How should an excellent script be composed?
First, the worldview.
Laying the tone for a world, is it a No Magic World or a Magic World? If it’s the latter, what level of force is set, and to what extent can one person’s power achieve? A single army, a city, a world, or ascend to the universe?
Second, the protagonist.
Establish the protagonist’s goals, divided into short-term goals, mid-term goals, and long-term goals. This advances the script’s direction.
What satisfying points and Evolution System exist in the protagonist’s short-term goals? What core conflicts and era characteristics do the protagonist’s mid-term goals involve? What kind of sublimation and hidden world secrets are related to the protagonist’s long-term goals? What actions can the protagonist take to achieve these goals? Will it be smooth sailing or full of hardships, gaining public attention, or content with solitude?
This leads to the introduction of companions supporting the protagonist’s goals and enemies opposing them. The protagonist’s level will determine these people’s levels.
Third, the tone.
Drama, cody, tragedy.
Fourth, conflict points and core relationships.
During the script’s progression, what kind of conflict points will arise from the core relationships established by the protagonist clashing with their long-term goals? If the anticipated climax point only exists in a fragnt, it gradually connects through long-term core relationships.
Fifth, rhythm.
Opening → Understanding the background → Paving characters → Conflict occurs → Resolve conflict or prolong conflict → Plant hidden dangers → Insert daily life or emotional line → Minor climax → Sudden and significant plot twist → Retrieve hidden dangers or hints → Lowest point → Dawn arrives → Major climax → Reverse resolutions → Characters gather or die in large numbers → Closing puzzle-solving → Conclusion
If the story is long enough, insert a "paving — minor climax — paving — minor climax" cycle. It could be character highlights or unveiling secrets.
Sixth, key figures.
In a script, there are both companions assisting the protagonist and enemies opposing them.
Companions are divided into four types: high cohesion and high freedom, high cohesion but low freedom, low cohesion but high freedom, low cohesion and low freedom.
Enemies co in various types, asured by activeness and hostility. For example, soone who defected to the enemy but intends to help the protagonist, has high activeness but low hostility. Another example is a traitor beside the protagonist, having high activeness and high hostility.
A comprehensive script contains all types of characters and can add more detailed asurent elents.
Among them, the most important is the existence of the orchestrator behind the scenes.
In a normal story, the protagonist will face an orchestrator standing in the end. This person may not have high hostility or activeness but becos the ultimate enemy in the process of achieving the protagonist’s goals for various reasons; perhaps only due to simple strong power, perhaps just wanting to establish a new order world, without ever intending to clash with the protagonist.
This depends on the second point—the level of the protagonist’s long-term goal determines the orchestrator’s level.
The orchestrator can be a person, a chanism, or even a kind of era tragedy or social order.
However, more in line with public taste and the taste of the World Tree, the orchestrator is best human. Otherwise, where should the anger accumulated from the public’s continuous Observation go? How can the protagonist eliminate an era tragedy? It’s more direct and satisfying to eliminate a person.
An adventure story, if the orchestrator never appears, not knowing who is causing trouble until the end, is most likely not a good story.
In my Observation within the Space-ti Record Body, I cannot endure the orchestrator’s Invisibility.
The orchestrator must appear.
Especially, Luowasha is one of my favorite and the most comprehensive Space-ti Record Body. I won’t tolerate such a flaw.
So, even knowing the danger, I will definitely...
Appear.
——Supre Lord Tosolius "How to Compose an Excellent Script"
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"We must go back to the past and reveal the orchestrator behind the Disciple Ga—Supre Lord." Su Liujin, with one hand on his waist, spoke these words: "I want to see Him with my own eyes and know who He really is."
Amidst the crashing waves, there was a smile on his lips, exuding an air of confidence.
Su Ming’an, hearing this, asked in surprise, "Can you travel through ti and space?"
Su Liujin had a montary look of embarrassnt on his face and shook his head, "No. We are not going to rewrite history but to the mories."
He opened his mouth as if he wanted to continue to explain but seed to have forgotten the words, quickly picking up the mask of the Shitposter Demon in his hand, reading the words engraved on it like an elentary school student reading a book:
"In the first Disciple Ga, I beca the champion and must have seen the orchestrator Supre Lord, but after the Disciple Ga ended, I was erased from mory by the Supre Lord and couldn’t rember His image."
"At that ti, I barely knew the image of the Supre Lord and would definitely not sit idly by and wait to be erased from mory. I must have left a backup hand and hid the image of the Supre Lord in the first Disciple Ga, perhaps in so corner of the ga."
"Once the current Savior—which is you—triggers the death chanism of the Disciple Ga, my backup hand can be triggered, allowing to return to the past images with you and find the image of the Supre Lord I buried back then."
Su Liujin opened the redwood box in his hand, inside which lay a glass-like photograph: "This is the film I left using Xiao Bai’s Ti authority back then, which can help you and enter the images of the past."
Su Liujin finished reading such a long passage, his golden pupil looked at Su Ming’an with a slightly nervous gaze, as if afraid that Su Ming’an did not understand.
Su Ming’an already understood. It’s very simple, just returning to the images to find sothing. Su Liujin said so much, fearing that Su Ming’an was a foolish university student.
"The Darkness Forest Law," Su Ming’an said, "If we grasp the Supre Lord’s image and aura, spreading it throughout the universe. It’s like lighting a torch walking in The Dark Forest; the Supre Lord becos a light source in the darkness, constantly having to guard against the peeping and attacks from other High Dinsions."
Every word said will be known.
Like Dieying, who controls the "Causality" authority in High Dinsions, as long as they know the image and aura of the Supre Lord, the Supre Lord will be integrated into Dieying’s causality web. Although finding the Supre Lord will still take Dieying a long ti and effort, with a high probability of still not finding it, there is no reasoning for guarding against a thief for a thousand days.
So, this is the reason the Organizers didn’t want to expose their images during the eting, all covered by Black Mist. It was only later, when a fight broke out, that their aura was exposed, revealing their images. So High Dinsions intentionally exposed themselves for a fight, but the Supre Lord, this secretive observer, was not among them.
Su Liujin displayed a proud smile, like a child who achieved excellent results: "Once found, we can trade with the Supre Lord. If He doesn’t want us to expose His image, then He should protect Luowasha."
Su Ming’an thought of a question and asked in puzzlent, "What if the Supre Lord anticipated your thoughts and deliberately didn’t show up in the first Disciple Ga?"
Su Liujin laughed, "Any High Dinsion might not show up, but only the Supre Lord can’t possibly remain unseen throughout."
Su Ming’an asked, "Why are you so sure?"
Su Liujin closed the box, coughed twice, acted like a small teacher, pretended to be serious, and said, "In a script, it’s absolutely unforgivable if the orchestrator never appears all the way. The Supre Lord, being a chaser, would not tolerate watching such a Space-ti Record Body."
"Since He is watching and chasing updates, as the orchestrator BOSS, He is bound to appear before the champion. Even if He knows there’s a risk, He will definitely show up."
"Old An, you probably noticed earlier that each High Dinsion has its path, like the path of Dream, path of Salvation, path of Gluttony, and path of Slaughter. But the Supre Lord should follow the path of Chasing Updates... Uh, I don’t know how to decorate it with grand words, but ’chasing updates’ is a straightforward term!"
"In other words, it needs to pursue high-quality space-ti record bodies to maintain its existence, which has beco its fundantal desire and habit. All its actions will subconsciously follow this path. This is both an entropy reduction tool and its path."
Su Ming’an thought of many things.
Yuanyuan, the Spiritual Dream-Maker, follows the path of dreams, always crafting dreamscapes.
The Sixth Thrones Little Greedy Cat follows the path of gluttony, unable to restrain its desire to devour, biting into anything it sees.
Obsession is the reason for the existence of high-dinsional beings, and it is also the way high dinsions preserve their humanity.
From this perspective, the Second Thrones Sique and the Supre Lord are quite a match. One writes, the other observes.
"Red Dust." Su Ming’an gave a more fitting na. At the sa ti, he wondered, what kind of na is "Old An"? Is he much older than Su Liujin?
The ti spent sleeping doesn’t count as age; nineteen is indeed a bit older than sixteen...
"Yes... Yes, yes, what Red Dust Path should be observing various stories, savoring the red dust." Su Liujin also found it appropriate.
Su Ming’an sorted through Su Liujin’s experiences:
Actively participated in the first Disciple Ga → Discovered the image of the Supre Lord → After winning the championship, hid the image of the Supre Lord in the video of the first Disciple Ga → Had his mory erased by the Supre Lord → Years later, the current Savior, Su Ming’an, acquired the ability of the War God Dragon King Narration, returned to the first Disciple Ga, found the image and aura of the Supre Lord, and returned to the present to negotiate with the Supre Lord.
Calculating the future from the past.
They will not change history; what they change is the present.
Winning the championship as a re jellyfish, Su Liujin was by no ans simple.
This Su Liujin, who lost his mory, is much more innocent. If Su Ming’an lost his life-and-death experiences in the World Ga, he would probably be just as naive.
Su Ming’an rembered that he had seen the Supre Lord; at that ti, the Supre Lord transford into a goat and must have left so aura, but he did not deliberately retain it.
The Supre Lord is truly fanatical about continuations, willing to do anything for perfection. Having even read "Luowasha," such a person would succeed in anything.
"Did Kasadia write these ssages on the mask for you?" Su Ming’an glanced at the Shitposter Demon mask in Su Liujin’s hand, and Su Liujin had been reading from it.
"Yes." Su Liujin scratched his head: "But it never appeared again, do you know where it went?"
Su Ming’an coughed lightly, unsure if Kasadia died due to the rules: "It couldn’t have told you these things for no reason; it’s probably years ago that Sique instructed it. Afterward, I didn’t know where it was."
However, if the Shitposter Demon just died like that, it would indeed be quite in line with its pursuit. Very fitting for its path.
"Let’s go." Su Liujin picked up the box and reached out: "I no longer have Strength, nor do I have mory. I cannot return as an entity, so I will attach to your ability—the War God Dragon King Narration."
... Accompanying Old Grandfather Su Liujin?
Su Ming’an held Su Liujin’s hand; the next mont, Su Liujin transford into a white light and flowed into Su Ming’an’s body.
He could finally fight alongside the original owner in the truest sense.
...
[Hmph hmph hmph! The Jellyfish Emperor is here!]
[Tiny Supre Lord, laughable, laughable!]
[Let us work together and take it down! Hassake!]
...
When Su Liujin is in human form, he appears quite proper. Once Su Liujin doesn’t appear human, his speaking style instantly becos imperial.
Su Ming’an rembered a batch of netizens who were the sa way; timid offline, but their online statents were extrely open and shocking, truly revealing their nature.
"So, Emperor, shall we set out?" Su Ming’an picked up the Redwood Box, opened it, and looked at the glass fragnts inside it.
...
[Wait!]
...
[Though the Emperor is full of passion, I don’t want to deceive you, Old An. The truth is, even if we caught the Supre Lord’s weakness, the Emperor cannot guarantee it would help us protect Luowasha. ]
[The safest thod remains for you to steadily lead the small world out of the World Ga. The Emperor vaguely knows the outside situation; even if Eden’s control was taken by Noel, you have already gained Wu Yi’s favor, and it’s very likely that you can have both the Fifth Thrones and Ninth Thrones assist you. The little golden hair is only fit to pick strawberries behind you.]
[Hmm... The Emperor has selfish reasons too. The Emperor, though extrely knowledgeable, still wants to know what exactly happened during the first Disciple Ga, why seeing the sea brings heartache, and the past of the golden-haired youth who woke the Emperor using the array. That’s why the Emperor wants you to go back together.]
[But everything we do is to make this world better. As long as this world is saved, neither the Emperor nor the Emperor’s subordinates will have complaints. The Emperor knows this deep down.]
[You just need to choose the path you think has the highest chance of success.]
[If you don’t want to explore further, turn around, and you can leave this sea.]
[Going forward might reveal the full appearance and final story of Luowasha, perhaps improving your future prospects. Going backward is more stable.]
[The Emperor won’t deceive you, won’t use your status as the Savior to pompously guide your choices.]
...
Su Ming’an stood for a mont.
Su Liujin is the most sincere original owner he’s ever t. Unlike so people, he doesn’t guide him to ascend to Yun Shang City to succeed, nor does he chase him down the shore after turning dark.
There is no distinction between good and bad here; it’s all for the world. But at this mont, openness and sincerity, in a world full of liars and riddlers, bring a subtle warmth to the heart.
He gazed at the Redwood Box, his fingers slightly moving—
...
[About to enter the observation bifurcation point.]
[If the Observer does not wish to settle on this developnt direction’s "Narrative Anchor Point," please stop observing and wait for a new branch’s "mory Clip" to generate.]
[Observation settles the decision, please observe with caution.]
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