Omnipotent Overlord

Somewhereintheuniverse,therewasanaltar.Onit,layabloodyeyeasbigasthesunitself.It...Readmore

Somewherein theuniverse,therewasan altar.On it,laya bloodyeyeas bigas thesunitself.It burstwithlightandbathedtheentiregalaxyin red.«Theauraof an ancestralartifact!»Someone’svoicerosein surprise.«Where?»«Earth!»TheGreatGalacticErahadbegun.Collapse

AgeProgression,Artifacts,BeastCompanions,Cultivation,DeathofLovedOnes,GameElements,GatetoAnotherWorld,InterdimensionalTravel,MaleProtagonist,ModernDay,MultipleRealms,OverpoweredProtagonist,ReturningfromAnotherWorld,SecondChance,TimeTravel,WeaktoStrong

GiantEye?LordoftheRings?

Whattheheckisthis..Thewritingisgreat,theworldisreallyreallyinterestingandithinkihasagreatpotentialoverall.BUT!Thestorystartedoffgreat,withalowkeyMCwhichbehavesassomeonewholivesasecondtime,theothercharactersarefineandgottheirownpersonalitiesandthepowersoftheworldaresolidlybuilt.Untilthestorystarted,everythingcrashesfromthenon.WegettoseethereasonwhyMCisstabbedintheback(spoiler:hehasnoawarenessofhissurroundingsontopofbeinganidiot).Thegroupsconsistofpplwhoareunworthyoftheirhighposition,surroundedbymobsofonedimensionalcharactersthatdobadthingsthatgounpublished,andsomanyothernegativethingstobelisted.AndOh!Apparently,the"game"startsatchapter300orso.Whatihatethemostistheauthor'ssenseofhumor.Icantbelieveimsayingthiabecauseeventhetrashiesthumorcanscorealittleinmybook..Butthisisjustunbearable.Youcanseetonsofnovelswithgreatstorywithsubparwriting,thisistheoppositeofthat.Goodwritingbutwithabadoverallstoryprogression.Dontwasteyourtimeonthisnovel.

Thxforthereviewmate,Ishallstay6feetawayfromthisnovel.P.swhengivingspoiler,usethethespoilertagformat(thequotations)

1.5/5rating.Theauthorcantwrite3clearlywrittensentences.Hejumpsfromonepointtoanotherduringconversationsallthetime.Thegrammarisfine,butimsuretheauthordidntevencheckwhathehaswritten.Itsverytiringreadingthisnovel....Otherthanthebadlywaythenoveliswritten,thecontentisnothingnewaswell.Anythingyoucanimaginefromclassicchinesemoderndaynovels,youwillfindhereaswell..Iftheauthorimprovedhiswritingandmadethewritingflownicely,thenitwouldbeaclassicaveragemoderndaychinesenovel,withOPMC,thatiwouldgladlyreadtokillsometime.Sadly,thewritingisverybad,andtheauthorshouldrevisethechaptersbeforepublishingthem(Ofcourse,thatsincasehewantshisnoveltobemorepopular).

AcctoNUI'mjustgonnacopypastesincethereareonly2reviewsandbothstatethecompleteopposite.Forwhatitis,itisgood.Thisisastoryyouhaveseeninmorethanafewmanhua:Protagonistcultivatedandbecameastrongexistenceonlytogetback-stabbed.Returnstohishighschooldaysandrestartscultivation.Luckily,henotonlyknowsalittleaboutthefuture(becausehe'sbeenthere)butalsoownsthestrongestcultivationart.Whyisthisbetterthanmanymanhuawiththisstory?Themaincharacterseemsintelligentenoughandalthoughhewasoncepowerful,regainingthatstrengthtakeshimquitesomeeffort.Thereissuspense.Also,thetranslationisprettygoodandThisisjustbland.Theideaisamixofvirtualrealitygames+rebirth+cultivation.Sucksinallthreeaspects.Thotsarethotsforthesakeofit.IQseemsnonexistentformostpeople.Villainsareeviljustforthesakeofbeingevil.Isomehowdraggedmyselfto100chaptersbutIcannotanymore.Itsjusttoostale.EveryonelooksdownonMC>MCshowsoffhistruestrength/influence/wealth>StilleveryonelooksdownonMC>andrepeat.Also,thenovelsonhaitusso...