningwhichyouwouldbegintoquestionwhetheritwasanadvantageoratrap,yeahheisgoingtogethimselfinmess.Lateron,thestorymightaddotherelements,somewilllikethem,otherswillhatethem,butIimploreyoutocontinuereadingthis,becauseultimatelyatheartweareCalculatingCultivation.AndYuanZhouwillshowushowyoureallygoaboutachievingImmortality.Chapterlengthis5k,soyeahdolettheloweramountdeteryou,it'salreadygotmorethan100Webnovelchapters. Fromthedescitseemsalrightotherthanmebeingtiredoffaceslappingyeah,anyonereviewing?

Latest Chapter Chapter 160 – Pouring Tea 05-21 03:34