The Villain’s Diary – The Heroine’s Character Crumbles

JiangMu,whotransmigratedintothebook,becomesthevillain,andafterfailingtopasstheplot...Readmore

JiangMu,whotransmigratedintothebook,becomesthevillain,andafterfailingto passtheplotsetby thesystemhundredsof times,finallygetsthegoldfinger:a diary.[Itwassunnyon March5th,DingNanrong’sbodyis veryexplosive,buttheclothesareso ugly,ugly,andugly…]DingNanrong:«JiangMu,don’tthinkI won’tkillyou!»[Ontheeveningof March5th,XueMenghanwasaboutto breakoffthemarriage.Thisnymphois so s*upid,whatlinesshouldI say?]XueMenghan:«You’rethenympho!You’retheonewho’ss*upid!Whodo youlookdownon!»…I thoughtI wouldwritea diaryto geta reward,playthevillain,finishtheplot,andlivea YOLOlife.But,I didn’texpectthatthefemaleprotagonistsactuallyhada copyof thediary,andtheydidn’tplaycardsaccordingto theroutine,andtheplotbecamemoreandmorecrooked.…Themorehe wrotein thediary,thefurtherthestorywentfromthemainstory.Themorehe wroteto setup theheroinewithMC likeit’ssupposedto be,theclosertheygotwiththevillain(JiangMu).Themorehe wrotein thediary,thestrongerhe got.(Althoughhappy,butit’stroublingwhenhe hadto takea beating.Andit doesn’thurtat all,hadto putan extraeffort’sin hisvillainactingskills.)Nothingevergoesas he wishes.Collapse

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Betacuckmcallowshimselftobefaceslappedandbeatenlikeadogjustbecause"hehastofollowtheplot".Alsothetranslationisterrible,borderlinemtl.Quiteeasilytheworst"mindread"villainnoveleverwritten,atleastfornow.Tothedudewhorecommendedthisinthecomments:Slapyourself.

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Ifeeldisappointed.Althoughthestartwasgoodthestoryitgetsworse.Themainreasonwouldbe,lackofunderstandingthegenre.Thisnovelwouldbebetteroffasacomedynovel.MoretheplotthickensthemoretheemotionalMCgets.ItgetsfromTsundereMCtoemotionallover.Jokesstartstolosetheirshinebecauseofsuchemotionalatmosphere.Ifyoulookatromance,thereisaveryimportantaspectthatis,"Logic".Theplotisbasedrandomrewards.Randomdoesnotgowellwithlogic.Withoutsolidlogicromancefeelsforced.Authorprobablywantedtomixcomedyandromancetogetherbutonethingdestroyedthewholesetup.Thatis,"IQ"Morespecificallyauthorhasbadmemory.I'mnotdemeaningtheauthor.Butthisisaseriousissues.Coherenceandlogicofthestorystemsfrompasteventsofthestory.Soeverydetailisimportant.Thisstorygetsworseandworseinlogic.

braindeadnovel,1/5.

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