Chapter 277 The End
?You can read the free version of this chapter in auxiliary volu, where I ntion the book in very short.
Okay, the title says this chapter will end this book. I will talk about three things here:
1. Why this book is bland and confusing.
2. About how this book will end.
3. About the next plans of the book.
First of all, I'm really sorry for not uploading anything for a few months; it was my mistake. Which is I'm really sorry.
This was my first book, and if you read the book, you know there are spelling mistakes, the character's personality doesn't stay consistent, and so things appear out of nowhere and then disappear. There are so things that I promised to introduce, but I still haven't done it, and I add way too many characters that it's felt difficult to manage them, and then it's beco overwhelming.
So I took a break and decided to write another novel for a change of pace after I got exams. When I decided to return to writing the novel, I read the entire Unlimited Items Shop System. I understand the mistakes, the plot holes, and many unnecessary things I wrote in the novel.
After a few months, without the eyes of the author, I read the novel as a reader, and at first, it seed interesting, but as the story progressed, it got boring, and when you see plot holes and characters that are supposed to get tortured now beco evil, and na mistakes, and things that should happen but didn't was really confusing and boring.
Like Queen of Dark Rigel Kingdom. She was supposed to be getting tortured by the king because the Queen wanted to overthrow the king and beco a queen and start won's rule. However, I forgot that, and later in the novel, I wrote that Queen was evil and killed innocent people.
I didn't plan for Morimo, Island Conquering Ga, or X, the previous owner of the Unlimited Items Shop System.
I added them as novel progress, which was the biggest mistake. Because there was no plan, as the story progressed, I added more stories without covering past events, which made it even harder for to write a novel, and it beca boring and confusing.
In the beginning, the book is only about Ye Kai, the story protagonist, conquering his sister in laws, mother, and sisters. I had a plan for every single character, but in writing the novel, I got sidetracked and introduced things that destroyed the original story I had in my mind.
So, I decided to end this book.
As for how this book ended, it's a straightforward, generic ending. Ye Kai, the protagonist, wanted to build a castle with all his female harem mbers, but the Haremura Federation wanted to destroy the Island and Ye Kai.
With his system's help, Ye Kai defeated the Haremura Federation and built castles as he lived with his harem mbers.
Ye Kai sacrifices his lust system to build protection around the Island where he lives. The protection was powerful enough that no one could harm the Island but also restricted them. Ye Kai and others can't leave the Island, nor can anyone enter the Island.
Ye Kai and his harem mbers didn't mind this; they were okay with it. Ye Kai and all his harem mbers and friends got eternal life inside the protection of the Island; as such, they spent their lives in peaceful tis.
This is how the story is going to end. Also, Ye Kai saved his third and second mother; he also t his first mother and sisters, Ye Ning and Ye Shuang, and added them to his harem.
Now, that's how I planned the ending of this book, but there is a sequel.
If you read basic psychology, you know that the human mind gets bored with repetition or the sa things. So, Ye Kai and his harem mbers got bored with sex and living together.
It's not like they don't love each other anymore; they still love each other and are willing to stay together, but they also hope to see more unseen things and explore this world.
Ye Kai was also the sa; he was also bored with sex, and there were no other fun activities to do. He had a system to buy many videos, anis, and manga, but still, after hundreds of years, he would also get bored.
As such, he and his harem mbers decided to leave this peaceful Island and explore the outer world.
They encountered a tsunami and a hurricane when they went off the Island together. This made Ye Kai and all the Har mbers separated, and a black hole sucked them and sent them very far away from each other.
Ye Kai landed on an unfamiliar island. His system wasn't as overpowered as it was on the Island; he didn't have a clue where his harem mbers were and how they might be. So he began his journey of finding all his harem mbers.
At the end of the Unlimited Items Shop System Novel, Ye Kai had many harem mbers, but in squeal, I'm going to write, will only have 4 to 5 harem mbers. As for other females, they will be in squeal, but their role will be limited, and they will not be accompanying Ye Kai.
What to expect in squeal?
There is more action, a smart protagonist, more character developnt, less smut, the adventure of many different places, a quest to travel the world, and finding harem mbers. Also, Ye Kai has three daughters with no sexual relationship.
When will I upload it? Then It's today. I will start uploading, and the new book na will be Finding My Lovers in Vast World.
When I was on break, I had many ideas about weird traditions, cultures, and places.
The Squeal will be Ye Kai, getting stronger as he explores a different place with different traditions, cultures, festivals, and people.
He will also explore other races, like elves, beast people, cat people, dog people, a country of insects, and many different places, I thought, over the months.
Also, don't worry; this ti, I'm not going to add any sudden changes; I have a fully planned route for the novel but not detailed, leaving so flexibility. Also, this ti, I learned a lesson; without a proper plan to the end, I'm not going to introduce any new character or place.
Although only 4 or 5 harem mbers will accompany Ye Kai on his journey, Ye Kai will visit all different places to find all his harem mbers. It's just only four or five will stay with him until the end; while so choose to travel by themselves to see the world at their own pace, so might decide to stay in one place to learn new things, and so might die. I'm not sure about killing any harem mbers, and I might kill or not.
So, that's it is.
The Squeal of Unlimited Items Shop System, Finding My Lovers in Vast World. You can find this novel by searching it or checking my profile to see if it's appeared there.
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