Jin Jiuchi had no idea where to focus on— that little kiss Shen Nianzu dropped on his overly sensitive cock, the enticing words that had co out of his little pretty mouth, how small and exquisite his face was when compared to Jin Jiuchi’s fat and pulsating length, or the fact that this was going to be his first gift...
...or all of the above!
"N–Nian’er..." he whimpered, feeling like he was teetering on the edge of madness. A loud breathless groan escaped him when Shen Nianzu finally closed his mouth around the tip and sucked.
"Fuck...!"
Jin Jiuchi scrambled to clutch onto the wall behind him for purchase as his legs abruptly felt weak just from that one movent from Shen Nianzu. Unable to control his form properly, his nails elongated, the sharp and deadly tips embedded into the wall.
Jin Jiuchi sucked in a shaky breath, a little flustered over how he was rapidly spiraling out of control. "Wait, wait, Nian’er—"
But Shen Nianzu did not wait. Instead, he seed to have been emboldened by Jin Jiuchi’s reaction. His eyes curved into crescents, then he opened his mouth wider and let Jin Jiuchi’s length slide deeper into his throat.
"Unghh... hahh...!" Jin Jiuchi threw his head back as a surge of dizzying sensation spread from his cock all the way to the top of his head, making his vision darken for a split second. He could no longer restrain the grunts and moans spilling out of his mouth.
Amidst the enclosed space, they echoed on and on, sounding especially lewd and obscene. Mixing in, albeit not as loud, was Shen Nianzu’s muffled whimpers and keens as he struggled to take in more of Jin Jiuchi into his mouth.
Was this the reason why Shen Nianzu had never wanted to shower together before? Because of the amplified sounds that made everything seem more ambiguous?
"Oh, fuck!" Jin Jiuchi’s body tensed at the irresistible sensation of heated and moist passage wrapping tightly around his length, his mouth falling open in a breathless gasp. He finally lost control of his strength, tearing off a chunk of ceramics from the wall, when he felt the tip of his cock bumping into Shen Nianzu’s throat.
"Nian’er... Nian’er..." Fervent cries fell freely from his lips as he was edged closer and closer to the climax. Unable to resist, he began to move his hips, pushing himself even deeper and causing Shen Nianzu to choke around his length. When he felt Shen Nianzu pulling away, he instinctively grabbed the jade doll’s head with his hands and pleaded in desperation, "No, no, no, Nian’er, don’t pull away! Please... it feels so good... I’m going to die if you stop now!"
In contrast to his forlorn, almost humble plea, the grip he had on Shen Nianzu’s hair was almost rciless, fixing the jade doll in place as he thrust his length into that warm and right passage. In and out. In and out. He set a quick and relentless pace, until Shen Nianzu was eventually able to take more than half of his length in.
"Mnnnh—!!" Unable to cope with the fullness in his throat, Shen Nianzu scrambled to grab onto his thighs, nails digging into flesh. Oh how beautiful he looked like this— his alluring lips stretched painfully around Jin Jiuchi’s girth, glaring up at him with his red-rimd and watery eyes, his cheeks stuffed full and wet silver hair plastered to his gorgeously flushed face...
Jin Jiuchi really wanted to ram his whole length inside in one thrust. God, he wanted it so much that he was going insane!
But...
Could Shen Nianzu take it when he was already struggling with half? What if Jin Jiuchi poked a hole out of his throat and accidentally killed him because he was too excited? No, he couldn’t allow it to happen!
And so, Jin Jiuchi gritted his teeth and summoned every ounce of willpower he had within him. Grunting, he slowed down the pace and pushed himself in, half the length every single ti, and he only quickened the pace once he felt Shen Nianzu’s jaws relaxing. "Nian’er... Nian’er..." his beloved’s na ca out of his mouth more like a plea, or the desperate prayer, filled with an intense obsession and adoration. "Haa, Nian’er, you look so pretty like this. You’re taking so well... ugh, Nian’er, I’m close...!"
A wave of intense shudder overca Jin Jiuchi as he sensed his climax approaching. Never before had he felt a sensation so extre and all-consuming that it threatened to unravel him from head to toe. It was more exhilarating than a free fall, and more mind-blowing than anything he had ever experienced before. He was like an overheated balloon stretched out to the limit, and all it took was one single poke for him to explode. This frenzied thrill he was feeling exceeded even his wildest fantasy.
Too deep in the vortex of lust, he did not even realize when he began to blabber, "So good... it feels so good, Nian’er! Can I co into your mouth, Nian’er? Can I??"
He really couldn’t shut up at all.
Presumably annoyed with his endless chatter, Shen Nianzu used both hands to cover the length he couldn’t take into his mouth, squeezing tightly. Accidentally or not, his teeth grazed against Jin Jiuchi’s underside – or perhaps he was really planning to chomp down on Jin Jiuchi’s dick – and little addition of pain beca the final straw that tipped Jin Jiuchi over.
"...!"
"Haah...!" Shen Nianzu pulled himself away, gasping, just in ti for Jin Jiuchi to release all over his face and mouth, spurts after spurts of hot cum that seed endless, until it eventually splattered all over the floor to be washed down the drain.
Even then, Jin Jiuchi was still hard – painfully hard.
Shen Nianzu wiped the cum away with his hand, and only then were his eyes drawn towards the two concaves on the wall where Jin Jiuchi had grabbed onto at the last mont.
"Ha..." A disbelieving laugh escaped him, his voice so rough and coarse that it was akin to sand grinding against paper. "Crazy bastard..."
Jin Jiuchi, on the other hand, was still trying to recover from the intense orgasm that almost wrecked him apart. Unable to help himself, he too kneeled down. Or to be exact, his legs just gave up on him. He grabbed Shen Nianzu’s face and mouthed at his cheek before eventually trailing down to his lips. Alas, because he was too worked up, his kiss was wet and sloppy, all tongue and saliva.
"Nian’er, Nian’er, it’s so good. How could you do that? You didn’t give a warning at all. Do you want to kill ? You really do, don’t you?" He murmured in between kisses, not even caring that he was licking at his own release. His hands did not stay idle either. They glided down Shen Nianzu’s shoulders, arms and waist, squeezing and kneading as if wishing to leave his marks everywhere.
"Nian’er, you haven’t cum yet. Should I..." he reached out a hand, intending to pump the jade doll to completion.
However, Shen Nianzu grabbed his wrist, stopping him before his hand could make contact. "Don’t."
They were both breathing heavily, not yet satisfied with the amount of gratification they had drawn from each other’s body. Even a single glance they shared was charged with a tension so high and thick that it was almost suffocating.
Swallowing hard, Shen Nianzu continued with a hoarse voice, "It’s better this way. Let’s... finish washing up and move to the bed."
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A/N: HAHAHA before you throw rocks at , please hear out! When I edited this huge chunk of text, I didn’t expect that the mass release to end here... *laughing-crying*
bad news, the real thing hasn’t started yet *nervous sweat* but good news, updates will return on 1st January, and not only that there will also be an nsfw-ish reward art! Details will be announced on the next update, so hang in there, everyone! It’s only two days!
on another note, this will be my last update for 2023, so let just say thank you everyone for sticking with from the day I published the story until now, despite the inconsistent updates QAQ please stay with in 2024 too, and see through everyone’s adventure until the end
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