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TragedyhadreducedJamestoanobody.WashedupandhomelessinNYC,hethoughthislifewas...Readmore
TragedyhadreducedJamestoanobody.WashedupandhomelessinNYC,hethoughthislifewasover.Thenamessageappearedinhisvision:[60,000yearcountdownhasended][Nemesis1released][Pleaseacknowledge]Astheworldfallsapart,asbillionsdie,associetycollapsesandallhopeseemslost,Jamesdiscoversapowerfultruth:hewaswrongtothinkhimselfanobody.WiththedawnoftheVoid,he'llbecomethemostimportantpersontohaveeverlived.*ReleaseSchedule:5Chaptersaweek;Mon-Fri.Collapse
ModernDay,Apocalypse,GameElements,Grimdark,LitRPG,Magic,MaleProtagonist,CharacterGrowth,OverpoweredProtagonist,Urban,Wars,Military,R-18,PoortoRich,System
Itwasamazingwhileitlasted...Ialreadyfelthighlysuspiciouswiththequalityofthewritingwhenitfirstcameout.Itdoesn'tlooklikeawritingthatfitsawebnovel;It'smoreofthosepublishedones,everychapterwasopenedwithahighlyorganizedintro,Authoralreadydevelophisownstyleofdescribingthings...there'realways3,howitfelt,howitsounds,andhowitseems.Everythingisjustsoconsistent.ItfeltlikeStephenKingwentundercoverandpublishedthebookusinganunknownname.
Droppedatch106,firsthalfwasgoodbutmccharacteristooemotional/betatocontinueforme,veryfrustratingafterreadingtomanycoldbloodedChinesemcs
Whatdoeshedo
Worldbuildingisreallytier1good,fromwhatIrememberthestorymakesitseemlikeMCisgoingtobereallyspecialandsmartbuthesuddenlyturnsemotionalandhavemoralstoholdhimback.It'sfineifhewaslikethatfromthebeginningoraoneoffbutIendureditfor30chbeforeitgottoomuch.Honestlyit'sworthreadingjustbecauseitwasoneofthebestforthefirst50-70ch
Thatcalledcharacterdevelopment
Endsonchapter162.Asmanyveteranshavesaid,thisnovelisprettygoodinanarrativelyway.Catchestherealisticenvironmentofaapocalypticsituation.Thedialogueisverymature.PlotflowisCinematicin1sthalfandrushedin2ndhalf.Thisnovelmaymildlyfrustratenewbiereadershenceit'srecommendedformoreveterans.Eveniwasfrustratedalotinthe2ndhalf(Ch80to140).Butit'sokasI'vewalkedthedaoofreadingforyears.Soitakenarrativesattheirpurestforms.That'swhyAVOIDifyouabsolutelyhateDark,TRAGICPASTSofcharacters.
Atransceder,IseeIamseekingtheDao,fellowDaoist,canyouputmethrough
isitjustmeorthecoverlookslikeitjustcameoutfrommidjurny
ChapteronehasgotmehookedGoodwritingandnicestorytellingfromtheauthorGoingtoforgein
Storygoesofftherailsafterlike100thchapter.Itwasgooduntilitwasn'tlmao.SpoilerMCandhiscrewgotpowerupsfromlike4lvltolevel500.
MANHOWTFCANANOVELLIKETHISBESOOOUNDERATEDLikefolks,thisshitisjusttoptier.@Hansbkwroteareviewanditwasaccurate.Thisnovelisjustsooof#ckingcoolJUSTREADTHISMAN.20-30Chaptersinandyouwilljustbereadingitonandon.
Manpeopleshouldreadthisandratethis.thisiseasy4.5starsplusnovel.
whatmcpowerifhispowerinterestmeI'llreadit
Igeniunelylikethisnovel....wtf...EverypartsofitreallyscreamsEXPERIENCEDAUTHOR.Thecharacters...howeachoneresemblesactualhumans.Theinteractions...it'sbasicallytellingmeit'snotdonebyanAuthorwherehumaninteractionisararity.Thenarrationswhentheapproachingasettinganddescribingit...theeasytounderstandwritingqualityplusthehumorhereandtherethat'snottargetedforkids.Ohmygod...thisisit.ThisisthedoseofagoddamngoodnovelthatI'vebeenlookingforinawhile.Isimplyloveit...---ReferenceforMe:Ch.44--Narrationsforcharacterdevelopmentatitsfinest.
Manthisnovelissoooogood.Weshouldpromoteitonreddit/discordwhateverplacereadersgather.Manlikethisshitissooogood.
ThisAuthorisliterallythelevelIaspiretobeonsomanyaspectsof.Theguyhad10yearsofwritingpublishednovels...Nowonderit'sawholedifferentlevelentirely.
Tellmeyoureapaidreviewerwithouttellingmeyoureapaidreviewer.Manbothofyallsocringewtf,itmakesmenotwanttoreadthenovellol
Remindsofthebotshavingaconversationunderayoutubevideoabouteconomics.Youcanseesomethingisterriblywrongwiththefirstglance.
Nahman,Thenovelisgenuinelygood.Wellitwas.Unlesstheauthorhadidksomekindofproblemanddecidedtoendthenovelearlydecidingtorushit.
IfyoulikeastoryofanmcwithawannabeherocomplexmentalitythenIwouldstronglyrecommendittoyou,asformeit'saNO!NO!NO!
whatdoyoumean?Theonlythingheroichereismctryinghishardesttosavethehumanracefromextinction(whichisnormalbche'sahuman),it'snotlikethemcmadeafussaboutallthemassacregoingaround,hedidn'tevenraisehisvoicewhenaportionofnewyork'spopulationdied.
Exactly.Heisjusttryingtosurvivewhilemakingsurethathumanitydoesn'tgoextinct.MChasnoherocomplex.Heisjustaresponsibledudewhoistryinghisbesttosurvive.Hewon'tgooutofhiswayputtinghislifeatrisktosaveothers
Noits.Notnormal
Whatisnotnormal?
suckmynuts...ifuwanttoreadthatsameoneconcept?Thenjustre-readthatsameonenovel.Udon'ttakeanyvariations?Then,suckmynutswithallurheartclingingtraditionlikeafcking80yearoldmanwhowilllosealltheirassetsforsimplystickingtothatsameonetrick.Timechangeoldman...udon'tlikenewthings??Thensticktourtimes;buryurself6feetunder.
Wow…thishastobeoneofthemostunderratedstorieshere..it’ssimplyamazing,Athrillerofaride…Ihighlyrecommend
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- Book 1 (Chapters 1 - 57) released on Amazon/KU! May 20, 2026
- Chapter 162: Technically we haven’t met yet May 20, 2026
- Chapter 161: Home Coming May 20, 2026
- Chapter 160: Power Name May 20, 2026
- Chapter 159: Essence at 100% May 20, 2026
- Chapter 158: And if I say no? May 20, 2026
- Chapter 157: Salvation May 20, 2026
- Chapter 156: A familiar form May 20, 2026
- Chapter 155: Distress Beacon May 20, 2026
- Chapter 154: Group fucking hug May 20, 2026
- Chapter 153: Still 100% human May 20, 2026
- Chapter 152: This thing's giving me attitude May 20, 2026
- Chapter 151: Points May 20, 2026
- Chapter 150: My man Thaggy May 20, 2026
- Chapter 149: Super condense universe stuff May 20, 2026
- Chapter 148: A promise of benevolation May 20, 2026
- Chapter 147: Not in Kansas May 20, 2026
- Chapter 146: What if they’re hot aliens? May 20, 2026
- Chapter 145: My Life as a Boom-Machine May 20, 2026
- Chapter 144: We’re all fucked up May 20, 2026
- Chapter 143: Bifrost May 20, 2026
- Chapter 142: Acceptable perimeters May 20, 2026
- Chapter 141: The three big D's May 20, 2026
- Chapter 140: We have to fight May 20, 2026
- Chapter 139: The rarest of the three May 20, 2026
- Chapter 138: Exponential May 20, 2026
- Chapter 137: How to troll a hundred million demons May 20, 2026
- Chapter 136: Siege May 20, 2026
- Chapter 135: Divine Heart May 20, 2026
- Chapter 134: Backrooms May 20, 2026
- Chapter 133: Going where you're not wanted May 20, 2026
- Chapter 132 May 20, 2026
- Chapter 131: Old Friends May 20, 2026
- Chapter 130 May 20, 2026
- Chapter 129: There was someone here waiting for me May 20, 2026
- Chapter 128: Revelations May 20, 2026
- Chapter 127: Earlier May 20, 2026
- Chapter 126: Cornucopia Seed May 20, 2026
- Chapter 125: TARGET ELIMINATED May 20, 2026
- Chapter 124: Aeviternum Hurricane May 20, 2026
- Chapter 123: Just Cruising May 20, 2026
- Chapter 122: Engagement May 20, 2026
- Chapter 121: Ready to Party May 20, 2026
- Chapter 120: Mortis Castrum May 20, 2026
- Chapter 119: Upgrades May 20, 2026
- Chapter 118: Cleaning House May 20, 2026
- Chapter 117: Nem8 May 20, 2026
- Chapter 116: Rampage May 20, 2026
- Chapter 115: Cohesion May 20, 2026
- Chapter 114: Party Time May 20, 2026
- Chapter 113: 2,315 Unspent Points May 20, 2026
- Chapter 112: Reservoir Cube May 20, 2026
- Chapter 111: Light Eternal May 20, 2026
- Chapter 110: Kumite May 20, 2026
- Chapter 109: Demon promises are shit May 20, 2026
- Chapter 108: Belanger May 20, 2026
- Chapter 107: Defiance May 20, 2026
- Chapter 106: Jaywick May 20, 2026
- Chapter 105: Old Crow May 20, 2026
- Chapter 104: Bouncy castle from hell May 20, 2026
- Chapter 103: My kind of terrible May 20, 2026
- Chapter 102: Star Boy May 20, 2026
- Chapter 101: Jersey May 20, 2026
- Chapter 100: Old Friends May 20, 2026
- Chapter 99: The Virtue of Justice May 20, 2026
- Chapter 98: Hive May 20, 2026
- Chapter 97: Dikastís May 20, 2026
- Chapter 96: BRRRRRR May 20, 2026
- Chapter 95: Inspiration May 20, 2026
- Chapter 94: Apparatus Bellicus Prime May 20, 2026
- Chapter 93: Canis May 20, 2026
- Chapter 92: The System May 20, 2026
- Chapter 91: Crisis May 20, 2026
- Chapter 90: Inside May 20, 2026
- Chapter 89: Bronze May 20, 2026
- Chapter 88: 100 May 20, 2026
- Chapter 87: Third Wave May 20, 2026
- Chapter 86: Gearing Up May 20, 2026
- Chapter 85: #dontlookdontdie May 20, 2026
- Chapter 84: Interviews May 20, 2026
- Chapter 83: Someday. Not today May 20, 2026
- Chapter 82: Ethics. Or a crude attempt at ‘em May 20, 2026
- Chapter 81: Red Line May 20, 2026
- Chapter 80: Count Down May 20, 2026
- Chapter 79: Imbuing May 20, 2026
- Chapter 78: Sola Anima May 20, 2026
- Chapter 77: Old Crow, Yukon May 20, 2026
- Chapter 76: Harsh Lessons May 20, 2026
- Chapter 75: Temptation May 20, 2026
- Chapter 74: New Haven May 20, 2026
- Chapter 73: Elmsford May 20, 2026
- Chapter 72: Get there fast May 20, 2026
- Chapter 71: Nemesis 3 May 20, 2026
- Chapter 70: 3-Day May 20, 2026
- Chapter 69: As close to family as I’ve got May 20, 2026
- Chapter 68: The secrets we carry May 20, 2026
- Chapter 67: Angel Wing May 20, 2026
- Chapter 66: Situation Room May 20, 2026
- Chapter 65: The leader of the free world May 20, 2026
- Chapter 64: Bless May 20, 2026
- Chapter 63: Smite May 20, 2026
- Chapter 62: Shield of Faith May 20, 2026
- Chapter 61: CSM May 20, 2026
- Chapter 60: Lies May 20, 2026
- Chapter 59: Wealth and power May 20, 2026
- Chapter 58: Is a knife evil? May 20, 2026
- Chapter 57: Upgrades May 20, 2026
- Chapter 56: That's All You Got? May 20, 2026
- Chapter 55: Gloria May 20, 2026
- Chapter 54: Fuck you, Jobu May 20, 2026
- Chapter 53: Manhattan May 20, 2026
- Chapter 52: Trauma May 20, 2026
- Chapter 51: Divine death machines May 20, 2026
- Chapter 50: The ashes of everything now May 20, 2026
- Chapter 49: Montecristo's May 20, 2026
- Chapter 48: Big axes work, yo May 20, 2026
- Chapter 47: Ma Deuces May 20, 2026
- Chapter 46: Hard Sell May 20, 2026
- Chapter 45: Blue Light May 20, 2026
- Chapter 44: Cowardice May 20, 2026
- Chapter 43: The major’s offer May 20, 2026
- Chapter 42: Bureaucratic bullshit May 20, 2026
- Chapter 41: Aura Mastery May 20, 2026
- Chapter 40: The Bear of Wall Street May 20, 2026
- Chapter 39: Iron May 20, 2026
- Chapter 38: Decisions May 20, 2026
- Chapter 37: Black gem May 20, 2026
- Chapter 36: Crown of Flesh May 20, 2026
- Chapter 35: Into the Hive May 20, 2026
- Chapter 34: Esprit de corpse May 20, 2026
- Chapter 33: Band of Killers May 20, 2026
- Chapter 32: A speech to give and a war to organize May 20, 2026
- Chapter 31: Getting our own crew together May 20, 2026
- Interludes May 20, 2026
- Chapter 30: Trust May 20, 2026
- Chapter 29: Get Some May 20, 2026
- Chapter 28: Sacred Strike May 20, 2026
- Chapter 27: Por que no los dos? May 20, 2026
- Chapter 26: Learning to Optimize May 20, 2026
- Chapter 25: The Big Guns May 20, 2026
- Chapter 24: Order from Chaos May 20, 2026
- Chapter 23: Nemesis 2 May 20, 2026
- Chapter 22: Go Time May 20, 2026
- Chapter 21: Brutal lessons May 20, 2026
- Chapter 20: Fourth Wave May 20, 2026
- Chapter 19: Smitey smite May 20, 2026
- Chapter 18: Avengers May 20, 2026
- Chapter 17: The Keys to FAO Schwartz May 20, 2026
- Chapter 16: A Lot of Important People May 20, 2026
- Chapter 15: Don’t you go dying on me May 20, 2026
- Chapter 14: Power May 20, 2026
- Chapter 13: Monitor May 20, 2026
- Chapter 12: Kill zones May 20, 2026
- Chapter 11: No time for this BS May 20, 2026
- Chapter 10: The National Guard is here to help May 20, 2026
- Chapter 9: What a shit show May 20, 2026
- Chapter 8: Sexy Lumberhomelessjack Dude May 20, 2026
- Chapter 7: I want an 8 Ball May 20, 2026
- Chapter 6: Stay informed. Watch the news. Stay alive May 20, 2026
- Chapter 5: Honey, guns cost money May 20, 2026
- Chapter 4: Two Million Dead May 20, 2026
- Chapter 3: Arete May 20, 2026
- Chapter 2: This Makes Total Sense May 20, 2026
- Chapter 1: Nemesis May 20, 2026
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