Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)

Asick16yearoldMCdiesatthesametime,emeraldeyesopenupconfused.Shouldn'tIbedead?...Readmore

Asick16yearoldMCdiesatthesametime,emeraldeyesopenupconfused.Shouldn'tIbedead?WhythehellamIsotiny?What'shername?Whatarethesevoicesinmyhead?Followtheyoungtelepathastheymakewayinaworldofgodsandmagic.Willtheymaketheirmarkinthisscaryworldordidtheyalreadydoso.F*ck,timetravelisreallyconfusing.*Iwilladmitthatthefirstpartofthestoryisprettybad.ItwasmyfirsttimewritinganythingforfunsoIwasprettygreen.Ifyou'repreparedtosufferthroughthefirsttwentychaptersorso,andthestoryshouldgetalotbetter.Collapse

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TheworstthingI'veread

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Iwritethisfromchapter81.Ihavemixedfeelingsaboutthis.Inthebeginningtherearesoomanytwistandturnsthatitfeelsweird.Andthroughoutthestory,thestorygoesbackandforthintimeeveryotherchapteranditfeelslikeitismorenovelmixedasone.IalsodonotlikethattheauthormadethemcopinaccordingtothemcuniverseevenmoretheHP,butkeepsnerfingthemc.Thewritingisfine,thestoryisconnectedbutisjustallovertheplaceanditistomuchformytaste.

Itriedreadingitbutstoppedatchapter136.Iwillsay,theauthorisbrilliantandgoodatwritingnodoubt,andthestoryinitselfiswellwritten.Butidonotlikethestoryinitself.Inthebeginningitgoesbackandforthwithsoosomanytwistandturnsthatisisconfusingabit.Thenyougoabitmoreintothestoryandoverhaftofthestoryisgoingbackandforthintime/flashbacks.Whentheplotactuallywhen'tbackontrackagianthestoryandwhathappeneddidnotsitewellwithmesoidroppedit.Thestoryisallovertheplacebutwellconnected.2/5starsforme

Безреинкарнациироманбылбылучше,какясчитаю.

toocomplicated,dontknowwhyauthoriswritingwebnovelwithhisbigbrainheshouldgoworkforNASAorcurecancer.

It'sarathergoodstory,butIdon'tquitelikehowtheauthorlikedmakingcharactersingoodalignmentintovillains.Also,therearemanyinstanceswhereIfeelstrangehowmagicworksinthisworldwasdifferenttowhatIknow.Still,giventheauthorfusingmarvelandharrypotter,Iexpectsomechanges,soitdoesn'tbothermethatmuch.WhatIdon'tlikethemostwastheauthorshiftingintodifferenttimelines;althoughitwastofleshouttheexperiencesofMCaftertravelingbacktotime,Ithinkitwasn'tthatneccessary.

Ihavereadalltheavailablechaptssofar(265).IwillstartwiththefactthatthisstoryisVERYwellwritten.Theauthorintricatelycombines,HP,Marvel,Andhistoricalmythostodeliveraverycompellingstory.TherearesometimetravelshenanigansthatcreateaveryOPmcbuttheauthordoesagoodjobofcreatinginterestingsolutionstothemc'sproblemsthatarenotalwaysrelatedtopowerlevel.Theworldbuildingisslowatfirst,butthedifferentworldsmeshtogethersurprisinglywell.Andlastly,themostimpactfulpartofthisfanficisthecharacters.Everyonehasalltheseuniquepersonalitiesmotivationsthatmakethemfeellikegenuinepeople.Everycharacter'spersonaltraumaandambitionistakenintoaccountforeverydecisiontheymake.Itisverywellputtogether.IfIcouldpointoutanyconstothisstory,itwouldbethattheauthorhatestheprevalentleadersfromallthesourcematerialsheuses.ItslikehehasavendettaagainsttheworldleadersinHP,Marvel,andallgreekmythology.ThatremarkisalittlebiasedbecauseIhavegrowntorespectmajormarvelleaderslikeCharlesXavier.Summary:4.5/5-Fantasticfanficwithverywellwrittencharactersandscenarios.

Iwon'tsayhedeservedtobeburned...becausethatwouldbeacrime,afterthisbaldmandeniedhelptospiderman,Ilostanyrespectforhim...apartfromhispervertedparallellife,andthefactthathepracticallylobotomizedhimselfsoasnottobecomeanenemyofhumanityinanywayisagoodthing...butwhenattheexpenseofhispreciousstudents,Idon'tthinkitis.

Bald?Friend,wasittheMCwhoDIDN'TwanttohelpourNeighborhoodFriend?

Ireallylikedthefirst100+chaptersbutthefemaleprotagperspectivedoesfeelaweirdasamalereader...Butthestoryisgood!

Idontunderstandthedislikes.UsuallyiputmyselfintotheMCrolesoputtingmyselfintoaFLiskindofweird.Itwontruinthestorybutit'sjustkindofweird

Ihopeit'sgoodsincetherearesomanybadnovelswithaFMC

reallyenjoythisoneIthinkthemixbetweenhpandmarvelworksfine(forthosewhoworry,thesetwoworldsdoesn’treallymeeteachother,Soyoudon’thavetoexpectDumbledorefightingagainstironmanforexample).SpoilerIliketheideaofthetimetravel,sothatwehaveastrongandexperiencedmc,whodoesn’trunallovertheplacedoingtypicalnoobmcstuff.PlusIliketheflashbackswegetandhowtheyarealsorelevantforthe„currenttime“1995-2013andnotjustrandomunnecessarystorie.SpoilerIdon’tknowwhybutallthosebigcharactersthatarenormallyleadersintheirgrouparevillainsinthisnovel…Dumbeldore,Xavierandnickfurry

Nickfurryistheworst

Thisadarktypenovel,fanfictionsarereallyblendedwell,whohavethoughtDumbledorewasVillainandwhatwillreallyhappenpotter'sarealivethisismarvelouswaytothink.ialsolikehowherpastpersonaworkssometimesmessupthrough,ithinkitisacommonfaultofimmortaltohavesomeoverconfidence.Hopenovelgoallthewaylikethis