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«Kotharhadleftfearbehindlongago,heknewthattobecometrulypowerful,hewouldhavetowalk...Readmore

«Kotharhadleftfearbehindlongago,he knewthatto becometrulypowerful,he wouldhaveto walkintotheveryjawsof death,againandagain,untileitherhe died,or overcamethelimitsof mortality.»A strugglethroughendlessplanes,obliteratedby theDevourer.Kothar,a cyborgreincarnatedintoa worldof magic,embarkson a journeyof newknowledge,fiercebattlesandan ever-increasingneedto becomestronger.Combiningthetechnologyof hispastwiththemagiche learns,Kotharseeksto becomepowerfulbeyondcomprehension,to exactrevengeon theDevourer.FollowKotharas he fightsagainstallmannerof strangebeings,exploresexoticworldsandmeetstheoddestcharactersas he journeysthroughthemyriadplanes,hopingto findhiswaybackto theGalacticAlliance,or whateverremainsof it.Collapse

Reincarnation,Evolution,KingdomBuilding,GameElements,Wizards,SlowCultivation,Non-humanProtagonist,SwordAndMagic,MagicalTechnology,WeaktoStrong

Hellotherelitlleragebabydownvotingallmycomments.I'msorrythatthisisameaningfulwaytopassyourtime.Idon'tknowwhathappenedtoyouorwhatyourcurrentstateissuchthatyou'refeelitnecessarytodothisbutIfeelyourstruggles.Lifeain'tfair,andbeingsaddledwithabodythatjustaddstoyourdifficultiesistheworstkindofjoke.Ifoneofmycommentshurtyou,I'msorry.Ihavemyownissuesandthisiskindofanoutletforme.Idon'ttakethetimetoproperlymoderatemycommentstobepoliteandconstructive,andI'minsteadjustdirectlyspewingmycriticismswithallthecynicismIdon'tallowmyselfatallothertimes.Ifyou'reanauthorwhoIinsulted,pleasetrytokeepinmindthatreadersneedtheirownplaceseparatefromauthorstospeaktheirmind,tocomplainandcriticizewithoutfillercausethat'sjusthowhumansareandwhathumansdotocopewithemotions.Andasfarasmyowncommentsgo,pleasekeepinmindthatI'mfullyawarethatImakeunfaircomparisonsbetweentheworksofmasterswhoIcouldnevercompareto,theyoungandexperiencedwhodon'tdeservesuchdiscouragingremarks,worksspecificallywrittenforanaudiencethatdoesnotincludeme,andauthorswithanymannerofunknownpersonalstruggle.Idoitknowingly,andIdoitforaspecificaudience,ofwhichauthorsareNOTapartof.AndalthoughImostlyjustdoitformyself,Ialsodoitbecausestoryratingsand99%ofreviewsareinherentlyflawedandunservicableforthemorediscerningbookworms.IjusthopemycommentarycanhelppeopleavoidabadexperiencelikeIhad.Andalthoughthatmightnotfeelfairtoanauthor,it'sinevitablethatsomepeoplewilldislikeyourworknomatterhowgooditis.Andthat'sfair.Itwouldbeweirdandoppressivetobeobligatedtolikesomethingyoudislike.Andyoucanjustacceptthat.Youdon'thavetohatethosewhoopposeyourbeliefs.Insteadjusttakeabreakanddistanceyourselffromthethingsstressingyououtandletyourbraincalmdown.Rememberthatemotionsandimpulsesareoftenirrational,andgivingintothemwilloftenmakeyoujustfeelworseinthelongrun,evenifitdoesn'tfeellikethat'dbethecase.Ihopethingsoutbetterforyou.SorrythatImadeyoufeelbad.

Interestingconceptbutsadlynowellthoughtout.

Этонетакплохо.Номненезашло.Несоветую

Theprogressofthestoryisnotfluid.I'mkindalostinsomeareaswherethereisaparticulareventintheparagraphsthenallifasuddenthenextparagraphisanewevent.

Authorwritesmclikehighmoralpersonwhomakedirtythingforhighestgoodbutmcjusttypicalsoldierwhose"highestgood"is"highestgood"ofhiscommander.Authoralsousethis"hisbodyishormonalkidsohecan'tcontrolhisemotion"clichewitchihate.Butthistimehehaveexcuse:mcdon'tgetemotionalcontrolskillinpreviouslife.Thatstillbsbutacceptable.Thatemotionalthemejustlooksirrelevantformethistime.Sorcerer?No!He'sjustmagicwarrior.Mcdon'tevenlernmagicbutrunaroundtosolveothersproblem.Whatdidhefirstafterlearnspell?Hemadesword.Cyborg?No!Again.Hewascyborginfirstlifeandhemakesomebodymodsbutmorechapsireadlessmatterithave.Powersystemalsodon'texist.Thereisjust"impactonthebattlefield".Mcissoldierandworldaroundiswarwherehecanfight.Thisnovelillwithcommonisekaidisease:authormakemc'sfirstlifeasgreatesthumanwithunbelievableskillsbutwriteaboutstupidkidcozhecan'tplacesuchgreatpersoninhissimpleworldbuildingwithoutmakethemMarySue.Iguessishouldn'texpectsomethingreallygoodwhenauthorwarningaboutanythingquestionableandmakemarkstoskipit.Likehewriteforsnowflakesandsuchcreativewaynevergotoexcellentthings.Therewasoneinterestingminiarcwheremctraveltootherworldbutafterthatmcbecamestupidsoldieragain.Ican'tsaythatnovelbad.It'saveragewithsomegoodconcepts.Maybenotmycupoftea...

I'monchapter26,doesthisnovelgetanybetter?I'mhavingahardtimereadingit.

Ipersonallyenjoyit..butIfeellikethemainhighlightisaroundCh50toCh66ifyoucanreaduntilpastCh66thenyoucandecidefromthereifit'sworthyourtimeornot

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