Chapter 108: Chapter 108: Liu Cheng Master Liu (Please subscribe, ask for monthly tickets!)
In the dream, it took Wang Hao a while to process what had just been said!
Holy shit, does she an she’ll pay fifteen for a thousand words? Damn, this person must be a big shot! No Shortage of Money!
“Honestly,” Wang Hao promptly began to show off, “your writing actually isn’t very good, fifteen for a thousand words is a bit low. You must know that your diction isn’t very flowery, there aren’t many adjectives, and to use web novel terminology, it’s quite dry.”
In the dream: “Cut the crap, I know that already, what else?”
Wang Hao: “But actually, you shouldn’t be too hard on yourself. Not being flowery doesn’t an you can’t write a good novel. I see so strengths in your writing.”
In the dream: “What strengths?”
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Wang Hao: “‘Saucy as hell!'”
Hearing this, In the dream once again flew into a rage, “You’re the saucy one! Your whole family is saucy! What I write is very serious, okay?! I’m not writing smut here! And I am at least… damn it, just tell how to write it already!”
Wang Hao: “Chill, why are you rushing, sis? I was just kidding. Actually, your kind of writing can often produce interesting stuff. Of course, provided the structure is reasonable. Want to give it a try?”
In the dream: “Let’s give it a shot!”
Wang Hao: “Your style isn’t fit for writing lots of ssy stuff, you need to focus on the details, replace big scenes with details, and include more exposition in each chapter.”
In the dream: “Are you saying my descriptions are a bit verbose?”
Wang Hao: “Exactly, take this beginning for example. You always try to mimic others’ styles, babbling on and on about useless stuff, which is aningless. What do readers want to see? They want the story, the information conveyed through your words. That’s what will make them keep reading, got it?”
In the dream: “Makes sense, okay, I’ll give it a shot and see how it turns out by following your advice.”
After that, Wang Hao detailed the subsequent plot settings to her, talking nonstop for over two hours.
Speaking of which, In the dream’s writing is very much like that of ‘I Eat Tomatoes’ who was one of the Supre Gods in web novels in my previous life, very straightforward and concise. With just a little cultivation and good control over the pacing of the plot, I believe it won’t be long before she can stand on her own.
After closing the chat with In the dream, Wang Hao finally breathed a sigh of relief.
If everything goes as planned…
Muahahaha! Found the second writer!
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Zhonghai Writers Association literary group.
In the dream: “Hahaha! Today I caught an aweso web novel ntor! Hahaha! You losers, co congratulate your queen!”
Picky to Perfection: “Congratulations, Your Majesty, well done, Your Majesty!”
Flat Chest Genetics: “Her Majesty is in good spirits today, eh? Got yourself a good ntor? So you’re really planning to pursue web novels, huh?”
Flirt Master: “Cut it out. Perfectly good printed books and you want to ss with web novels? What future is there? Look at , these days I’ve been hooking up with a new artsy chick!”
In the dream: “Changing won more often than sanitary pads, just wait for the day you cramp up, jerk, get lost!”
Dancing on Coffins: “Your Majesty, wasn’t your last printed book a big hit? I heard it sold over three hundred thousand, why bother writing web novels?”
In the dream: “You don’t get it! We’re in the information age now, we must keep up with the tis, get it?”
Dancing on Coffins: “But our style doesn’t suit web novels. You’ve tried starting more than a dozen and haven’t had one good result, can getting a ntor this ti make it work? I doubt it.”
In the dream: “You don’t believe , huh? Just wait, I’ll shock you all yet!”
“Queen of Heaven’s Filth is pretty confident this ti, really effective?”
“Doubt my eye for things? The master I subscribed to is super cheap—only fifteen for a thousand words! Initially, I thought this level would start at least a hundred per thousand. Damn, I really hit the jackpot this ti!”
“Weren’t you learning to write web novels? You actually had to pay extra?”
“You don’t understand, Queen. She owns billions. It’s not the sa for us! What she wants is to prove her capability, money is literally insignificant, right?”
“Hehe, you do get it. The three million plus I earned from my printed book—I donated it all to the Hope Project. Money is just a number to ; it’s proving my strength that matters, hahaha!”
“Ah, the Queen is incomparable. I was over the moon just selling forty thousand copies, and here you are, casually donating millions.”
“It’s just a minor thing, I won’t chat anymore. I need to seize the mont and write more. Just wait for my good news, and make sure to support when my book becos a hit!”
“Everyone together shouted, ‘We will adhere to Queen’s orders!'”
“…Wow, today really is a lucky day to run into such a writer, and a dirty one at that, haha!” Having finally found the second writer, one who even pays extra money, Wang Hao stretched lazily, leaned back in his chair, and sighed: “The world sure is wonderful…”
“Oh, by the way, I’m now carrying a whopping three hundred thousand. How should I spend this money…
“Forget it, never mind. Ti to head to the filming site!” He got up to wash, dress, and brush his teeth, ready to leave for the set, when suddenly his phone began to ring.
“Eh? Ren Xing?” It was this guy calling. Wang Hao hurriedly answered, “What’s up?”
“Brother Hao, are you free today?” the cheerful voice of Ren Xing asked over the phone, “I was thinking of going downtown to look at so apartnts today. You know my situation with Zhang Muqing; I thought I’d buy an apartnt to show my sincerity. What do you think, Brother Hao, want to co check it out with ?”
Hearing this, Wang Hao was imdiately shocked: “Damn, are you serious?”
This was Zhonghai after all, and he was talking about buying an apartnt for his lover… That’d be at least five million!
“Of course I’m serious,” Ren Xing whispered mysteriously, lowering his voice, “Brother Hao, let tell you, Muqing is absolutely top-notch. Huge progress last night! I kissed her! Her lips, so tender, I think it was her first kiss! Damn, you can’t even find such a gem in a kindergarten, you know? Buying her an apartnt is definitely worth it, heh!”
This guy was still so flamboyant.
Wang Hao made a playful face, “You’re planning to keep a beauty in a golden house, huh? Alright, where are you? I’ll co to you.”
“Just co downstairs, I’m right there,” Ren Xing laughed loudly, “Enough chit-chat, she’s gone to buy cigarettes. We can’t let her hear this, hehe.”
Ah, seeing a close friend find his significant other is a good thing. Since there were no big events at the site and Ren Xing was a shareholder, he took leave directly.
As soon as he stepped out, Wang Hao saw Ren Xing’s black Land Rover Range Rover. Now wealthy and carefree with a beauty in his arms, Ren Xing truly seed like a winner in life, a stark contrast to others!
“Fatso, still showing off,” Wang Hao said as he opened the car door and sat in the passenger seat, chuckling, “So, spotted a good apartnt complex yet?”
At that mont, Zhang Muqing, sitting in the back seat, greeted Wang Hao as he got in, but what surprised Wang Hao more was that there was also a middle-aged man in the car.
The man was dressed in black traditional Chinese clothing and sported a pair of black sunglasses and a small mustache, holding a snuff bottle. He didn’t even acknowledge Wang Hao’s arrival but sat there looking rather arrogantly, resembling a person of high achievent.
Ren Xing hurriedly introduced him to Wang Hao, “Brother Hao, let formally introduce you. This is Master Liu Cheng, a genius in Feng Shui and Face Reading. I invited him today specifically to help check out the apartnt.”
Ren Xing’s dad was a miner who highly valued Feng Shui, so Ren Xing was also influenced significantly. Since they planned to buy an apartnt, checking the Feng Shui was obviously essential.
“So this is Master Liu, nice to et you!” Wang Hao quickly turned around and extended his hand, “Nice to et you for the first ti. Please take care of .”
“No need,” Master Liu snorted out two words from his nose, completely ignoring Wang Hao and said directly, “Let’s go. I’m on a tight schedule today. After looking at the apartnt, I still have to do a reading for Zhang Group’s venerable ancestor. No ti to waste.”
Zhang Group’s venerable ancestor?
Wang Hao looked towards Ren Xing, who promptly smiled and explained, “It’s the Zhang Group’s old ancestor who’s more than ninety years old. Master Liu reads his fortune every month to give him guidance. Master Liu ca today just because of my dad’s face; otherwise, he wouldn’t bother with anyone else!”
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