Second Life's Revenge

«Whatdoyouhavetosayforyourself,sister?»TineAlvaradolookeddownatthesmall...Readmore

«Whatdo youhaveto sayforyourself,sister?»TineAlvaradolookeddownat thesmallgirlwhosebodywascoveredwithscars.Thesmallgirllookedat herhandstremblingwhilealleyeswereon her.Shedidn’tunderstandwhythiswashappeningto her,nordidn’tunderstandhowthisallhappened.«It’snotmy fault.»«LauraAlvaradothejuryhasdecidedto executeyouas youhaveattemptedto murderyourownsisterwhois thefianceeof thesecondprince.Andherebyyouarefoundguiltyandthecourtshallbe adjourned.»Justlikethatherlifehadendedafterbeingfalselyaccused.Notuntilshehadgonebackto life.A secondchanceto live.Andhersecondlife’srevenge.Collapse

Reincarnation,Revenge,Magic,RomanticSubplot,Aristocracy,Empires,Kingdoms,FemaleProtagonist,SecondChance

Goodstoryhorriblesentencestructurelikeevery3rdor5thsentencemadeitfeelliketheauthorskippedatonofimportantoratleastneededinfoordialogue.Likeitskippedfromthe(spoiler)secondguyattackingheratthemasqueradetoherwakingupfromtheinjury,likenoinfoatallonwhathappensaftertheattackorhowshegottothepalaceafterwardsetc..

Ireadtillch.26beforedropping.Thestoryisagoodpremisebutthewritingisnotthatgood.Theauthorseemstobeabeginnerbuttheydidwhattheycould.Theprogressionofthestoryfelttoounnatural

Interestingstory.Lovehowitended.ThoughwithregardstoLaura'sbiologicalparentsleftmehanging.:(

"SecondLife'sRevenge"isashortstoryidealtopassthetime.Whiletherearesomeholesintheplotandit'sabitcliché,thestoryplaysoutquitewell.Thereisrevenge,empowerment,friendship,magicandromance,soifthatiswhatyouarelookingfor,Irecommendthatyoureadit.Igiveit3stars.