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TheunnamedmaincharacterwakesupasaDungeonCore.Insteadofbeingdeepwithintheearthorin...Readmore

TheunnamedmaincharacterwakesupasaDungeonCore.Insteadofbeingdeepwithintheearthorinacave,thisnewly-mintedDungeonCorefindshimselfdriftingtothebeachofanunchartedanduninhabitedisland.Watchasheexplorestheusesofmana,defendshimselffrompeopletryingtokillhimandconfusesthehelloutofallthehumanswhoattempttounderstandjustwhyhe'sdifferentfromotherdungeons.DISCLAIMER:IhaveonlypostedmynoveltoSufficientVelocityandRoyalRoad.Ifyouseeitonanyothersite;THATISNOTME.ThisstoryisfreeanduntilIdecidetopublishitwillremainthatway.Collapse

Dungeons,GeneticModifications,FantasyWorld,Magic,Non-humanProtagonist,CharacterGrowth,WeaktoStrong,Adventurers,Monsters,Evolution,ProactiveProtagonist,MultiplePOV,CleverProtagonist,Mercenaries,Misunderstandings,DungeonMaster

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It'snovelbutlosesthatsparkofaweratherquicklyandbecomesmonotonousbutstillenjoyable.TruthbetoldthesidecharactersbecamethehighlightofthisformeasopposedtotheboredomIfeltinthecreationoftheDungeon.....IsupposethemainreasonformyboredomwiththeDungeonwasthatitbecamegrindwithoutrewardandlessaboutleavingpeopleinaweandmoreabouttorturingandturningthemawaywithoutanyoftheformer.

Congratulatethisguy,Ireallyfollowedhislinktoread

Iamreadingthisnovelonroyalroad.ItisactuallybetterthanIexpected.

Greatdungeoncorenovel.Solidpremisewithafreeformdevelopment.InterestingcreaturespopulatethedungeonofourMCandhasplentyofvaryingareasorbiomes.Somepeoplehavewhinedaboutthehumancomponentbutitmostlyjustrelatestotheactualdungeonandfarlesspoliticsthanothernovelsinthesamegenre.Overallasolidreadwithtoofewchaptersatthemoment.4.3/5

Likeeveryothertrash,thisdungeonbecameemotionalstartedtalkingwithhuman.Stoppedkillingthem.Andbecameexpslaveofhuman.Thoughhumaninvadedit,itiskeepingthemalive,feedingthem,andansweringtheireveryquestionidkwtfliketheyareyourcaptiveswhythef#ckareyouansweringeachandeveryoftheirqn.notmytype.Overallallnonhumanprotagstoryisliketheybecamemonsters,dungeon.Butintheendtheycontactwithhuamansandalwayswillbeinlowerposition,whendealingwiththem.buttheonewritingthemarehumanauthors,soobviouslyEachandeveryofnon-humanprotagonistbecomehumanslaves.MYTHOUGHTSIfubecameanotherracethenyourraceshouldbeintopoffoodchain.Andotherracesbelowit.Likethisdungeonitbecameslaveofhumans,MAYBEBEWILLBEINFUTURETHEWAYSTORYISGOING.It'sjustbecameatool,itstoppedkillinghuman,startedcaringforthem,becametooltokeepthementertained.HALFISTRUE.Andbecamefreeexpslavesohumancancomeandraisetheirlevel.PROBABLY.Dungeoncreaturesprayhimasgodreverendhimandwhathedoes?Hemakesthosecreaturesthatworshiphimdielikedogandbecomeexpforhuman.Disgustingshitforacreation.THISONEIS100%LEGIT.Summary:WELLCOULD'VEBEENBETTER.

Iamconvincedyouactuallyhaven'tevenreadthebookbceverythingyousaidiswrong

Imaybeexgerratingalittlebit.Butfewsectionsofcommentwasuniversalforalldungeonnovel.Myfantasytypedungeoniwantedwaswheredungeontakeovertheworld.andnotdigratholebutmakelayerslikeCHIRLYSISnovel.MaintopicAndiwantedmctohavenohumaninteractionandkillthemorusethem.Likehimtakingthatgirlasaslaveandlettingherromefreeindungeonpissedme.Don'tufinditodd,humansalreadycaptureditsislandandhavestartedinvadingthedungeon.AndwhathedoesbeingatransmigratorDigsfloorsuponfloorsmaybeheisdiggingforsurvivalButdon'tuseetheworldmighthavemaybediamondrankandallhemightbedoingisdiggingagraveforhimslefandExpgroundforhuman.Myfiction:Heshouldhavewaitedformaybe5/10yearsandslowlyconvertwholeislandintohisprivatelandwithoutcausingdisturbanceinmanaandalsoconvertseaareathenHewouldnothaveneededtomakecreaturesandwastemanaonthem.Hecouldgettheminislandandsea.Fromthatonlyhecouldbecomeinsanelystrongbymodifyingcreaturesinsurface.Thenmaybestartinvadingthatworldinundergroundnotonlybelowislandbutentirecontinent.Dohumanexperimentsandturnthemindenizens.Maybeslowlybutugetitright.Andthenuptoauthorimagination.Butmusthaveinnovelisnotdigginginwardbutsollowingtheplaneidkbutforme.Ihavebeensearchingforthatkindofnovelorbooksbutididn'treallyfindone.TherewasDUNGEONBORNbookbuttheromancewiththatwisp.Andallthatnonsenseruinedthestoryforme.Totalsummaryofmylifeofbookreadingisthat:::ilikemcwithnoemotion.Needstobeextremelycalculative.Noharem,noromance,nopsychoticpersonality.NeedstobecasualbutcalculativeEg:mcwifeisdeadthenhisreactionshouldbeohshedied.That'sitnoneedforoveracting,cryingvengeanceAndallthatbullshit.

Honestly,Igetwhatyou'resaying,Ididn'tunderstandwhyhejustletthemsettleonhisisland,andIunderstandthathegetsmanaandknowledgefromthepeoplehekillsbutit'snotlikenothavingenoughmanawouldeverbeanissueforhimbecausehejustabsorbeditfromtheair.Hedidn'treallyneedtheknowledgeeitherbecauseit'sbeenshownthathecanfigureouthowtouseelementalmagiconhisownjustfine.IguessIcouldunderstandminglingwithhumansifhereallygotanythingoutofitbuthekindajustgavethem5questionsaweekandgotnothinginreturn.lettingthatfemaleprisonerroamaroundhisdungeonalsodidn'tmakealotofsensesincehekilledtheother4prisonersanywaybutjustletherlivefornoreason.

Caraapartedoprisioneiroeuconcordoplenamentecomvocês,masapartedasperguntaseuatéfariaissosefosseumamasmorra,poisparacada3perguntas(euacho)eleganhaumcasaldemonstrossignificandomaismonstrosparaseremcriados,claroelenãotemquedartudodemãobeijadamassimfazerum"desvio"assimelegastaaperguntaeganhauma"vantagem".Claroissoénomeuver,poisquerendoounãoeleestaremumailhajáéumatremendadesvantagem,eseelecriarmonstrosqueseparecemcomohumanosequepossamsedisfarçarnasuasociedadeparatrazerosanimaisonegociadeperguntassetornaobsoleto,masachoquevaidemorarparaissoacontecer

TheprisonerpartItotallywithyou,butthequestionspartIwoulddoifitwasadungeon,becauseforevery3questions(Ithink)hegetsacoupleofmonstersmeaningmoremonstersforservants,ofcoursehedoesn'thavetogivehisall.kissedhandbutrathermakea"detour"sohespendsthequestionandgainsan"advantage".Ofcoursehewantstoseeit,becausewhetherornothewantstoknowthatthisisaquestionofanimals,asociety,andifheismonstrouswhoappearstobehumanandseemstobealreadyapersonwhocandisguisehimselfinhisown,tobringthemuportradeobsolete,butIthinkitwilltaketimetohappen

Hewaskeepingthegirlforexperiments,asforroamingaroundthedungeonhewantstouseherasanadvocateforthedungeon.

ReaddevourerAlsoemotionlessmcwilleventuallydeveloptohaveemotionsbeingthemainarcofthebook.Likekidnappeddragons

Dudethat'sprobablydescribingmostdungeoncorenovels

Popcorndemonisright.Thestupiddealhemadewhereheanswersquestionsforanimalsisstupid.Hedoesn'tgettopicktheanimals,theladygiveshimharmlessanimals.Shegavehimarabbittopopulatethedungeonwith.I'msuretheMCcanturntherabbitintosomethingdangerousbutwhybother.Hecouldhaveaskedforcarnivorousapexpredatorsandelevatethoseintosupremepredators.Butyouknowwhat.Thedungeon,whichistheMC,answerseveryquestionhonestlyoritdoesn'tlie.SotheMCisonthebadendofadealbutheiscoolwithit.Thedungeonisanicedungeon.NottheefficientdungeonkillerIexpected.Inanutshell.Thedungeonbecametheexpslaveofthehumans.

Ediwagmobasahinpest*ka.

Toptiershit,(thoseratingitat1stararebraindead)

Idisagree.

Iagreetodisagree