Author: KrazeKode Genre: Fantasy
NoahBrownhadagiftforfighting.Unfortunatelypunchingthingsdidn'tpaythebills,atleast...Readmore NoahBrownhadagiftforfighting.Unfortunatelypunchingthingsdidn'tpaythebills,atleastuntilhediedandanEldritchgodfoundhissoul.Theencounterledhimtoanewworld,summonedbybloodycultists,withnothingbuttheshirtonhisback,andastrangeiteminhissystemmenu.[???]:Asourceofinfinitepotential.Perhapshe'dfinallygettoputhisgiftstogooduse.Collapse LitRPG,PortalFantasy,Isekai,AgeProgression,MaleProtagonist,HighFantasy,SwordAndMagic,WeaktoStrong Ihaven'treadityet,Butitlookspromising.AnMCwhointhedescriptionsaysthatHeisonlygoodatpunching?Thatsrefreshing.ItsabreatheoffreshairfromalltheschemingMCwhohastobeineverynovelandsomehowhastoalwayshaveabigbrain.Here?AnMCwhopunchesisNovel.(punintended) Ilovehoweveryoneisbashingthemcforbeingidioticandbeingemotionallyallovertheplace.Heistransportedtoaplacehehasneverbeenemidiatlywitnessingacultsactivitieswhicharen'tanythingpleasantandthenbeingforcedtofightforhisrighttolive.Anyoneinasituationevensimilartothatwouldbethesame.Ifyougivethebookachancehestartstocometotermswithwhatishappeninginthesecond"book"andhischaracterdevelopsalotemotionally.I'dgivethefirst"book"a3/5goodworldandwritingqualitybutleavescharacterdevelopmentneeded.Thisproblembecomesbetterinthesecond"book",so"book"2wouldgeta4/5forme.Tryingtogiveagoodenoughexplanationwithoutgivinganyspoilers. Anovelofdisappointment.Afoolmcwithaherocomplex.Heisn'teveninhisownworldbutwanttoprotecttheweak.Anextremelystupiddecision.Thenovelhadpotentialbutgotruinedin17chapters.Animmatureidioticmcwhois24yearsold. Bookhassillymcwithherocomplex,whodefeathisenemythroughpoweroffriendship(probably).Ididn'tseeanydevouring,carnageanddestruction,justmcsolvingquestuponquestormaybeithasaslowstoryandIdidn'treadthatfar. Thisseemstohavebeenwrittenbyafanof"HeWhoFightsWithMonsters"withasimilarsystem,powers,characters,andorganizations.UnfortunatelytheauthorcannotwritelikeShirtaloonorwhateverhisnamewas,anddeliveredapieceofjunk.Itwouldn'tbebadatalliftheMCwasn'tanimmatureidiotwithoutselfcontrol.Anyofusreaders,placedinthatsituation,wouldactwithdignitasratherthanajumpingclownthatcan'tcontrolhimselforhismouth.Idon'tfindtheMCfunny,admirable,orrelatable.It'sliketheauthoristryingtocopyJasonAsanobutlackstheskillandthecharacteriswrecked.KilltheMCandwritesomethingbasedupontheworldlike"fightsmonsters"andIwouldwanttoreadit. IfYouWantANovelWithLameIdioticSillyMcWellMyFriendLookNoFurtherThisIsYourNovelPlusItHasALameComedyWhichMakesItMoreGarbage Thisnovelhastobewrittenbyaredditor unfortunatelythisstoryisprettyrubbish,mcsometimeslookslikeanidiotteenager,buthe's24yearsold.mcfaintsallthetime,feelslikethrowingup,getsirritatedeasily,isaclownandwantstobealittlehero,heonlywinsfightsbyluckanditseemshewillalwayskeepgettingbeatenupinfights.butIonlyread22chapter,maybeitwillgetbetter.somereviewssayhe'sOP,itdoesn'tlooklikethat'sgoingtobeit.mcwhoalmostdiesallthetime,isnottheop.Iwilltrymore,butIhavelittlehopethatitwillimprove TheGuyIsAClassicComedyClown....ItSeemsHeWillKeepFaintingAllTheTime #Panic#chaptersbeingupdatedindoublonsortriplons! Canusendaddressforthosepls? Theguybecameatemponassoonasthenovelbegan.Allhighandmightytoapologizing,beinghelplessandexplaininghimselftotheveryfirstwomanhemet.Borderlinebegging.theauthorisasimp.Writesacharactersodesperatetopleaseawomanhejustmetincludingtellingherallhissecrets i'veonlyread12chapterssofarsoican'tbesure,butifyou'retalkingaboutthefirstwomanhemeetsidon'tthinkhe'ssimple.he'sjustanidiot,thefirstmanhemetatthebarhealreadyarrivedsayinghejustwokeupandmomentslaterhecomesscreamingatthemayor'shousethathejustwokeup,thatseemsverystupidtome.hejustdidn'tsaythatheisfromanotherworldbecausethewomanadvisedhim,becausewithhisstupidityhewouldbescreamingthathecamefromanotherworld.atleasthedidn'ttellaboutthegodofthevoid,thatwouldbereasontodrop.sofarigiveita2/10looksabitinterestingbutyourmcisreallydumb,he's24buthe'sactinglikeadumbteenager
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Author: KrazeKode Genre: Xianxia
Whathappenswhenyourealisethatinaworldofpillpoppingmurderhoboyoungmasters,thetrue...Readmore Whathappenswhenyourealisethatin a worldof pillpoppingmurderhoboyoungmasters,thetruepathto cultivationis by makinga wholelotof drugs?Let’sfindout.…Whatto expect?— A lotof spiritanimalsandpokemonreferencesaboutthem!— Grenades!Nukes!EXPLOSIONS!— LifeandDeathcultivationstuff— AlchemyDrugs— FartoomanymemesCollapse PortalFantasy,Isekai,MaleProtagonist,SwordAndMagic,Reincarnation,BeastCompanions There'salotIlikeaboutthisafter90chapters,buttheproblemsmademedropit.EventhethingsIlikearebasicallyallideasborrowedfromBewareOfChicken,whichdidthemallbetteranywayandwithoutallthebaggage.Thisauthoristerriblewithcommas.ForsomereasonthisisacommonproblemwithEnglishoriginals.Itmakesthenovelkindofpainfultoread,sincetherearedozensofcommaerrorseachchapter.Dialogueisweirdandunnatural,plussomecharactershaveannoyingphrasestheyconstantlyuse.Thisisusuallydoneasaveryweaksubstituteforgivingcharactersuniquepersonalities(likesomeonenotusingcontractions,endingsentenceswith~nya,etc.),butthecharactersareoneofthestrongestpointsofthenovel,soIjustdon'tgetwhyit'sdonehere.Aboutathirdofonecharacter'sdialogueconsistsofeither"senior"or"thisone,"like"Thisoneagrees,senior."Almosteverylineoftheirdialoguehasoneorboth.Itgetsannoyingfast,especiallysincethey'reinabouthalfthechaptersoncethey'reintroduced.Iendedupskippingentirechapterssometimesbecausethischaracter'sdialoguewassobad.Peopleconstantlycalleachotherbytheirnameorsomethinglikechild/littleone/seniorwhentheytalk.InthelastchapterIread,90%ofthelinesfromonecharacterwerelike"Notthatway,child"or"Child,comeoverhere."Almosteverydamnsentencehad"child"init.Literallynobodytalkslikethat.It'sawful,andjustabouteverycharacterdoesit.Idroppedthisataroundchapter15ofacompetitionarc.Goingbychaptertitles,therewerestill9chaptersleftbeforeitfinished.Thepacingandstoryflowhadbeenfairlydecentuptothatevent,butnothingexcusesa24chapter"runthroughtheforestandfindherbs"competition.Myothercomplaintsareminorthingsthatprobablywon'tstopanyonefromreading.LikeIsaid,there'splentyofgoodstuffhere,buteverythingIwouldmentionisdonebetterinBewareOfChicken.Definitelyreadthatonefirstifyouhaven'talready.IfyoulikeBewareOfChickenanddon'tmindmyissueswiththisnovel,you'llprobablylikeit,too. Ifyouthinkthisisbad,neverreadMartialPeak.ThisKingrighthereguaranteesyouwillhateit.ThisEmperoralsohateswhenpeopletalkinathird-person. Well,ifheisTheRock,speakingofoneselfinthethirdpersonisacceptable.WatchingWWEwrestlingsome20yearsagowaslikeyesterdaytothisGrandpa,you'llhavetoforgivemeifI'mabitdatedhere. SodissapointedauthormadehimtheChosenOnebych99. Thenaivemctagismissing Quiteagoodnovel.Myonlydislikeisthatallthenovelisin1stpov.Iamnotabigfanof1stpersonpov. Ireadabout130chaptersbutnothinginterestinghappensbesidesthemcbeingexpelledfromthesect,notevenhisstrengthinpracticallynothing,meh.I'mnotsayingit'sbad,buttherecomesatimewhenitgetsboring,atleastforme.try Man...It'sagoodnovel.ButIreadWNtorelievemystresssafterlongclasses,nottoaccumulatemorewithartificialcultivation×sciencetheories.So,notmycupoftea Theyshouldaddsliceoflifetag arat,arat,she'sarat,sheeatstheplants,shefindstheplants,shestherat.she'sdagiantratdatmakesallofdarulez,letsseewhatkindoftroublethatshe'llgetherselfinto What https://www.y*utube.com/watch?v=jAXioRNYy4s Rats,we'rerats theratiszonked PSYCHOstreamerbulliesfellowrats Afterreadingthefirst30somethingchicansayitsactuallyquitegoodandalsosomewhatinterrestingbutforsomereasoniamboredreadingit,probablybecauseitissomewhatslowinthesechapters(evenifyoucanttakethatasthegeneralpaceitseemstoinvolvequitealotofinteractionsbetweencharsthatdontevenhavetobedialogbutalsootherthingspersonlynotwhatiliketoread)(andsinceitdoesnthavemanychidropitalready,maybesometimeinthefutureitwillbeworthitforme) Thisnovelcontains1.PerspectiveofmajorcharactersthatinteractswiththeMC,thathelpsexpandtheworldandcharacterdepth.2.TheMChimselfexploretheworldwithdecentcuriosity/smartasascientist/researchergivingofftheimpressionthatheisanactualtransmigrator.3.Theinteractionwithothercharactersarenottooshallowandhavesomeformpersonality.4.Crisiswaseverted/resolveddecentlyreasonable,withouttoomuchplotarmourWouldrecommendgivingitachance
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