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Thedigitalmanagementsystemwasreformed,andaloopholewasaccidentallyfoundintheoperation...Readmore

Thedigitalmanagementsystemwasreformed,andaloopholewasaccidentallyfoundintheoperationofHell,whichcausedayoungmantodieinexplicablybeforehislifewasover.BecauseHell’sOfficerdidn’tpayattentiontothefantasyworld,withuncannyskillsAyakabegantoemergestepbystepinthepowerfulworld.However,whatHelldidn’texpectwasthatthefantasyworldandtherealworldintheendwasactuallythesameway.Collapse

AgeProgression,Aliens,Cheats,ChildProtagonist,Fanfiction,FastLearner,FemaleProtagonist,GeniusProtagonist,Gods,HumanoidProtagonist,Loli,MaletoFemale,OuterSpace,SpecialAbilities,Strength-basedSocialHierarchy,Transmigration,WeaktoStrong,Wishes,Shoujo-AiSubplot

TLDR:Ithasalotoffaults.Butotherthanthat,it'sadecentenoughwaytopasstime.Justasortamid-tierDBZstory.Thegoodstuff:Well,overallitwasprettyokay.Nothingreallyshinestomeasparticularlygood,butmid-tierqualityisstillqualityIguess.Thebadstuff:•Itreallyneedssomeonetoeditit.Idon'tknowifthegenderingwaseverrightinthewholebook?Namesarewrongalot.AndbecausetherewasalsosomuchdamnChinesecultivationgoobledegook,Ioftendidn'tknowwhatthef#ckwasgoingon.•TheMCalsojustsortofbreezesthroughthepowerlevelsatbreakneckspeed,andthefightsarepointlessbecausetheenemyalwaysmanagestosurvive.•The(Notalesbianharem)haremwasabitweird.ItwasjustfullofTwinsforsomereason?Andnobodyeverphysicallyinteracted?Like,I'mguessingcensorship.

ithoughtIreadthistochapter300+ormoredidtheyrestart?becauseofhowdifferenttheendingoftheoriginalonewaswhencomparedtoDBsuper?liketheoriginaldriftedallotoffromtheendofDBZandthebeginningofDBSsoisthisaremake?(forthoselookingatthisandthinkingdidthisFOOLnotreadityetididwellbeforetheremadeitandihavenotrereadthisyet)

OverallOk.Theplotisabitforcedinwaythatsheinterfereswithtimelinesoomuchbutalleventhappenalmostthesame.Itsfunthatshegetssopowerfulbutabitboringaswealmostnevergettoseeit.Noupdateforpast20dayssoamguessingtranslatorhasdroppedorsomething.Canreadifyouhavetime.

therenothingwrongwiththisfanfic,Idon'tunderstandwhypeoplearegivingitalowrating

MaybethepartwherethesummaryissuggestingDBpower'sarehigherthanHell's

Isthisgood?