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Ayounggirlopenedhereyes,theleftoneglowingblueandtherightoneglowingred.Witha...Readmore

Ayounggirlopenedhereyes,theleftoneglowingblueandtherightoneglowingred.Withasmile,shelookedatthebarsonherwindow.Theinvisibleforceswirledonthetipsofherfingers,makinghersmileevendeeper.'Now,Idon'tknowifIamluckyorunlucky.'Shewasframedandlockedaway.Shewasaloneandcold.However,nowshehasawakenedthememoriesofherpastlife,filledwithbetrayalandhertwosystems.'Aworldofmagic?Aworldofspace-faringships?Iwillmakethembothmine!'Withaccesstothetwosystemsandtheabilitytotravelbetweendimensions,shewasreadytoretakewhatwasoncehers,usingheruniqueadvantageofhavingaccesstobothmagicandadvancedtechnology.*Thisnovelhasaninfinity-worldsetting,meaningthatMCwillvisitandtravelacrossvariousuniversesandgainstrength.Releaseschedule:1chaptereachdayBonuschaptergoals:200,250,300Collapse

System,Magic,Superpowers,Reincarnation,Space,FuturisticSetting,AntiheroProtagonist,Dark,FemaleProtagonist,PreviousLifeTalent,WeaktoStrong

Thisisbad.Theplotisquiteconfusinganddisorganized,whichgivestheimpressionthattheauthoriswritingfromaroughdraft.Thetransitionsarejustterrible,andsometimesitfeelslikechaptersareeithercutofforpartsaremissing.Whatismostoff-puttingisthecharacterofMC.Alwayspanickingandafraidofeverything,withanunstablepsyche.Heractionsarenotorderedandnotfullythoughtout.Thefeelingofwhatsheisdoingisthefirstthingthatcomestohermind...It'sokaytoaddalittlerealismtothestory,andit'sokaytobescaredorpanicked.Buttheauthormustpresentittoreadersinsuchawaythatweunderstandit.Butinstead,itfeelsliketheMCisalwaysinalowerposition,comparedtoallenemiesorinterlocutors.Alwaysinfearandpanic.Alwaysdoingthingswithoutthinkingaboutthenextsteps.Atleastthat'showIsawtheMCandtheplot.Theauthorcouldn'tpullmeintothestory.

Ifeltthesame.Icouldn'tgetpastchapter10.Howfardidyouget?

Stoppedatchapter30.Ireallydidn’tseethepointinreadingfurtherandwastingtime.

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