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Aboydiesasaresultoffrictionbetweenademonandanangel.Hewillhavetobecompensatedand...Readmore

A boydiesas a resultof frictionbetweena demonandan angel.He willhaveto be compensatedandit willbe hislawyerwhowillfightforhimto getwhathe wantsmost…Collapse

Fanfiction,GameofThrones,Medieval,ASOIAF,KingdomBuilding,Reincarnation,MaleProtagonist,WeaktoStrong

Theconceptbehindthenovelisn'tbad,thepowersarequiteuniqueandinteresting,whilstthepaceisalright.Ton'sofpeoplewanttheMCtogrowupfaster,iunderstandthatbutdon'tthinkthatstheproblem.Inactuallityiftheauthorupdatedregularly(onceaday)thepaceofthenovelwouldseemmuchbetter.ThefightsaresomeofthebestIhavereadforGoTfanfic...period.Thefightatbearislandwasamazingandsowasthefightontheironislands.Wishmoreepicbattleswerefought.Myonlytrueproblemwiththisnovelisthepowerscaleandcomplexityoftheworldshistory.Thepowerscalesupwaytofastanddoesn'treallyfeelatalllikegameofthrones.Theoriginalstoryseemstrivialinthefaceofsuchagapinpowerandtheabilitiesofsomecharactersareabsurd.Thisnovelwouldbegoatedifithadafasterpace,consistentuploads,lowerpowerscale,andlesscomplexhistory.

Aquarterofthetimehe'scringeandtheauthorprobablyshouldhavestartedant10not5WiththattypegoodfunreadTheantagonisticiswellthoughoutMcneedswork

Notbadbutboringdropped98

Ilikeit.ithasKingdombuildingandnewstory.peoplewhodidn'treadorginalgotbookcanreadit.ithasfuntimebutoverdaramtize

Ivetried.MCstartedfromchildhoodanditgoesonformanychapters.Forme,achildof5-10yearsoldisabadideaforapoliticalgamewithothercharactersfromGOT.

whomostparticipatesinthepoliticalgameishisfatheranduncle,heonlygivessocio-economicideas.heonlygoestothegamewhenheisalmostanadultforwesterossociety.Attheageof12,andseeingBarristanSelmy'sachievements,12yearsandachievementsinbattleisnotsuchascarythinginthisworld.

Prettygood,atleastbetterthenmostgenericstuffonthissite.Thoughifeelliketheauthorhasnotreallycapturedtheessenceoftheoriginalcharactersthatwellandijustwishedhedidnotimplementhisownhistoryandrecreatethelore.............

Thisisjustplainboring,IlikeGOTfanficsoitriedgivingthisatrymultipletimesbutthereadingitselffeelstediousinsteadofbeingfunandinteresting.Thebestonei'vereadisfromcornbringerGameofThrones:ThePridefulOne,othersjusttrytoimitateOGbookspoorly.

Iveread"GameofThrones:ThePridefulOne".Itsgood.

I'veneverseensuchshitbeingcommentedonthissite,youwanttocompareafullysummarizednovel,whichrunsoveranysecondaryploteventhemainoneisextremelyrunoverPridefulOneisanexampleofhownottocreateafanficwork,totallyshallowwithfanservicethatdiedduringthebeginningtothemiddleofthenovelwiththisnotamasterpiecebutagoodwork.Myfriend,thisnovelistheonlyfanficofgotthatI'veseensincetheserieswascreatedbyHBOendedthefirstseason,ifyouwanttoreadafanficnovelwithforcedtimeskip,Goreadsomethingontherawsitebecausethere'snoshortageofitthere.ThisnovelistheonlyfanficI'veseenthathasanyworkontheMCandthosearoundhim,therestisuptotheGoreadsomethingontherawsitebecausethere'snoshortageofitthere.ThisnovelistheonlyfanficI'veseenthathassomeworkontheMCandthosearoundhim,therestisslapinthefaceandbillionsofkowtow

Theproblemwiththestoryisthatthemaincharacterisayoungchildmostofthetime.Thatisnotfun!Itwouldhavebeenfineifhewasatleastateenager.

It'ssoundingmorelikeyouguyswantsexandfights,bloodshedandslapsintheface,thanagoodstory.theprotagonistisachildbutbeingachild,hegetstoplaythegameofthrones.hedoesn'tgowiththefaceofasillychildandstartsplayingthegameofthrones,heuseshisparentsanduncles,heusesadultstoplaythegameofthrones.ifhehadatimeskipoutofnowhere,histeenager,itwouldbeboring,hewouldconquerwhatheconqueredeasilybecausenoonereadit,hehadtobebornattherighttimetoplaytherightway.orelsehewouldbekilledbytheironmen.Peoplewholikethenovelwanttoseefanservice,notawell-madefanfic.theywanttoseeDuncanf#ckSansa,Daenerysorwhateverass.

Childrenplayinggameofthronesarestupid?Thatisextremelyunrealistic,toplayGameofthronesyouneedtobeatminimumateenager.

Unrealbuttheprotagonisthasthemindofanadultwithknowledgeandpowersacquiredafteralegalbattlebetweenangels.Let'sfaceit,mostreadersofthissite,Comeherewithyourpenisinyourhand,notwantingagoodstory

Yougotnoargument.ThemccanbeageniusforallIcareitdoesn'tmatterbecausenobodywouldtaketheboyseriously.Incanonadulthoodisconsidered16beforethenit'stheregencyfortheyounglords/kingswhereeventhekingcouldbepowerlessashappenedwithJaeherysTargaryenwherehehadtorunawayfromhisowncourtandregent.

Ohhhhno,Ihavenoarguments!!!Alrightmybrother,Ihavemanyarguments,butIdon'twritebecausetheminimumchanceofsomeonereadingitorsimplygivinganegativevotejustbecauseit'sabigtext,ishigh.Notworthit.Incanontheadultageis16butyoumentionthejahaerys,Itmakesnosense,it'sthesouth,notthenorth.Theauthortookcareofthat,heputthereligiousandunitedsocietyofthenorthplustheloveofDuncan'sfatherforDuncantomakehisplansAndevenifthere'sachanceDuncanwon'tbeheardorthekidwithsillyideaswillsimplybeignored,itwouldn'tmakesensetotakethatroute,itwouldn'tbeagoodstory.

Theauthordidn'ttakecareofthat,itwasanaiveandstupidexplanationwithoutanysenseofhowhumanswouldbehave.Asifwrittenbyanautistoranti-socialperson.Anddon'tevenspeaknonsenseaboutsomedownvotes,lol.Youcareaboutsomedownvotesonapiratesite?!Plusyoudownvotedbro.

Eachchapterisatleast3kwordslong,ASOIAFisaboutgrayhumans,Martinhimselfcan'tmanagef#ckingcharacters.ExampleisRobertkillingtherhaegarwithjust1hammerblowandafewdayslaterhelaughsatthedeathoftherhaegar'swifeandchildren.Robertahotbloodedmanseeingthemanwho"raped"thewomanheloved,Onlyletrhaegardiewith1coupdegrace,withoutrippingrhaegartoshreds,perMartin'sexplanations:he'samanofhonorwithbadasswarriorsButlaterinking'slanding,helaughsatthedeathof1woman,1childand1infantThenyouaskafanficauthortotrytocreateastoryusingCharactersquotedon1pageofabook,howhewouldreacttohavinghissonageniusblessedbythegods.Idon'tcareaboutdownvotesonrandomcomments,Icareaboutnegativecommentsoncommentswithfacts,opinionsfromthosewhohavereadandseenploterrorsinanovel,AndbecausethepersonlikedittoomuchbecausetheMCjusteatseveryhottieintheway,hegivesadownvotealongwithotherlike-mindedmonkeys.

Whatthehellareyoutalkingabout?Imeanpowerfantasyisfunonceinawhile.Butareyouactuallysayingthisshittypowerfantasyfanficisbetterthantherealnovel?

Youknowhowtoread?Doyouknowhowtointerprettext?I'msayingallthetime,thatpeoplecomparefanfictotheoriginal,becausetheMCdoesn'tgetf#ckedevery1chapter,WhywouldMartindothat,sincehisdadcoulddisagreewithhim,Becausehisfatherhadagraypersonality,becauseinASOIAFallthecharactershaveagraypersonality.Butdamnyouaskedforthis,whenevenBigGeorgecouldn'tcreategrayCharacters.I'mexplaininghowpeoplewhodon'tlikethisfanficbecauseit'snottheoriginalWhennoteventheauthorofASOIAFcancontroltheworldbuildingitselfI'mexplainingthatpeoplewhodon'tlikethisfanficbecauseit'snotthesame,theworldbuildingisnotthesameasRRMartin'sASOIAFTheyaskfora"worldbuildingcontrol"whennotevenGeorgeRRMartincancontroltheworldbuildingitself

I'mintrudinginthemiddle,butI'malreadytalkingabouttherealthing."it'scertainlymorefun".butwithtimeitbecomesnauseating?forsureafterall,humanbeingsliketoseenewthings,eveniftheydon'twanttoleavetheircomfortzone.sowhenanassholelikeyoucomesalongtosaythattheoriginalnoveliscoolerthanwishfulfillmentfiction,youdeservetogetalittlemorefromlife,afterall,yourshasbeentooeasyforyoutocomehometiredand,ontopofthat,findyourlifelackinginrealism,Ibelievethatbotharegood,andeachhasitsroleinhumanentertainment

soundslikeyouwantadisneyflick.youknowyouarecommentingonagameofthronesfanficright?Whichtargetaudiencedoyouthinkitwouldattract?

Cursesmymother,butitdoesn'tmakemeaDisneyfanIwantedittoappealtopeoplewithatasteforgoodhistory,anoriginalstoryontopofASOIAF,notrushedbybattlesandsex.Honestly,Iexpectedthiskindofpeoplenottoenjoyreading(asa"fan"ofGOTnotASOIAF)

ignoretheothercomments,thisfanficistopnotch.fromthewaytheprotagonistentersthepoliticalsceneassomeoneimportant,Fromtakingadvantageofthepost-RobertRebellioninstabilityinWesteros,toinvestinginanunderservedindustryandbecomingsomeonepowerfulintheNorth.EverythingwasbuiltwithcarefromatruefanwhowantedtosavehisfavoritecharactersfromthebadfatesthatthegreatGeorgebuiltinasoiaf

Therearealmostnonormalnovelsinthisupdate.Whyaddfanfiction?

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