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Poweroffriendship?Gettingstrongerwhenyou’reenraged?Powerfulmonstersealedinyoubyyour...Readmore

Powerof friendship?Gettingstrongerwhenyou’reenraged?Powerfulmonstersealedin youby yourfather?Yeah,thatwasnotme.I wasthearrogantyoungsterwhogotpunchedon thefirstpanelsof theshounenmangaI wasreading.I wouldn’thaveevenrememberedhisnameif I wasn’tstuckin hisbody.*Releaseschedule:7chaptersa weekTagsandcontentwarningsaremainlyto giveme creativefreedomlater on.Thisis my firstnovelever,andEnglishisn’tmy nativelanguage,so go easyon me fellas.Anyfeedbackis morethanwelcome,of course.Collapse

PortalFantasy,Isekai,CharacterGrowth,Strategist,MaleProtagonist,SwordAndMagic,Mythology,Reincarnation,SecretIdentity,WeaktoStrong

Startedoffgood,bhtcharacterdevelopmenttookweirdturn,whichwasnotmycupoftea,guess3.5/5.

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Heycananybodyrecommendsomenovelsinwhichcharactershaveuniquepowersandlimitationslikethisone

AtfirstitseemedlikejustabadHxH,butitdidn'ttakelongforittobecomeincredible.It'sashamethatIlostallpleasureinreadingfromthemomentthatnon-senseprincesswasadded.Howcanasinglecharacterruinanentirestory?Wow.Ofcoursethisisjustmyopinion,itmaybedifferentforsomeoneelse.

Writingqualityisprettygoodandthestorysofarhasbeenveryconsistent.Ifyou'relookingforsomethingtoreadthat'sslightlycomedicwithahintofseriousness,thenI'drecommendthisone.OnlyreaduptoCh130andhavedroppedittocollectmorechapters,butsofar,I'dgiveitasolid4/5.Youwon'tregretreadingiteventopassyourtime.

IfyoulikeNaruto,JujutsuKaizen,andBlackCloverthenthere'saprettygoodchancethatyou'lllikethis...storyseemstobeinspiredfromthesethreeandhasborrowedalotofelements,includingcharacters'backstoryanddesign,fromthem.Nottosayitsrip-offbutifyouveseentheanimeorreadthemangaforthesethreeyouwillmaketheconnectionsrealsoon.Willgiveit3.5/5

Thisinspiresashounenverywell.Theonlyflawisthatit'squitefastattimes,butsomemightsaythattheauthoronlyfocusesontheimportantstuff.Comparedtotheauthor'spointofviewIthinkthat'stheonlydifference,IthoughtIwasreadingaKoreannovel,apartfromthislittlethingthisisverygood,ithasafunplotandgreatcharacters,Ihighlyrecommendreadingit.Thisstoryhasatrueessence,Idon'tseeitasjustanotherclichéRating:4.7/5-Issoinspiramuitobemumshounen.Aúnicafalhaéqueàsvezesébastanterápido,masalgunspodemdizerqueoautorseconcentraapenasnascoisasimportantes.Comparadocomopontodevistadoautorachoqueessaéaúnicadiferença,acheiqueestavalendoumromancecoreano,tirandoessacoisinhaissoémuitobom,temumenredodivertidoeótimospersonagens,recomendofortementealeitura.Essahistóriatemumaverdadeiraessência,nãoavejocomosómaisumclichêClassificação:4,7/5

Asalways,whenIfindagoodnovelIreadthecommentwiththehighestdownvote...Let'sstartsearching!

Thisissurprisinglygood.Thestorydevelopmentis...wonkybutit'snice.Thewritingqualityisalright.It'snotthebestbutitainttheworst.Thebackgroundoftheworldis....kindaehbutit'sbetterthenmost.Andthecharactersare...wellthecharactersfittheShonentheme.Theonlytakeawayisthatitfeelskindablandearlyon.Maybefor20-60chapters?Otherthenthatit'sasolid3.5-4.

I'mnotonetocriticizereviewsbutthat'sprobablytheworstreviewIhaveeverread,"He'sagoodguybuthedrinksinfantblood".

That'sfair.Icould'vewordeditbetterbutI'mwaytoolazytodothat.Anywhois"He'sagoodguybuthedrinksinfantblood"athingIsaidorjustathingyou'resaying?I'mconfusedcauseIdidn'tsayitandyou'reusing(?)itasanexample.Eitherwaygoodpeoplecanstillbegoldpeople.It'sjustamatterofperspective.Imeanpeopleconsidersoldiersofwarheroesormassmurdersandetcdependingonwhatyouthesidetheiron.Thatalsogoeswithforcedcannibalism.Nomatteriftheyeattosurviveorwereforcedtotheywillbeliabletocriminalorcivilactionseveniftheywereagoodperson.Notsayingthataf#ckingserialkillerorwhateverisagoodperson.Justsayingthatsometimesit'samatterofperspectiveandnotallbadpeoplearewell"bad"andgoodpeopleare"good"orwhatever.IthinkthatconveyswhatI'mtryingtosay?Dunno.MightedititlaterwhenIcanthinkofsomethingbetter

Youhadmeatthe"thisissurprisinglygood"Therestofthereviewjustdoesntmatchthegood.

Imean...itissurprisinglygood.Thereviewdoesn'tmatchwhatIsaidcausewellIgottabehonestcauseit'sareview.Anddespitethatit'sstillgood.Idogetyourpointthough,itisconfusing

Idon'tknowhowtoexactlyarticulatethis,butthestorylacksthatsortofenergyandflowthatalotofothernovelshave(eventheshittierones).Itfeelslikeiftheauthoradoptedthestoryfromsomewhereelse,andsubsequentlywrotethestorywhileignoringnuancesandotherelementsofintentionaldesign.ArantonwhatthisnovelremindsmeofTheclosestcomparisonIhaveiswhenatranslatorstartedwritingthechaptersinsteadoftranslatingtheoriginaltext,andmademeloseinterestduetothetranslator'signoranceofsomeofthemoresubtleplotlines.Tobefair,Ididtrytoreadtheir'additions',butthetranslatorsimplydidnotcapturethestyleandnuancesofcharacterthattheoriginalauthorhad.Oh,andthetranslatordidn'tevenseparatethecontentsofhisadditionsintoaseparatenovel,hestraightupappendedittotheoriginaltranslationthathedid.Ifsomeonedidn'tseethetranslator'snotes,theonlywaytheycouldtellitwaswrittenbythetranslatorwasbythesuddendropinstoryquality.Forsomethingthat'ssortoflikewhatI'mtryingtosay,seeEhbom'sreviewonRoyalRoad.