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Theuniversegavemeanotherchanceafterlifescrewedmeover.Mysecondlifebrought...Readmore

Theuniversegavemeanotherchanceafterlifescrewedmeover.Mysecondlifebroughtmetoaworldwherepeoplebreathfire,walkonwaterandsomepeoplewithspecialeyesthatgivethembullsh#tpowers.Well,Igotthegamerability.AndI’mgonnauseittostandatthepeak.Butit'sgonnabealongjourneybeforeIreachthatsummit.*SI-MC.Updates3to4timesaweek.Collapse

Transmigration,GameElements,OverpoweredProtagonist,System,Isekai,MaleProtagonist,ReincarnatedinAnotherWorld,ModernKnowledge,WeaktoStrong,EasternSetting,Fanfiction,Naruto,Gamer,CalmProtagonist,EyePowers,CautiousProtagonist,AgeProgression

SpoilerThebeginningofNarutobeginsonchapter255ifanyoneiscurioustoknowthathasn'treadthisyet.

RankBThisisinallcategoriesfromstory,characterdevelopment,plotdevelopmentandconsistencyrendersitarankofBasof05/23/2023chapter215.

Gaveitasecondchanceandmygoditisboring,themcisasoullesspuppet

Ihaveaquetionforpeoplewholikethisnovel;Don'tyoufeelannoyedwithchapterlongstatusnotifications?Ifeellike80%wordspaceiswastedonsysteminsteadstoryprogress,Itwontbeaproblemformeifthechapterswerelongbuttheyaresoshortyetauthorwastesomuchonreapeatingthesameinfo.Ijustcouldn'tdealwithitandhadtodropthisnovel.Howareyou'lldealingwithit?

Herealizedthathewaswastingwordcountandproblongingdungeonrunssonowthereshorterandtheauthorrarelyshowsthefullstauspageanymoreandkeepsdungeonsto2-3chapters.SornitsprettynicesinceIlikethestory.

--Thisisthenovelthatyou'regettingyourselfinto--AreyouboredwithNarutousingTalk-no-jutsu???IntroducingNo-Talk-no-jutsu...Thestorywillgoexactlythesameasthecannon,exceptAuthorbeingaparasocialsoMChangsaroundimportantcharacterswithoutmakinganychangesandreplaceNarutowhenheusetalk-no-jutsuineverycrucialmomentswiththeMCusingno-talk-no-jutsu.Okayperhapsnotthatoverboard...Chapter12:'Status'///tookalmosthalfthechapter(KeepitupAuthor...Soonyou'llbeabletomaximizethecheesestatuspanelgivestothewordcount.Soonit'llbesomethinglike...)Chapter???:'Status'MCmuttered.--NextChapter--Chapter???+1:Skill:[5.Dishwashing-Passive(LV.1):Askillobtainedthroughcontinuousdishwashing.Withmoremastery,youcancleananydirtyspotswithmorespeed.Effects:+5%increaseinspeed]///ThisisanactualSkilltheMChasinCh.12--NextChapter--Chapter???+2:Equipment:--NextChapter--Amazingnovel...*throwsbookattheAuthor'sheadAGGRESSIVELY*Oh-Nvm,itmightcomesoonerthanIthought...Chapter18Statuspaneltook3/4ofthewholechapter.Note:JumpStraighttoCh24afterreadingCh.1;uwon'tmissanything.---OkayIstarttounderstandtheactualvalueofthisnovelnow...AuthorisactuallyproficientinmakingFightingNarrations(Ch62-63)thisisgeniunelygood;reallywellthoughtout.Toomanyuselessnotifications.ThisnovelisliterallytheembodimentofSystemtothepointofcancer.IjustwishAuthortoneddownthenotificationinsteadsimplyshowcaseitinfights,ortesting,oranythingbutthenotificationformat;It'stoorepetitive.Thoseskillnames,cooldowns,+%,etc...Itdoesn'tholdanymeaningifAuthordoesn'tshowits'actualdifferenceincombat/testing.Andmostoftheskillendedupneverbeingshownthedifference;causethere'resimplytoomany...andtheychangetoorapidly.AlltheAuthorendupdoingwiththosenotificationsare,literally,creatingFILLERStogetmorewordcount;asifhedidn'thaveenoughfromcallingupthestatusbacktoback.Ch.66-67--whenAuthornarratescannonflashback...thequalityofthenarrativesoartotheroof.Butwhenit'ssomethingAuthormadeonhisownitplungebackdowntosub-par.Ch.71--thisiswhatitmeanbya'ForcedPlot'.MCliterallyhasaskilltoinfluenceppl'sthoughttoaggreetohissuggestions.----Overall:Authorisonlygoodwhenfullfightingnarrations,andnarrationswhenit'sfullsummaryofthecannonflashback1to1.Everythingelse?3/5...I'mgonnabashittoohard.Causeonceugetusedtoskippingandignoringtheobviousflaws...It'sactuallyapleasantread.(ImostlywritethisreviewafterseeinghowsloppytheuchihamassacrewashandledbytheMCandwaswritingoutofspite...Literallyifureadituwouldunderstand.ButstartingfromChapter75thingsstarttobecome4/5)AnotherNoteworthNarutoFan-Fic:"RebornwithTenseigan"

Yeahtheybotchedthatshit(theuchihamassacre)ashardasNarutoShippudenbotchedMadara

systemnovelwithoutharem,bigyikes.

"Allugottadoisscrollaroundtherankinglistandu'llbasicallyfindharemwithR18...Ifeverynovelismadehornyteenslikeyou,thewebsiteisfuc-""There'salreadyawebsitelikethatcalled'wattpad'."Jirayainterrupted."..."

noyou

levelingwithlustexistitisveryhornybutalsodecentlygoodplotthoifyouwantthewholestoryyouneedtogotoadifferentwebsiteifyoulikeitandwantthelinktothewebsiteletmeknowafteryoureadit

Readerwhoonlylikesharem,bigyucks.

Haremsucks,let'sbehonest.Igetwhyyouandotherslikeit,but...well,onceyouagealittle,you'llnaturallygrowoutofit.Unlessyouareasexualdeviantorsomethingofsomekind.Onceyou'veseenrealityforwhatitis,youwillnotwanttheshallowconnectionsaharembuilds.Haremsarenotlovebutmerelylust.It'snotworththeeffortnortime.Infact,thebestnovelsarethosethatinspiretrueemotions.Haremnovelsareincapableofthat.Theyaresimplytoounrealistic.LatelyI'veawokentotherealtruth:noromance.Withoutromance,thereistimeavailableforrealplot,pain,angstandmorepain.That'swhereI'vefoundthebestnovelsI'veeverread.I'dadviseanyonenotlookingfor"fastfood"(ifyouwill)totakealookatthewebsiteArchiveofourown(AO3).It'sabastionoffanfictionandwayyy,way,waybetterorganisedthanfanfiction.netevercouldbe.Therearemillionsofhigh-qualityficsoverthere.And,well,ifyouwishtoreadthose,therearealsomillionsofsmutandharem/multificsoverthereaswell.

youshouldbehunteddownthensenttomiddleearth

Thestoryistooslow,121Chbutstillattheacademy.Iftheaouthorkeepwritingwiththispace.Ihiglydoubthewillfinishthestory.Nottomentionitisjustfanfiction.Soifyoudontlikeslowpacestory,thisisnotforyoumyguy.

Idontunderstandwhyfanficwritersbotherwritingslowpacedstory.Weallknowthey'renotgonnawritethousandchaptersnovel.

Truefacts,butatthesametime,wheneverythingisrusheditlackssubstance.Iwishtheacademyarcwasskippedeverytime.Atthesametime,howlongisanaveragearc?Iwroteafanficwith180kwords,(300k+views)andwrotelike2arcsandwaswrappingupthethirdarcbeforeIgotsuperbored.Rushedstorieslackcharacterdevelopment.Buthey,veryfewfanfictionscanfinish.Forfunwritersjustlosehellamotivationwhengettingsmacktalkedallthetime.Whenyouget400+likesonachapter,butthenextis200~youjustdon'tfeellikewritinganymore.

Everyfanficofnarutoworlddisappointedmeinoneortwoways,someofthemhadaharemtag(whichseemstomemuchmoreillogicalthanhavingasysteminNarutoworld),andsomehadoverwhelminglystrongmcfromthestartwhichkilledthejoyofreadingthestory,ornovellike"Naruto:TheStrongestKakashi"(Goodinthestart,averageinthemiddlepartandhorribledevelopmentforthelatestpart).Heremchashishugecheatbuthastoworkhardtoachievesomething.Hehasaninteractionwiththemaincharactersofthestorybuthisinfluenceonthewholestoryonlyincreasesstatically.Tillthelatestchapter,itseemsworthytoreadandeventodonatetotheAuthorforhishardwork.

indeed,greatreadsofar.Ihopeitkeepsbeingso.

#panic#addharemtagpls~

Authorsaiditwasgoingtobeharem.Lolz.

imoutthen,narutoworldwithharemisthelastthingiwanttoread

UsuallyI'mnotabigfanoffanficbutthiswasreallywelldone,excellentwork.Thestoryiswellwritten,engaging,andcreative.