“Lift your shirt again,” I said gently.
Yu Long obeyed, still shy about the gesture. The faint scarring along his abdon was healing well, the lines thin and pale, as if drawn with ash water. I pressed along the ridians near his navel, then traced a light circle over his lower back, where the corrupption had once clung like thorns.
“Any nausea? Night sweats?” I asked.
“No,” His voice cracked slightly; still reedy from malnourishnt, but stronger than when he woke up. “I feel… clear.”
Behind him, Han Chen stood like a shadow. Watching. His arms were crossed, but I could see the tension in his stance, even in the way he breathed.
I offered a nod. “You’re not fully up to speed yet. But all traces of the demonic taint are gone. With a steady intake of recovery dicine and so mild physical training, you’ll be back to full strength within a month or two. Honestly—” I smiled faintly, “—your ridians are in better shape than mine were just half a year ago.”
Yu Long blinked rapidly, then lowered himself into a deep bow. “You saved . I was… I thought I would die in that place. I owe my life to you. You’re my benefactor, truly.”
I waved a hand dismissively, half-embarrassed. “Thank your senior brother. He fought the hardest and held out the longest. I just stitched things together afterward.”
At that, Han Chen coughed—just once. Subtle. Controlled.
I caught the aning imdiately.
I didn’t push.
There were truths that had to be buried. Yu Long didn’t need to know how many lives had been bartered for his own. Didn’t need to know the weight Han Chen still carried behind that calm exterior. That burden was his, and he’d chosen to live with it in silence.
I would respect that.
“I see…” Yu Long looked down for a mont, then straightened again. “Then… if I can ask another question…”
“Go ahead.”
He hesitated, as though bracing himself. “Are you a disciple of the Verdant Lotus Sect?”
I laughed. “Not quite.”
“Then… Whispering Wind?”
“Also no. Not with any of them.”
“Wait. You’re not affiliated?”
I shook my head. “I have ties to both. Favors, friends, exchanges. But I’m a free cultivator. I learned where I could, how I could.”
Yu Long stared at like I’d said I’d hatched from an egg.
“You’re independent,” he repeated, voice full of awe. “But you're so powerful. How did you do it?”
I scratched the back of my neck. “Powerful is a generous term, bt I'll accept that complint. I've worked hard, I suppose.”
Yu Long’s eyes widened further, admiration clearly mixing with disbelief. "Then—would you be willing to trade pointers with ? I know I’m not fully recovered, but even just briefly…" He paused, gathering himself. "I feel there’s much I could learn from you. Your aura… it’s subtle, almost hidden, yet there’s an unmistakable depth to it. Like a small puddle that hides an unfathomable depth beneath its surface."
I nodded, accepting his complint before fully processing it, and only then realizing the subtle jab embedded within it. "Did… did you just call unassuming?"
His cheeks flushed. "I ant no disrespect! It was ant purely as praise!"
I chuckled softly, shaking my head. "It's fine. Let give you one final look-over first, and then we can have a brief spar."
Yu Long straightened eagerly, standing patiently as I quickly reassessed his ridians and muscle tone. I focused intently, pressing lightly on each ridian path. Everything felt stable. Not perfect, but certainly enough for a controlled spar.
"Alright," I finally confird. "You should be fit enough to move around—just don't strain yourself too hard."
Han Chen, who I’d half-expected to object, rely inclined his head, stepping aside to oversee. Villagers had already begun gathering at the edge of a small clearing, their curiosity piqued by the sudden activity.
"We'll keep it simple," I said, walking to the center of the clearing. "I'll let you have the first three moves."
Yu Long nodded seriously, taking position opposite . He took a deep breath, his palms facing outward in a rigid, defensive stance—classic Iron Palm technique. His eyes narrowed, locking onto mine, determination flaring.
He moved, advancing swiftly, each step powerful yet cautious. He struck forward with one palm, testing my reaction. I sidestepped easily, guiding his palm harmlessly past with a gentle tap. He pivoted swiftly, planting his foot and striking again with increased intensity. His style was imdiately familiar. A simpler, slightly less experienced echo of his senior brother. Solid, defensive, and focused on closing the distance to disrupt an opponent’s stance and rhythm. His strikes were controlled, designed to weather heavy blows. And unlike my Rooted Banya Stance, he could move as he pleased while guarding himself. Perhaps I could glean so insights on how to do the sa.
As he pressed in again, I parried carefully, deliberately pushing back against his palm to force him to firm his stance. Each counter I delivered was carefully moderated; qi-infused but devoid of the Heavenly Fla Mantra's intensity. I wanted to test him, not overpower him.
Yu Long quickly adjusted, tightening his stance, muscles tensing visibly as he began to absorb the force of my blows and redirect them. His adaptation speed was impressive. He took each redirection with poise, becoming steadier and more confident with each exchange.
Seeing an opening, I spun swiftly, launching a controlled kick aid to push him sideways and signal the end of our exchange. But as my foot connected, sothing unexpected happened.
Instead of absorbing the strike as before, Yu Long pivoted, planting his foot firmly while letting out a sharp intake of breath. His palm rose to et my kick, but this ti it didn't simply brace—it rebounded the force back up through my leg, jolting slightly off balance. My eyes widened.
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He seized the brief opening, thrusting a palm strike toward my chest. My instincts flared, and despite the surprise, I twisted sharply, slipping around his blow with fluid grace and appearing behind him. My palm gently touched the back of his neck, signaling the match’s end.
Yu Long exhaled sharply, breathing ragged from the effort, but his eyes shone brightly with excitent and newfound confidence. He turned around, bowing slightly as the gathered villagers quietly cheered, before quickly returning to their daily tasks.
"Thank you, Kai," Yu Long said earnestly. "I learned a lot from our match."
I inclined my head respectfully. "You're welco. Honestly, you surprised . What was that last move you used? The one that repelled my kick at the end."
Before Yu Long could answer, Han Chen stepped closer, his gaze asured and analytical. "It's called the Stone Mirror. It's a high-level defensive technique, rarely taught even among first-class disciples."
Yu Long scratched his head sheepishly. "Senior Brother makes it sound more impressive than it really is."
Han Chen shook his head firmly. "Don't be modest. To execute Stone Mirror successfully, you must precisely gauge the power behind your opponent's strike, channel exactly the right amount of qi, and maintain perfect bodily tension. Too little qi, and you'll be overwheld; the slightest mistake in stance, and you'll fail to reflect the force back."
Yu Long flushed slightly under the praise, but Han Chen continued, his tone stern yet admiring. "Even I rarely attempt it outside controlled sparring. Yet you—having observed the elders perform it just once—managed to replicate it. That level of innate comprehension is extraordinary."
The third-class disciple glanced down, clearly humbled but pleased by the words. But his face turned sombre shortly after. Likely rembering the fall of his sect.
I studied him closely, a realization dawning. His execution had been near flawless, balancing stance, timing, and qi with instinctive accuracy. Revising the mont within my mind, my curiosity sharpened. This was invaluable. My Rooted Banyan Stance shared core principles with Stone Mirror, and this new understanding could elevate my defensive martial arts significantly. Despite being one of my first techniques, it lagged behind in comparison to the Heavenly Fla Mantra.
"Yu Long," I began carefully, unable to hide my eagerness, "Could you demonstrate the Stone Mirror technique again for ? Slowly, if possible."
He looked startled but quickly nodded, pleased to reciprocate. "Of course! It's the least I can do for all you've done."
I stepped back slightly, giving him room. Han Chen observed quietly, eyes glinting with approval as Yu Long carefully adjusted his stance, breathing deeply and evenly.
"So it starts with your footwork. Depending on where the strike's coming from, you have to..."
SCENE BREAK
I let out a long breath as I left the training field, the distant sound of hamring echoing from the village square as repairs continued. My limbs still tingled faintly from being repelled by Yu Long's Stone Mirror technique. I'd revise it within my mindscape later and see how I can incorporate it into my own martial arts.
But my mind buzzed far louder than my body ached.
Not from the spar itself, but from the technique.
Stone Mirror.
It was genius—purely, simply genius. Not in the way that made crowds gasp or flas roar, but in how effective it was. A technique built on timing, qi control, and subtlety. One when properly executed, allowed a third-class disciple in the Qi Initiation stage to push back against the blows of soone a cultivation stage higher.
And that’s what struck .
Yu Long’s explanation afterward had been… well-aning. But clumsy. Not because he was stupid. Far from it. It was the kind of clumsiness that ca from trying to describe sothing as natural to him as walking or breathing. Like asking a fish to explain how it swims.
He didn’t understand why it was hard for others. Because to him, it wasn’t.
And that was what made him dangerous.
That was the definition of a genius.
I glanced over my shoulder as I walked, watching Han Chen ruffle Yu Long’s hair with a small, rare smile. The older disciple said sothing I didn’t hear, and Yu Long laughed.
I looked forward again, lost in thought.
Han Chen had risked so much—stained his na, thrown his lot in with bandits, borne the scorn of strangers—all for this boy. I used to think it was just out of duty. That he was simply a loyal senior brother clinging to the last remnant of a fallen sect.
But maybe it was sothing else.
Maybe Han Chen didn’t just see a junior brother.
Maybe he saw the future of the Iron Palm Sect. A chance to rebuild through a single, prodigious fla.
I let that thought settle for a mont before shaking it free. It wasn’t my place to judge, or to presu. I had my own path to walk.
And that path brought to the greenhouse.
I pushed open the door and stepped inside.
The scent hit first: earth, sweet pollen, bitter sap, and sothing tallic beneath it all. I barely made it three steps before I was brushing against thick stalks, oversized leaves, and flowering vines. Everything was growing too fast. Too strong.
“Make space,” I murmured aloud.
The plants responded at once. Coordinated and fluid. The vines retracted. Shrubs leaned away. Leaves turned aside like a forest bowing in the wind.
In re monts, I had a path forward.
I walked deeper inside, stepping carefully. Even with their awareness of , the sheer density made maneuvering tricky. The kudzu in particular had spread wildly, wrapping along the walls and even climbing the roof supports, its hybridized root systems battling other plants for dominance. I reached down, severed a few strands, and tossed them into a feed basket. They’d serve well for the livestock.
Next was the wolfsbane, now coiled in thick blue leaves, then the Golden Bamboo. This batch was tinged with a tallic sheen from its infusion of extracted iron essence. Wang Jun had plans for it. Armorwork, maybe. Or weapons. I clipped the tallest stalks with a grunt and bundled them aside.
But even as I moved through the jungle of potent hybrids, every single plant curved subtly away from a particular corner of the greenhouse.
Three fleshy stalks. Bulbous. Pulsing faintly with a dull inner light.
The Dawnsoul Blooms.
No other plant dared grow near them.
Not even the blood-hungry kudzu.
I stepped closer.
Two days. That was all the ti that had passed since I planted them.
Two days, and already the Dawnsoul Blooms had nearly doubled in size. Their fleshy stalks now curved upward like grasping hands, and at their tips, the faintest glimr of glow shimred beneath their translucent petals, pulsing like a heartbeat. Their appetite had grown too; exponential in both need and vigor. Even the greenhouse’s thick qi saturation couldn’t keep up.
I opened the wooden barrel I’d tucked into the shaded corner, releasing the faint scent of dried blood and crushed carapace. Inside, neatly wrapped in fine webs, were the preserved remains of pests—burrowers, rats, and even other snakes; hunted by Windy and sealed in silk by Yin Si. Despite her skittish nature, she was an incredible help.
I handed one bundle to each Dawnsoul Bloom.
Their tendrils twitched.
Hungry! Hungry!
A one-word chant, echoed like excited children. It wasn’t malicious. Just honest.
The tendrils uncoiled, latched onto the webbed carcasses, and began feeding, the silk dissolving as if it never existed. I crouched beside them, watching the way the flesh was drawn inward, like roots sucking marrow from bone.
Once the bundles were nearly consud, I uncorked a set of vials and poured a asured splash of hybrid ginger essence at each of their bases. The soil hissed faintly, and the Blooms pulsed once more, growing visibly brighter.
Food and drink.
Even demonic flowers had their preferences.
Their color had shifted again. Now, soft halos of gold shimred at the edges of their petals, as if dawn itself clung to them. And where there had once been only one bulb per stalk, I now saw signs of budding: new stems branching outward, promising even more blooms from the sa root.
I gave a low whistle. “You’re almost ready,” I muttered.
From there, I made my way to the Soaring Swallow, where Lan-Yin had set up a distribution station. What used to be a quiet inn was now alive with motion; people moving in loose rhythm as they peeled tubers, washed greens, and ladled broth into wooden bowls. A row of makeshift tables held crushed herbs, cooled tinctures, and poultices were being produced on a separate table; none as refined as my own, but good enough for bruises, mild fevers, and aching joints.
Useful.
A month ago, these people had been fleeing death. Now, they were holding up a village.
Lan-Yin noticed approaching and turned, one hand on her belly, the other on a ladle. Her pregnancy hadn’t slowed her determination in the slightest. She moved with calm efficiency, issuing instructions without ever raising her voice.
"Here," I replied, offering her the Spirit Moss and Golden Millet.
She accepted the bundles, inspecting them briefly before passing them to one of the won nearby. Then, without a word, she reached down and handed a bowl of steaming soup, fragrant with mushrooms and other herbs.
“Esteed benefactor, this humble one has prepared a simple al to express my gratitude for your kindness. Though my skills are ager, I hope the flavors may bring you so small joy.”
I accepted the bowl with both hands, murmuring my thanks before sitting down to sip it. The warmth spread through slowly, chasing away the lingering chill in my limbs.
Delicious. Rich, earthy depth from the mushrooms, with just the right saltiness from the pickled root. It was simple, but not plain. Honest. Nourishing.
It held a flavor that rivaled the best dishes I had in Crescent Bay City. Possibly even better.
I swallowed, then looked up at her with the haughtiest expression I could manage.
“Hmph. Acceptable.”
Lan-Yin raised an eyebrow.
“Barely acceptable,” I corrected myself. “You would do well to rember this young master’s grace, and continue serving such fare daily. Perhaps then I shall bestow upon you the honor of a second bowl.”
Her smirk said she saw right through . “Oh? Then shall I carve your na into the soup pot for easy future identification?”
“That would be wise,” I said gravely. “Mark it well. A day may co when you feed princes and sect masters, but you shall rember this day, when the great Kai Liu deigned to eat your cooking not once—but twice.”
“Twice?” she asked, ladle already dipping back into the pot. “So, you want seconds?”
“...Yes, please.”
She chuckled and poured another generous helping into my bowl, steam curling between us like a fleeting thread of comfort.
I ate slower this ti, savoring both the food and the rare stillness between us. Around us, the soft rhythm of village life moved on; wooden tools clacking, low voices trading recipes and gossip, the creak of carts as supplies were moved.
Lan-Yin didn’t speak much as she sat beside , and I didn’t feel the need to fill the silence. We just shared space for a mont.
Two childhood friends, one growing a child, the other growing a garden.
When I stood again, I handed her the empty bowl and t her eyes.
“Thank you,” I said, quietly this ti.
She nodded, her voice equally soft. “Go on, then. Your plants won’t talk to themselves.”
I gave her a mock bow and turned, shouldering my bundle of harvests and making my way back toward the shop
The scent of roasted barley and crushed tea leaves drifted from within before I even opened the door.
Inside, Tianyi sat behind the counter, wings tucked in, her antennae twitching as she flipped lazily through a ledger she clearly didn’t understand.
“Good afternoon, what can I help you with?” she said, not looking up.
“You shouldn't say that without looking at the custor, you know.”
Windy, curled in a loop behind her, flicked his tail up lazily, tapping the edge of my bundle like an inspector. I shifted past him with practiced ease, stepping behind the counter where the Two Star Pagoda Pill Furnace lay.
The mont I crossed the threshold, the tension left my shoulders. This was where I belonged; soil-stained robes, herbs in hand, and the quiet hum of qi thrumming beneath the floor.
I set the bundles down.
Took a breath.
And began to refine.
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