The path of the Lustful demon Chapter 188: i want to be criticized

Hello readers, this is the author blue cloud.

As the author of this novel, i want to improve my self and the novel. The best way for it is to hear the opinion of you, readers.

If you could spend so of your ti to point out the things that i fall short at, i would be extrely grateful for you.

The more criticism that i get, the better i would beco at the future. So, i want you to criticize with everything you got.

I will put this chapter later in the axillary volu so it will not stay awkwardly in the fourth volu.