B. Salem Books

The Elder Lands

Author: B. Salem Genre: Fantasy

LucanisthesonofalandedknightinaKingdomthatissurroundedbydiversethreats.Ashecomes...Readmore LucanisthesonofalandedknightinaKingdomthatissurroundedbydiversethreats.Ashecomesofage,hemustmakepeacewithboththetastefulanddistastefulofhisresponsibilities.Butmostimportantofall,hemustfindawaytoeithertameoraccepthisownambitions.*ReadthisifyouenjoyActionAdventure/KingdomBuilding-LitRPGwithoutwaytoomuchnumbercrunchingormillionsofskills.Thereareno'territorystatussheets'.TheLitRPGaspectsarepresentstrictlyontheindividuallevel.Collapse LitRPG,AgeProgression,Wars,MaleProtagonist,GameElements,HighFantasy,RulingClass,Strategist,Military,ArmyBuilding,WeaktoStrong Overallit’sreallygood,thepacingistherightamountforaKingdombuildingstory.Thegrammarisonthehigherendcomparedtoothersofthegenre;howevertheauthor’sproseissomewhatworkmanlikeandwhileitdoesn’ttakeawayfromthestoryitdoesn’tsignificantlyimproveiteither.Theactionisalsorealistic,theplanshatchedbythemcdon'talwaysgohisway.Lucanalsoisn'tanoverlyOPMarySue.Thingsaregroundedanddowntoearth,whichissomethingwedon'tseenearlyenoughofinthisgenre.Havingsomeonewhoisbothnativetotheirworldandnotobviously"thechosenone"atthehelmisagoodchangeofpace.Withproperdevelopment,tobuildonitssolidfoundations,andanearnestleadthisnovelhasgreatpotentialthatmanywillenjoyreading. Мнепонравилосьдайбольше Thisdefinitelyaunderratednovel.Thechapterstakeawhilesoit'squiteslowbutdefinitelyenjoyable.It'sbasicallyastoryofoutMaincharactercomingofage(unlockinghisblessingandapproachingadulthood)andhisattemptstoimprovehisnoblefamilieslands,whichiswherethekingdombuildingcomesin,growstronger,anddealwiththevariousconflictsthatcomewithhisundertakingsandpositionasanoble.Ilovethefactthatthesystemstatussheetkindathingisn'tusedinthekingdombuildingandthemaincharacterisactuallygoverningthelandlikegivingordersanddiscussingwithhisfatherandtheiraideshowtogoabouttheirplans.Notjustthatthepower/skillsystemisreallyniceandtheirsplentyofcoolworldbuildingandhistoryinthestoryaswellasactualpolitics.Thecharactersarealsoveryniceandhavedepth.Notjustthatbuttheauthorincludesplentyofcombatandactioninthestoryandwritesfightscenesverywell.ICANNOTunderstatehowimpeccablethewritingqualityisofthisnovelissohonestlyjustreadthedamnthingalready. Nop,maybeI'llseeitanothertime.BalancereignsObs:Don'tforgettodownvoteme╰⁠(⁠⁠･⁠⁠ᗜ⁠⁠･⁠⁠)⁠➝ IfeellikethismassreleasehashadquitealotofLitRPGnovels Thereviewsonwebnovelseemspromising. Mommy,mommy,daddy'sp*n*stastesfunny!""Stopcomplainingandgetyoursisteranothertampon!" Howisthis...funny? itisn't,thishyperbolaguyisineverynewnovel,istillwonderhowhewasn'tbannedyet

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