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Afterlosinghisparentsin a caraccident,Ryanimmediatelycaughthisfianceecheatingon himwithhisbestfriend.In justa fewdays,he losteverythinghe loved,so Ryandecidedto buya housein themountainsto processallthoseevents.However,somethinghappenedbeforehe couldevenenterhisnewhome:theendof theworld.Monstersbeganto appearoutof nowhere,anddragonsbeganto dominatetheskies.Afterlosingeverything,Ryan,whohadlosthissenseof reality,foundnewgoalswiththeworldin thatstate:surviveandgetstronger.Dungeons,classes,monsters,skills,thechanceto obtaintheDNAof othermonsters…Ryanwasdecidedto usethemallbecausehe no longerwouldbecomea spectatorin hisownlife.Maybewithpower,he won’tloseanythinganymore.Collapse

System,Dragon,ModernDay,SkillBooks,SkillAssimilation,LitRPG,MaleProtagonist

Alright.SoIreadtheentirenovel,all1006chaptersandhereismyreview.I'mgoingtotellwhatwasbadandthenwhatwasgoodfollowedbymyrating.CONSThepacingfeltinconsistent.Sometimesitfeltlikeasnoozefestwhereheisclearingdungeonsandsaying"OhmanIneedtogetstronger"forlike100chaptersandothersitfeelslikeheisgettingstrongerexponentiallyandkillinggods/godlevelbeingsinjustacouplehits.TheMC'spersonalityandcharacterdevelopment.ThroughoutmostofthestoryRyanisacompleteassholetoeveryonefornogoodreasonotherthantobe"Thecoolandedgylonewolfprotagonist"andthroughoutthestoryhehardlygetsbetter.Thelengthofthenovel.NowthisoneiskindaobviousasIimagineitisincrediblydifficulttomakeaninterestingnarrativefor1000chaptersandeventhenrushtheendingslightly.OkaynowI'mgoingtoomoveontothegoodstuff.PROSThefightseems.Ooohthefightseems.Nowitmightseemhardtoimaginebutthefightseemsthroughoutthewholenovelareamazingandattheleastverygood.Theysomehowmanagetostayfreshfor1000chaptersevenwithsomanydifferentcharactersanduniqueabilities.Sidecharacters.SomeofthemajorsidecharactersinthisbookareamazinglikeFemradiel,Merlin,Isis,andLoki.GoodgodtheyaresoentertainingandtheyactuallyfeellikerealcharactersratherthanjustplotdevicesandsomeofthemlikeFemradielevenhavecharacterdevelopment.Thestoryandplot.Nowletmeexplain.Thefirstlike200chaptersareamazingandexcitingandkeepyouontheedgeofyourseatandthenthequalitysuddenlydrops.Nowletmetellyouthatfromchapters300toabout650moderatelyboringandrepetitivebutstillcontainssomefunsoIfyoucanmakeitthroughthatitpicksupagainandstartstogetreallygood.AndattheendRyan'scharactergetssomuchbetter.Nowletmetalkabouttheelephantintheroom.Thewholebeingcuckedbyhisbestfriendthing.InthestoryitisarelativelylargeplotpointandthemotivationforalotofRyan'sactions,itdoesn'treallyaffectthemainstoryalltoomuch.AllI'mgoingtotellyouaboutitisthatthereareexplanationsforactions,regretforthoseactionsfromthemembersinvolved,forgivenessatsomepoint,andnoclicherevengeplotbesidessomecasualantagonizingbecauseitbecomessomuchofanon-issuecomparedtoeverythingelse.Sohereismyoutoftenreview.8/10It'sprettygood

Ok,thisiswhereIdrop.Noonecanhaveeverysingleoneoftheirweaknessesexposedbothphysicallyandmentallyandnotchangeabit,themcisinflexibleandahypocrite.He'sshowngrowthonlyinstatsandskillswithnoroomforimprovementelsewhere,thiswashischancetogrowinsomeformasidefromanewbowandarrow.Ican'tsitthrough200morechaptersjustforthemctosay"Iwasanasshole"andkumbayawitheveryonehehastreatedlikeshit,Imeanforf#ckssake,hewhoisoneofthefewminusculepeoplethatknowsthepowertheyholdisbutamerespeckinfrontofeventhepawnshecan'tevenscratchcontinuestoactlikeanidiotandpreachlogictopeopleandtreatthemascowardswhenhewhocouldn'tfacehisproblemsranforthehillsquiteliterallyafterhehasbyfarthemostterribleweekinthenormalworldbutblamesotherforbeingcowardsinfrontofdemonsanddragons!?Aboveismycommentonch189andIhaven'treadpastthatbutIthinkIwillgothroughandskimthroughsomechapterswithinterestingtitlesortitlesthateludetohowhisrelationswithothercharactersjusttoseeifhehasanycharactergrowth,simplybecauseifhedoeshavesometypeofgrowththenovelwillbecomeatleastsomewhatenjoyableafterreadingnear200chofthemc'sstaleverbalabuseofeverypassingpedestrian.EVERYONEISNOTBANGINGYOURFIANCE!!!

Itisthesameyetoppositeofarcanepath

TheMCisacuckwhobecomesmoreandmoreofasimpasthestorygoeson.Thewritingwasmediocreandpredictable,sameasthecombat.Hehasnoreasontohaveanythingtodowithhisformerbestfriendandhischeatingexfianceandhekeepssayinghewantstoworkaloneyethekeepsgoingbacktohelpthemwhilewhiningaboutit.Quote:eyeofchaosReadtill80chapsandskimmedthroughtill200chapsthemcisretardwhocantmakedecisionsandhelitreallyhaspersonalitydisorderorsomethinghesayshumansareaburdenandtroublesomebuthelpsthembywastinghisownmoneyandtimebutdoesntwanttobecomealeaderthenwhyhelpthem.Inthenameofdebtrepaymentheslavesawayfor6monthsbyallyingwiththesaviourplusthemcisantisocialandbelieveshimselftobealonerbuthelpseverydesperatepersonhemeetsplusheforgiveshisusedtobebestfriendwhockedhimandfkedhisfianceandevenhelpsthemmygodihavebeenwaitingforhimtotakerevengebutitneverhappanedifihavetogiverating2/5andplusitisrepititiveasfkHegoestodungeonsmeetshumanshelpsthemandfarewellandmovesawaytonextdungeonmeetshumanshelpsthemandthesameshitPerfectlysumsupthiscrappynovel!

Waitisitthesameasfirstone?.....btwjustfinishedpreviousone

arcanepathiscountlesstimesbetter.

anditwashorrible..sothismustbereallybad

Omcsofredemúltiplaspersonalidades,alémdeinteragirpracaralhocomaex,mlkcheiodecomplexo.Euqueroqueoautorvátomarnocu,mefezperdertempolendoisso

Ireadthearcanepathtotheendandalsoreadingthisnicestartingplotbuttherearestillmanyloopholesandthestorygetsalwaysboringinthemiddlebecozauthorstretchitandaddalotofunnecessarythingswhichmakesumad,Irecommendhimorhertochangethishabita......

Soarcanepathwenttoofastandthisonewenttoslow

Halfwaythroughnovel,IfellikeIhavebecomeamachine,alwaystheanticipationofwhenwillmcmindsetwillchangewilgrow,otherwisejustMC'sdialogue'sarejustboring/irritating(Iamgettingaffected)Conclusion:goodaction,abitslowpaced

Trash

Readtill80chapsandskimmedthroughtill200chapsthemcisretardwhocantmakedecisionsandhelitreallyhaspersonalitydisorderorsomethinghesayshumansareaburdenandtroublesomebuthelpsthembywastinghisownmoneyandtimebutdoesntwanttobecomealeaderthenwhyhelpthem.Inthenameofdebtrepaymentheslavesawayfor6monthsbyallyingwiththesaviourplusthemcisantisocialandbelieveshimselftobealonerbuthelpseverydesperatepersonhemeetsplusheforgiveshisusedtobebestfriendwhockedhimandfkedhisfianceandevenhelpsthemmygodihavebeenwaitingforhimtotakerevengebutitneverhappanedifihavetogiverating2/5andplusitisrepititiveasfkHegoestodungeonsmeetshumanshelpsthemandfarewellandmovesawaytonextdungeonmeetshumanshelpsthemandthesameshit

andthementalproblemshehastheauthorrepeatsitalmosteverychapterdudethisismyfirsttimeieverfeltsofrustratedaboutamctowritealongassreview

TôbemfrustadocomoMC

Samebro,Iwasexpectingagoodcoldprotagonistandanicerevengestory,butinsteadgotsomehalfasseddumbsaintlikecharacterthatismentallychallenged.Saddevelopment.Droppedittoodw

leonwaswaybetter