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Howlongwillittakeforamurderedthieftodistillintosomethingmonstrous?Inthisstorythe...Readmore

Howlongwillittakeforamurderedthieftodistillintosomethingmonstrous?Inthisstorythedarknessonlygrowsstronger,anditsreachonlygrowswiderasitexpandsbydevouringthelifethatsurroundsit.Thisisadarkfantasywhereevilisawhere,notjustawhothatfocusesonslowprogression,undeath,andatmosphericstorytelling.UpdateseveryThursday.Collapse

GameElements,Dungeons,AntiheroProtagonist,Strategist,Grimdark,LowFantasy,Magic,Mythology,Non-humanProtagonist,Monsters,Dark,EvilProtagonist,WeaktoStrong

-53chaptersoutasofwritingthis.Inshort,it'sgarbage.Alotofnamedcharactersoflow(ornoneatall)importancetothestorythataddunnecessaryfluff.Authorreallylingersonsomeofthemtoo.Chaptersarepaddedoutquitealotingeneral.Theworldisalsoquiteunresponsivetowardsthis"evil".Heck,animportantwizardactsweirdandlatercroakswiththewholehamletfollowinghisfootstepsyetit'sthesongsofsomebardthatstirsinteresttowardtheplace?C'mon...The"dark"atmosphere(thesupposedfocusofthework)-acompletemisstoo.Peopledieandaregreedy,nowwhat?Iguessthesidecharactersweresupposedtoconveythe"darkness",butmostofthetimetheyjustconveyedstupidity.

Alotofnamedcharactersoflow(ornoneatall)importancetothestorythataddunnecessaryfluff.Authorreallylingersonsomeofthemtoo.Finally,afellowreviewerwhounderstandstheimportanceofnotmakingnamedcharactersthathavenovalue

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Ireaditfor24chapters...Itwastoodark✨Butitwasboring...Thestoryisgoodbuttheproblemispresentation...Authorlackspresentationinmyopinion...OnethingI'llsay:it'sdarkandaveragewrittenbutpoorlypresentedSoIdidn'tdropit...Ijustdelayedit(maybetheyaresamelol)I'llrateit2.7/5