Tanuki Rise of the Yokai Clan

Whatisatanuki?Itismischievousandjollybutalsosomewhatgullibleandabsentminded...Readmore

Whatis a tanuki?It is mischievousandjollybutalsosomewhatgullibleandabsentmindedyoukai,whichis famousforusingitsballsin fights.Now,whydidI askthisquestion?It is because…it seemsI havebecomeone.World:Nurarihyonno Mago -GakusenToshiAsteriskCollapse

Fanfiction,TheAsteriskWar,MaleProtagonist,Reincarnation,Non-humanProtagonist,ModernDay,BeautifulFemaleLead,Monsters,WeaktoStrong,AlternateWorld,SwordAndMagic

Verygood,advancedreadersmightlikeit.Thisnovelisnotcomplicated,butmanythingsareshownratherthanexplained,soifyourinterpretationskillsarelowthenyoumaynotunderstandmanysimplethings.Themcdoesn'tchangemuchsinceheisbasicallythesamefrombeginningtoend,buthechangessubtly,hewasreincarnatedasthevillainanditwasn'tanaccidentsincethepersonalitiesofbotharesimilarandthemcsystemisquitesimplebecauseitisaderivedskillfromhimself,thatis,hedidnotreceiveitfromanyone.Thedevelopmentoftheharemisverynaturalandalmostalltheheroinesmaintaintheiroriginalityaccordingtothecanon,wellthestoryproposalwasmorethanboughtthisnovelisverygoodtopassthetime,honestlythemcisatrueadventureraccordingtoWiththefantasyconcept,heseesnewplaces,getsstrong,picksupgirlsandmovesontothenextadventure

IjustwantedtosayI'llneverreadanAkikannovelagain,sorryIneededtogetthisoutofmysystem.ThenovelsAkikanwritesscratchanitchIfinddifficulttogetridof,butthismancantfinishanovelevenifhislifedependedonit,anddontevengetmestartedon"not-majorbutconstantandannoyinggrammarerrors"withthefactthatheconstantlyforgetsthatcertaineventsanddevelopmentstookplaceandproceedstodoitallagain.I'vefullyread2novelsfromhim,thembeingItStartsbybecomingaMangakaandScumbaginTokyo,morethan1800chaptersandhestartedwritingthosein2019andIfinishedthemafterbinge-readingin2022andletmesayit,THISMANMANAGEDTOWRITECHAPTERSDAILYFOR3YEARSANDTHEYNEVERIMPROVED,HESTILLWRITESJUSTLIKEWHENHEBEGUNANDITSNOTFUNNYATALL,bothofthemareunfinishedwitharushedendingandIfullyexpectallofhisnovelstobethesame.Ijustneededtogetthisoutofmebecauseitstillmakesmeuncomfortable,IdidnttalkaboutalltheDickMeasuringmonologuesandflawsbecauseIhonestlydontcare,Icantturnmybrainoffformostnovels,butAkikannovelsforcemybraintoturnoff.AndI'm100%sureAkikannovelsarebeingwrittenbyAIorwithalargehelpofitandNOONEcanconvincemeotherwise.

122R-18chapter

Iknewmyhunchwasjustified,Ijustrealizedwhotheauthorwas!Akikan40,youhavestruckagain!

Iloveakikan40'snovels,butlikeallhisnovels,towardstheend,thenovelturnsintoacollectionofPokemon(harem),veryboringatthesametime.Usually,atthebeginningofanovel,akikan40mcisinterestingandnotomnipotent,hehasemotionsandaspirations,butattheendofallhisnovels,hebecomesasupermegagigachadwhorunsaroundtheworldsandcollectsPokemon,makingthemfallinlovewithhimwith1lineoftext,withoutemotionsandplotdevelopment.Sothat'swhatI'mtalkingabout,inthisnovelhebecamelikethatatchapter10,andabruptlythenovelbecomesvery,veryboring.Mcwalkstheworldsand2wordsandseducesalllivingthingswithhisirresistibleappearance.Iwasverydisappointedinthisnovel,Iwaswaitingforamuchhigherlevel,sincetheauthorhasalotofexperienceingoodbeginnings,andinthemiddleinshortstories.Butreadingthisnovelcreatestheimpressionthatitwaswrittenbyamediocreyoungstertofulfillhisdesires,althoughthefirst10-15chaptersweregood,buttheneverythingfellsharplytothebottom.

ThoughthereisnoR-18lemoninhisstory

Itisprettygoodforafanfic

Letmesee.....AnauthorwhotalksaboutthesizeoftheMC'scockfromthefirstchapter...AtanukiMCwhocanturnintoahandsomeguy...AtanukiMCwhocanattackotherswithhis...ball...Acheatsystemwiththethemeoftheharem...Cockthatcanchangesize...Attackwithhisballs...Tanukitransformingintoahuman(Havethisdoubtwhy)...Haremsystem...Allmixedupinthefanfictiongenre...Yeah,I'mleavingbeforeit'stoolate.

What?Didyoucometothecommentstoseeifthesoapoperaisgoodandifyoushouldreadit?THEMCISATANUKI,SOWHATAREYOUDOINGHEREANDNOTREADING?

Notsureifthisispresentthroughoutallthechapters,butafterskimmingafewofthelatestchaptersthereseemstobeamixof'Xinglou'and'Tanazuki'beingcalled,soifyoucan'tstandChinesemtlsyoumightwanttoavoidthisone

IdintseethatoncewhatchapdidyouseethatI’monlyatchapter84

Chapter139Ithink.ChoseitbecausetheoverbearingpartlookswaytooclosetoaChinesetitleandI'mreallynotupforreadinganotherwebnoveltranslation.AnotherthingInoticedwasthatattheendofthechapterwegetabunchofrandomletters,don'tknowwhat'supwiththat.Anywayshowwouldyourateitsinceyou'veread84chapters?

Itwasanormalpowerhungrydudewithlustfulintentionsnearchap80itseemstostarttofocusonthegirlsmore.Surprisedthereisnolemonsbutnoproblemsthere.Heisstilltryingtogetstrongerandbythispointheisatasterisk

broihaven'treadthatfarbuticameacrosschapter139tamazukiandxinglouare2differentpeople,searchfanxinglougakusetoshi.ioftenreadakkikan'sstoriesonwebnovelandi'mprettysureit'snotmtl(thoughidon'tknowifhegottheideafromchinafanficornot)

Ohwow.Guessthat'swhathappenswhenyoujumptoconclusions

Usingitsballstofighthuh

yourpfpisaperfectreactiontothis.