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She crouched next to the body, looking at the coins that poured out.
"Talk about a cruel way to go," she said and picked one from the ground before dropping it back.
"It’s just coins. What could making him swallow it do?" the boy asked.
"Urghh, sotis I forget you are still a kid. The coins are tal. As more and more go down the throat, they start to rip up the throat, causing bleeding.
It does the sa going into the stomach, causing internal bleeding and imnse pain. But still, there are more thods to cause pain. Using this is simply not sothing soone would do.
It’s either these coins have a aning or sothing," she said and got up. She turned to look at the boy.
"Do a favour—use your sands and get what happened here," she said.
"No way. My sand is very difficult to craft. It takes hours and even days to remake a batch that I can just use in one day," the boy said.
"Yeah, but you’ve been stockpiling for years now. You don’t have to worry about that," she said.
"No way. It doesn’t matter," he replied.
"Do it and I’ll allow you to finally talk to her," she said with a smile.
Imdiately the boy heard that, he pulled out a pouch from his robes and poured the sand to the ground slowly while muttering so words.
The sand began glowing and moving. It started to take shape and soon created the shape of everyone that was here, even Jake and Crypt.
The entire scene replayed in front of them—the fight, the feeding of coins, and the killing of the boss. Everything showed.
Finally, the scene finished with Crypt leaving, and the sands fell to the ground and lost their glow.
"Hmmm, interesting," she said.
"Those two—they are definitely not your everyday person, especially the knight with the spear," the boy said.
"No. The boy that took the girl is the one to be more concerned about. He gave every instruction and the knight followed without question. He is the real threat.
And the fact that he was the one that asked the knight to force-feed the coins tells he isn’t a simple person. He is cruel to enemies," she said.
"So what are you going to do? Allow him to go?" the boy asked.
"Allow him? When have I ever done that? Instead, I want to et this person so bad. Soone that strong in Lurg isn’t easy to co by," she said, her lips curled up into a wide grin.
"Your bad habit is showing again. Don’t go causing havoc inside the town. Last ti, the Baron almost crashed out because of what you did," the boy said.
"That old man overreacts. There is nothing more important than a good fight, and if there is collateral damage, then so be it," she said.
"Sigh... Let’s just head back. We can look for the person tomorrow. I’m sure they haven’t left town, and even if they did, we can track them down," the boy said and turned away. They didn’t even waste a second to look at the bodies anymore.
Inside the room in the inn, Jake sat on the chair next to the small table in the room. He had ordered a good amount of food and laid it out on the table, while Crypt helped Ophelia take a bath.
He didn’t want to be the one to clean a little girl he just t, and though Crypt looked like a human, he wasn’t—so that didn’t count. After a while, Crypt walked out with her behind him. The inn provided towels, so she was wrapped up with that.
"Sorry you have to use that. There aren’t any clothes for you here, so tomorrow we’ll get you so," Jake said with a smile. Then he pointed at the food.
"You are hungry, right? You had a really rough day. You should eat as much as you can," he said. Her eyes lit up when she saw all the at and different foods waiting for her, but then she stopped herself. Her expression changed into one of sadness.
"Hey, hey, what’s wrong?" Jake asked in a hurry.
"Why? Why are you doing all this for ? You don’t even know ," she said, her voice slightly trembling.
"Oh? I guess it all feels weird for soone you just t today to care this much, right?" he asked.
"Yes," she nodded.
"Well, how do I put this... I understand what you’re going through. You already know I lost my mum and dad, right?
I also had a very terrible life filled with all sorts of bad luck. But unlike , who pushed through it without trying—I was simply waiting for death at one point—you did differently.
You strived for your own survival. But even in that, you didn’t lose your humanity or your values. I’m sure your parents would be proud, wherever they are.
You could have easily sold off, but you endured. I’d have to be cold-hearted to ignore you after sothing like that. Don’t worry about the details. Just eat. You can stay with as long as you want," he said, flashing a smile.
Her frown suddenly changed into a smile. She rushed at Jake and threw her arms around him in a tight hug.
’Oh shit, this is awkward,’ he said in his mind. He didn’t hug back and just allowed her to do what she wanted. After that, she rushed the food and began eating nonstop.
Jake watched from the bed, still wondering how all that food fit into her.
"Master, so what do we do from here?" Crypt asked as he stood beside Jake.
"Hmm... Tomorrow, we learn more about the Hundred Trials and the mark. We need to know before we can do much.
Wait, you knew about the Trials when you were alive. What happened? Why did you forget?" Jake asked.
"Many mories of my last life have been destroyed as I was reborn as your servant, Master. I only know of a few important things," Crypt responded.
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