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Howisityougoaboutdefininggoodandevil?Aquestionthathasplaguedthemindofour...Readmore

Howis it yougo aboutdefininggoodandevil?A questionthathasplaguedthemindof ourprotagonisteversincehe wasborn.…Floid,a youngmanbornon earthsuddenlyfindshimselftransportedintoa worldof magicanddemonsafterplayingthemysteriousgame'Rivalle'.Butin thisworld,he is reincarnatedas a demoninsteadof theregularherohe playedas.JoinFloidas he paveshisownpathin thisnewworldas a demonswhilefacingsuspicionforlookingjustlikethegreatestenemyof thedemons,thehero.*I’dliketo putthishereforallthosewhowillbe interestedin reading.Thisbookis notthesortof novelwherethemaincharactergoesaroundtakingalltheabilitiesin theworldforhimself.Norwouldit be a bookwhereonlythemaincharacterhasscreentimeandwe onlyfocuson whathe’sdoingas he goesaroundsavingdamselsin distress.I wantto writea novelwhereallthecharactershavetheirpersonalitiesandtrials.Thereadersdo nothaveto loveonlytheMC sinceallthecharactershavesomethingworthrelatingto,theycanlikeanyof thecharacters.Therewillbe powersthattheMC cannothave(Ever)andpeopletheMC cannotfight(Fornow).Thingswillhappenoutsideof theMC’scontrolandhe mightneverevenknowabout it.If thingslikethesearen’tto yourliking,or if youwanta bookwhereyoujustwatchtheMC runaroundandspawncrazyskillsmindlessly,thenthisbookmightnotbe for you.Butif youcanstaywithme on thisjourney,I promiseto writesomethingyou’lllove.…Thisbookwillbe a mixof magic,kingdombuildingandan absurdlyinterestingcastof characters.Everythingthattheydo willbe perfectlyexplainedandallquestionsarewelcome.Justlikealways,I willmakea discordforus allto meetandseeourfavoritecharacterssoon!…I’mcurrentlyworkinghardto correctsomespellingerrorsin somechapters,so if youseeanyunfixederrors,pleasebearwith me.CurrentProgress —Chapter 19.…Pleasenote,theharemwillnotbe beyondfivemembersandtheywillallbe demongirls.Themaincharacterhasa distasteforhumannatureandso he willnothaveanyspecialrelationshipwithanyof themotherthanoccasionalsex.Thankyouandseeyouinside!Collapse

OverpoweredProtagonist,AntiheroProtagonist,Magic,Demons,Transmigration,KingdomBuilding,Beastkin,MaleProtagonist,R-18,Non-humanProtagonist,WeaktoStrong

Мусор.

It'sjustbad.

DISCLAIMER:Ireadonly20chapters.Skippedtochapter210toseeifthewritingstylegetsbetter.Itdoesnot.Childishwasmyfirstthought.Childishwasalsomyfinalthought.Thestoryischildishineverysingleaspect.Thewritingstylefeelslikeakidtellingyouwhatheaccomplishedtodayonmoddedminecraftcreativeplaythrough.Nosemanticplays,nowordgames,nometaphors,nonothing.Justahurriedtellingofafewactionsandthoughtswithalittlebitofunderdevelopeddialogue.PersonallyIfounditbearable,butannoyingnonetheless.1/5Thebiggerproblemwastheplot.Therewasnoplot.Itwasjustafullofnone-sensewesternstyleisekaipowertrip.Eventhe"battles"arejustbadlynarratedscenestakenstraightfromanime.Hereandthere,thenarratortriestomakeoutthemcassmartbythrowingoutrandomgoogledinfoabouteconomy,farmingorstrategy,butitfailsmiserably.Theexplanationsareoftenmessedup,sometimesevenillogical.2/5becausesomehowitstillmanagedtocatchmyinterest.Nowtothecharacters.Wellthereain'tnone.Youcan'tcallthatcharacters.Theyarejustmeansfortheplottogoon.Eventhemaincharacter.Hehasnodefinitepersonality,andchangesdependingontheplot'sunfolding.Andno,youcan'tpassthisoffasadaptabilityontheMC'spartunfortunately.I'dgivethisa0/5,buttheminimumratingisone,soit'sgonnabe1/5.Theworlddevelopmentisthere.Itexists.Alittlebit.Itcouldbeworst,butitcouldbemuchbetter.2/5DoIrecommendit?Ifyouhavethepatience,thetime,andhavenothingbettertoreadthenyes.Butifyousearchalittleharder,Iassureyou,youwilldefinetlyfindsomethingbetterthanthistowastetimeon.

ThereisnothingexceptFloidhere.GoaheadIwanttoreadFloid20-30-40timeseachchapter.

Lolinfinitemana,mcisweakasf#ck.

This"guy"thinksithassomethinggoodinitshandslol

Themaincharacterhasadistasteforhumannatureandsohewillnothaveanyspecialrelationshipwithanyofthemotherthanoccasionalsex.I'malreadydonereadingthisafterseeingthesynopsislmao.That'sonehornymc.

Howisthathorny?Doyouthinkthateverysexualactbranchesoffintoarelationship?Becausetheydon’t

Innovels?Yeah

Welltheyshouldn’t

ChaptersRead-100Rating-5/10Writtenlikea12y/owastheauthor.Noconcisestoryline-Noworldbuildingdepth-Extremelyonedimensionalcharacters-Theplotmakeslittletonosense-Overall,itssomethingtoburntimewith.Theentirestorylineisessentiallyjustjumbledideastogetherintheformofawishfulfillmentpowertrip.

Thewritingstyleisgood.However,ijustcan'tseemtogetattractedtothisnovelbecausethere'snodirectionofwherethemcisgoing

SkimmedonechapterandI'mout.Floidfloidfloidf#ckingfloidoneverysingleparagraph